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A brief encounter
Inside the room, Jody let’s her eyes swirl around the room, seeing if she find out more about this intriguing dark haired woman. She sees a suitcase, some shoes and a laptop, not much stuff to find out more. She also notices that the housekeeping has been to do a turn down service, a chocolate is lying on the pillow and the sheets have been opened at the top. She quickly takes her eyes from it, she doesn’t want Bette to see her staring at the bed. Bette has walked to the mini bar to look for glasses, she wants to give Jody a chance to get used to the situation so she tries to pour the drinks with a casual manner. She gives Jody a glass and she raises her glass to toast. Their glasses touch “ To our acquaintance” Bette says with her eyes looking deep in Jody’s. “Yes” is all Jody can reply and she brings the glass to her lips. Bette’s brain registers the softness of them as she brings her glass to her mouth. The warmth of the drink fills her mouth while she sees Jody swallow.
“I like the view from here.” Bette says and she walks slowly to the window. She wants to comfort Jody, she doesn’t want to rush her because by now she knows this is a new experience for her. Jody follows her and they both look outside sipping their drink. “It has stopped raining, thank god.” Jody says, she needs to say something, she feels the air getting thick between them and she wants Bette to focus on something else then her for a moment. “Yes, finally. I thought it would never stop.” Bette answers back. “You need to go outside for a location again tomorrow?” Bette asks. “Yes, I do. I hope the weather will be better then. I don’t want to get soaked again like today.” “I think you look good even when you are soaked.” Bette says softly and seductively. Jody doesn’t know what to say, she just stares into Bette’s eyes. Then Bette puts down her glass and slowly takes Jody’s out of her hands. Jody is almost hypnotized by Bette’s eyes but she knows what will happen now. Bette takes Jody’s hand and pulls her closer, Jody is not resisting so Bette knows it is okay.
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(40 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
I loved this story, totally did not suspect it was Tina……….Hope you will continue with this story.
I almost stopped reading this story because you know I am a Tibetter. I went to the last page and read that Tina had given a fake name so I was able to go back and read the rest of the story. I am glad that I did. This was an awesome story. I hope that we will continue to see more chapters of you ongoing stories and new short stories.
Damn that was hot, glad that was Tina and not Jodi. Anyway love it and thank you!
Brilliant; you almost had me liking Jody! Tease
I don’t know why, but i just knew it!… Okay, there was this little hint about “Jodi”‘s guilt when she said her name… Or couldn’t it be simply because a good author is able to transcribe their unique chemistry into fanfic?…
Hey B Gal, That was an awesome short story but I do believe that Bette should now try to find Tina. These gals cannot stop at one night of passion. Their love and desire demands further investigation. Please continue this fabulous fiction soon. It was breathtaking. I loved it. Many thanks for returning to hte fold. Your Loyal Fan.
This was great!! You know you can’t leave it hanging like this…Bette’s gotta find Tina.
great, great job, luved this story!!
I knew it was Tina when she saw a hint of guilt in her eyes. I am positive that these two ladies will run into each other when they get back to L.A..
oh, that was just mean to trick us like that. I was all into it and then I ready Jody and I was like, Huh. KNew it though. Well is Bette gonna go after her or what?
Djeezes christ Bonaire girl, you like the slowburn huh. What a build-up….you were truly missed girl. Hey and you are leaving an open end, great…please don’t stop with this one chapter, it’s good, in fact it’s excellent. Het ga je goed meid en goeie reis binnenkort, je gaat de tijd van je leven tegemoet. Ik wens jullie het allerallerbeste.
Thanks pattifloatn, after reading your comment, I went back and read the rest of the story. I stopped once I saw Jodys name.Bonaire you are so bad.
Wow…totally didn’t suspect…more…Please!
hey BG nice short story. If it is partially true since it comes from your own experience, i envy you!