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I lay on the cold hospital bed as I hear this loud beeping ringing my ears. All these wires all over my body, and the needle sticking out from my arm. I feel the aches and pain going through my body. I want all of this to go away, the throbbing pain pulsating through my head as I lay her motionless. I felt my body tense up as the beeping got louder next to me. What is happening? Why is my body so cold, but I’m covered in sweat? I’m getting scared. I want to wake up, but my eyelids won’t open. I hear the door open and voices. I’m really scared as I feel them move my bed out of the room. I can hear everything around me, but I can’t see a thing.
I hear more yelling as they try to calm my heart rate, but it keeps racing higher and higher. Is this my time? Is it really my time of dying? I’m not ready to die. I haven’t finished my life. I have so much to achieve, but my body hurts more and more as I lie here on this bed. I feel them touching my body. What are they doing? I feel another stinging pain in my arm, what are they doing to me? I want this to be over, I want this to end, but how can I stop it? God, please let me get this pain. I don’t want to leave my friends and family behind. I don’t want to leave…Alice. Alice. Alice. Where is Alice? She isn’t by my side, where can she be? Oh my God, why isn’t she here next to me, whispering to me everything’s going to be okay. Why isn’t she caressing my hand, kissing my skin, telling me that she’s right here, and she’ll never leave my side? Everything is getting so cold around me. I don’t like what I see. My life is beginning to flash before my eyes. I want someone to wake me up, I don’t want this.
On the ground I lay
Motionless in pain
I can see my life flashing before my eyes
Did I fall asleep?
Is this all a dream
Wake me up, I’m living a nightmare
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You so just made me cry. That is so evil. I love this story
AKcb, your disclaimer was also my sentiment precisely. Another new story? Beautifully written. Salute!
I have to admit, I do not usually read a lot of Dana and Alice fics, not because I don’t love the characters, but because Bette and Tina are my favorite couple and I have a ton going on, so I can only read so much. I’m not sure what prompted me to come in here and read this, but I am blinking back tears as I write this comment. I have to say, I was very angry that IC had killed Dana off, it didn’t have to be that way. I suppose, in a way, she made the statement she wanted to make because even a year + after we are all still angry and talking about it. The way you conveyed Dana dying and then coming back, the sheer emotions, just brilliant! I thank you do this post, it touched my heart!
this is what should have happened………
yay u posted! well I really like this interpretation..I’m sure all TLW fans would’ve wanted this version to have happened on the show! So many “if only(s)..” thanks for this..you should write one for sharmen too..another interpretation of the weddin or non-weddin or post-weddin fiasco..
fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, an immense pleasure to read your writing Akira. Keep up the brilliant work! ; – )
I hate that they killed her off too, it would’ve been amazing if she survived. Thanks for this Akira, I hope to see you post again soon. :D