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A brief encounter
When they enter the restaurant, the waiter welcomes them and brings them to a small table. He offers them the menu card and asks if they would like a drink. “ Do you drink wine?” Bette asks the woman. “Yes, I do.” “Shall we share a bottle? Red or white, you choose.” Bette says to make the woman choose, she doesn’t want to make the woman feel as if Bette is totally in control. The woman chooses a red one and then Bette realizes that she doesn’t know her name. “My name is Bette, by the way.” She says with her famous Bette smile. “ Oh yes sorry, I haven’t introduced myself yet, my name is Jody.” The woman says with a smile. She raises her wine glass and they toast. Bette looks at the woman’s eyes while she says her name and it looks like she sees a glance of guilt in them but that is only briefly. “ You want a three course meal or just a main course?” Bette asks. “ I will have a starter and a main course, I sometimes go to Café Colombia in Burbank, I want to see if the house specialty is sort of authentic.” Jody answer. “Okay, I will join you in your choice, I am not such an expert in Colombian cuisine.” Bette replies and she closes her menu card as a hint to Jody that she was leaving it all up to her.
This gives Bette the time to observe her a bit more; Jody’s hair was sort of blond at shoulder length. Her hands were well manicured, slim fingers, nails not long but well kept. She wears a single ring with a brown stone. The stone fits well with her eyes and then she sees that she also wears a necklace with the same stone. Probably a gift, Bette thought from her parents or lover. She doesn’t see a wedding ring, but nowadays that doesn’t mean anything. She is wearing a long sleeved shirt with a v-shaped neck, the color was lilac which fits well with her hair. And she wears some sporty dark blue trousers, a bit tight on her thighs which shows that she is a jogger or doing some kind of sports. Bette likes her appearance, the more she looks at her, the more intrigued she gets. “You like this dish?” she hears Jody asking, but she had not been listening so she had to improvise. “ Well, like I said, I will leave it up to you, you are the expert in Colombian cuisine.” She says with a smile. Jody smiles back, feeling a bit insecure, she has felt Bette’s eyes on her while she checked the menu card.
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(40 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
I loved this story, totally did not suspect it was Tina……….Hope you will continue with this story.
I almost stopped reading this story because you know I am a Tibetter. I went to the last page and read that Tina had given a fake name so I was able to go back and read the rest of the story. I am glad that I did. This was an awesome story. I hope that we will continue to see more chapters of you ongoing stories and new short stories.
Damn that was hot, glad that was Tina and not Jodi. Anyway love it and thank you!
Brilliant; you almost had me liking Jody! Tease
I don’t know why, but i just knew it!… Okay, there was this little hint about “Jodi”‘s guilt when she said her name… Or couldn’t it be simply because a good author is able to transcribe their unique chemistry into fanfic?…
Hey B Gal, That was an awesome short story but I do believe that Bette should now try to find Tina. These gals cannot stop at one night of passion. Their love and desire demands further investigation. Please continue this fabulous fiction soon. It was breathtaking. I loved it. Many thanks for returning to hte fold. Your Loyal Fan.
This was great!! You know you can’t leave it hanging like this…Bette’s gotta find Tina.
great, great job, luved this story!!
I knew it was Tina when she saw a hint of guilt in her eyes. I am positive that these two ladies will run into each other when they get back to L.A..
oh, that was just mean to trick us like that. I was all into it and then I ready Jody and I was like, Huh. KNew it though. Well is Bette gonna go after her or what?
Djeezes christ Bonaire girl, you like the slowburn huh. What a build-up….you were truly missed girl. Hey and you are leaving an open end, great…please don’t stop with this one chapter, it’s good, in fact it’s excellent. Het ga je goed meid en goeie reis binnenkort, je gaat de tijd van je leven tegemoet. Ik wens jullie het allerallerbeste.
Thanks pattifloatn, after reading your comment, I went back and read the rest of the story. I stopped once I saw Jodys name.Bonaire you are so bad.
Wow…totally didn’t suspect…more…Please!
hey BG nice short story. If it is partially true since it comes from your own experience, i envy you!