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A brief encounter
“Would you like a coffee?” Bette asks with a Bette smile on her face. “ Yes, a nice Colombian coffee, good idea.” Jody replies with a small smile. Bette puts her hand lightly on Jody’s arm, to test her, before she continues softly “Let’s have it in the bar, the ambiance there is nicer to enjoy the coffee with a nice liquor.” Jody pretends she doesn’t notice the hand or at least she is not giving any reaction on her face about it. “Yes, I agree. So shall we go?” Jody pushes her chair back to stand up, she needs to turn her face away quickly from Bette otherwise the blush on her cheeks will be seen by Bette. Bette follows Jody again and again her eyes are drawn to her backside and a small but sensual smile appears on Bette’s face.
Fortunately, it has quiet down a bit in the bar, so they can sit at a table with some nice armchairs. For Bette, the chairs are a bit too big because it forces her a bit too far away from Jody. They order their coffees and liquors and relax back in the chairs. Bette wants to know more about this lady, she likes to play a game but not if it would make this woman ashamed of herself in the end. “So tell me Jody, do you often travel alone? I hate to travel alone and spend nights in hotels.” Bette asks and explains. “Uh no, luckily not. I don’t like to be away from home too much.” Bette raises her eye brows in a curious look “ I presume you don’t like to leave your family alone, I mean husband and child or children?” Bette knows, she is not very subtle but she does realize time is ticking away and she is not finished with her game yet. Jody laughs a bit “Oh no, no husband and kids for me, not yet at least. I am sort of a late one, I have a lover but our relationship has been going sort of on-off. Mostly my fault, I can not decide if he is the one or not. When I am with him, it feels good, but when I am not, I don’t always miss him. And to be honest, the idea to commit to one person for the rest of my life, scares me a bit.” Bette is surprised by this very open answer of Jody. She only knows this woman for a few hours and in those hours she has been mainly reserved. It seems that Jody has noticed it herself, she quickly leans forward to her cup to stir in the coffee, as if she doesn’t know what to do with her posture after this open and honest answer.
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(40 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
I loved this story, totally did not suspect it was Tina……….Hope you will continue with this story.
I almost stopped reading this story because you know I am a Tibetter. I went to the last page and read that Tina had given a fake name so I was able to go back and read the rest of the story. I am glad that I did. This was an awesome story. I hope that we will continue to see more chapters of you ongoing stories and new short stories.
Damn that was hot, glad that was Tina and not Jodi. Anyway love it and thank you!
Brilliant; you almost had me liking Jody! Tease
I don’t know why, but i just knew it!… Okay, there was this little hint about “Jodi”‘s guilt when she said her name… Or couldn’t it be simply because a good author is able to transcribe their unique chemistry into fanfic?…
Hey B Gal, That was an awesome short story but I do believe that Bette should now try to find Tina. These gals cannot stop at one night of passion. Their love and desire demands further investigation. Please continue this fabulous fiction soon. It was breathtaking. I loved it. Many thanks for returning to hte fold. Your Loyal Fan.
This was great!! You know you can’t leave it hanging like this…Bette’s gotta find Tina.
great, great job, luved this story!!
I knew it was Tina when she saw a hint of guilt in her eyes. I am positive that these two ladies will run into each other when they get back to L.A..
oh, that was just mean to trick us like that. I was all into it and then I ready Jody and I was like, Huh. KNew it though. Well is Bette gonna go after her or what?
Djeezes christ Bonaire girl, you like the slowburn huh. What a build-up….you were truly missed girl. Hey and you are leaving an open end, great…please don’t stop with this one chapter, it’s good, in fact it’s excellent. Het ga je goed meid en goeie reis binnenkort, je gaat de tijd van je leven tegemoet. Ik wens jullie het allerallerbeste.
Thanks pattifloatn, after reading your comment, I went back and read the rest of the story. I stopped once I saw Jodys name.Bonaire you are so bad.
Wow…totally didn’t suspect…more…Please!
hey BG nice short story. If it is partially true since it comes from your own experience, i envy you!