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Daughter of a Criminal
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“Is it true about her father and everything they’ve been telling you?”
“She said it herself, that she’s a criminal’s daughter.” Tina took a deep breath in and out. “I’m really worried about her. But I just… I couldn’t.”
“Tina, you can’t blame yourself for this, ok? You have your reasons. People talk and they judge. It’s not like you can just let her into your life, especially when your dad is a police officer himself. You’re in a difficult position and you did what you knew was best. I mean… this is not on you. She wanted something more than friends and you aren’t up for it. It’s not your fault.”
But whatever Dana told her, it didn’t make her feel any better. She sighed heavily and kept silent for a while.
“Oh my god Tina!” Suddenly Dana raised her voice on the other side of the phone. “You like her! You fell for her, didn’t you?”
“Dana—” She clenched at her phone, and peeped around. She was scared that people would hear her friend somehow. It was something she was unwilling to risk. “I didn’t fall for her! I’m not…”
“Gay, Tina, say the word.” Dana had to roll her eyes at her friend. “Jesus I can’t believe you interrogated me for so long when I came out to you while you’re a big ole lesbo yourself!”
“Dana! I am not!” Tina was really nervous by now.
“Oh would you just relax?”
“I can’t when you’re saying stuff…” Biting her own lower lip, the blonde rolled her eyes. Dana’s attempt at cheering her up was of little use. She hung up a bit after and felt the dread in the pit of her stomach that something was going seriously wrong…
And it did. Bette Porter vanished, from their school, from the town, from her life.
Kids went on picking another poor soul as the victim of their cruelty, people went on discussing other unfortunate news. But the image of a lonely brunette girl permanently lodged in Tina’s memory.
NOWADAYS
Lieutenant Kroll of the Intelligent Department was flipping through the personnel files and Sergeant Sweeney was by her side.
“I really think Officer Kennard is the perfect candidate for this mission, Lieutenant.”
“She is a rookie, Max! She just joined the force a year ago.” Kroll shook her head in conviction. “No, I can’t let a baby take on this one. I need someone with experience.”
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…