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    Daughter of a Criminal

    Story written on December 31, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=87867
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    Stella and the other girls gasped at this apology. The brunette looked down to the ground. Her mind spinning a thousand miles as she felt her whole self was being exposed to all the ridicule, all the teasing, all the accusation and punishment for something she had never done. And now… now her crush pitied her,

    Stella and the other girls gasped at this apology.

    The brunette looked down to the ground. Her mind spinning a thousand miles as she felt her whole self was being exposed to all the ridicule, all the teasing, all the accusation and punishment for something she had never done. And now… now her crush pitied her, looked down on her and probably thought the same of her. She knew what that apology meant, she knew. They were never meant to be, not even friends.

    She felt pain all over, physical pain, her heart shattered into a billion pieces, into ashes that left no chance to glue it back, her dignity lost, her last hope…

    And when Bette picked her eyes up again, Tina saw something terrifying, it froze her in her track and scared her to death. It was a stare cold to the soul.

    She had never seen someone’s eyes like that, dark with absolutely no light, as if their soul vanished. With desperation, she wanted to fix it, and at the same time she wanted to run away. “I’m really sorry, Bette… I can’t… you’re…”

    “The daughter of a criminal. I know.” The sentence that came out of those thin lips conveyed no emotion, like the stare. Bette gave the blonde one last glance and walked away, leaving a group of astonished girls trying to “console” Tina, poor, poor Tina.

    “I can’t… because you’re… a girl.” Tina watched the tall girl walk away. There was nothing she could do.

    “Come on sweetie, let’s get you home.” 

    “No! No, Stella. I’ll… drive myself.” Tina sat into her car and snapped close the door. She wanted to catch up with the brunette and do whatever it might take to make things right. But as she rushed out of the crowded parking place, she didn’t know where to go. She didn’t know anything about Bette, where she lived, where she went after school. She lost her…

     

    Walking, faster and faster until she was running, Bette could hear the brutality of this town in the howling wind. She took a turn and hid behind a dumpster, and she let all the tears made up of grievance and hurt run freely down her cheeks. A river of bitterness and hatred was formed. She wiped it away with some force. She wanted it to stop, she wanted to be strong, she told herself it was just a girl, just high school, but the tears just couldn’t stop. She lost track of how long she had been there crying until she spent her last drop of tear. Judging by the sky, it was late so she ran towards the trailer park that she had been living in for the past three years.

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    1. Author:

      Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.

      Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…

      Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*

      How do you like this story? TBC or no?

      • To be truthful, I don’t know!

        It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!

        Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?

        Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!

        How quickly TBC? So many questions!

        Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!

      • Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!

        The story comments…
        Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol

    3. Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…

      I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…

      And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…

    4. Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.

    7. Very good beginning, i am hooked.

      I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.

      My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.

      Please continue.

    8. My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
      Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
      held my atenção.Bette and Tina
      face to face after all this time, as will be
      Bette that will react?
      I love your stories and my favorite
      is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
      a masterpiece.
      10 Stars.

    9. I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
      It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
      I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
      I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!

    11. thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
      i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
      :)

    12. Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
      No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
      Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…

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