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I look back into the room and notice that there was a heart rate. Is this really happening? Is this a dream? The doctor just told me that she had died. But she’s not dead. She’s breathing once again. She’s fighting. I couldn’t help but smile when I see that her eyes were open and to see her chest heaving up and down. My best friend is still on this earth. Thank you God for letting my friend stay and to live her life. I want to run into the room and wrap my arms around her. I want to kiss her and hold her in my arms. I never ever want to leave her side again. The doctor looks at me and smiles.
“I guess, she’s a fighter.” I look at him and smile faintly.
“Can I see her?” He nodded, and I walk towards the room. I stand in the doorway and look at my friend. The doctors begin to walk out of the room as I continue to stand there. I wipe the tears from my cheeks as I slowly made a step in the room. I take a deep breath as I see Dana slowly making eye contact with me. I smile harder, and the tears came again, but in happiness. I walk over to Dana’s bed side and grab her hand. I give her a small kiss on her skin.
I know that touch from anywhere. It’s Alice. She’s at my side. I can feel her breath on my skin. I swallow hard as I slowly turn my head towards Alice’s direction. I can see the tears running down her cheeks. A smile is across her lips as she kisses my hand. I lick my dry lips and begin to speak softly.
“W-where did you go?”
“I’m so sorry Dana. I’m sorry that I left your side. I’m so sorry.”
“I-it’s okay.” I cleared my throat as Alice stares into my eyes. I felt warmness going throughout my body. I’m beginning to feel like myself again. “I-I’m not…going anywhere.”
“I thought I lost you.”
“A-all I did…was think of you. Y-you kept me…alive.” Alice cries harder and leans forward. She kisses my lips softly and rests her head against mine.
“I love you.”
“I-I love you…too.”
I will not die, I’ll wait here for you
I feel alive, when you’re beside me
I will not die, I’ll wait here for you
In my time of dying
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You so just made me cry. That is so evil. I love this story
AKcb, your disclaimer was also my sentiment precisely. Another new story? Beautifully written. Salute!
I have to admit, I do not usually read a lot of Dana and Alice fics, not because I don’t love the characters, but because Bette and Tina are my favorite couple and I have a ton going on, so I can only read so much. I’m not sure what prompted me to come in here and read this, but I am blinking back tears as I write this comment. I have to say, I was very angry that IC had killed Dana off, it didn’t have to be that way. I suppose, in a way, she made the statement she wanted to make because even a year + after we are all still angry and talking about it. The way you conveyed Dana dying and then coming back, the sheer emotions, just brilliant! I thank you do this post, it touched my heart!
this is what should have happened………
yay u posted! well I really like this interpretation..I’m sure all TLW fans would’ve wanted this version to have happened on the show! So many “if only(s)..” thanks for this..you should write one for sharmen too..another interpretation of the weddin or non-weddin or post-weddin fiasco..
fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, an immense pleasure to read your writing Akira. Keep up the brilliant work! ; – )
I hate that they killed her off too, it would’ve been amazing if she survived. Thanks for this Akira, I hope to see you post again soon. :D