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A Choice is Made Chapter 16
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Tina: I’m off for the rest of this week, but will need to go in the first couple of days next week to finish a couple of contracts by the end of the year.
Bette: That’s not a problem T, we have plenty of time and I’ll have a chance to spend some time with the Kit and the girls.
Tina: OK, I just wanted you know my schedule. I’m really glad you suggested this; I really need a bit of a break and there is no one I’d rather get away with than you baby.
Bette: I feel the same way T. I just want some time with you before things get hectic and I want to be able to appreciate California in December. New York is magical for the holidays, but it is cold.
Tina: Wow, this place is gorgeous. I can’t believe we never thought to come here before.
Bette: Well, now we have so let’s enjoy.
The bell man is there to greet them and help with their luggage. Bette self parks the car while Tina handles check in. Check in is a breeze and Tina is ready with keys by the time Bette breezes into the lobby. Tina drinks her in and just smiles: long leather coat, jeans, mid heeled boots and a silk sweater. She notices a few heads turn as Bette enters and once again has to laugh; Bette is focused solely on Tina and hasn’t a clue that she just became the main attraction in the lobby. The join hands and head up to the room.
Bette: Oh this is lovely. The view is fantastic seeing both the bay and the city view will be great at night.
Tina comes up behind Bette on the balcony and embraces her.
Tina: Well, I booked a King bed this time. I hope that’s alright?
Turns in Tina’s embrace
Bette: Well that was rather brazen of you. Do you plan to ravish me or something?
Tina: Repeatedly if allowed.
The ladies finally connect in the smoltering kiss they’d both been dreaming of for nearly a month. They ease back into the bedroom and fall onto the bed, Bette on top. Hands are hair, sliding under clothing and finally a jean button is undone. However, there is a knock at the door; the luggage has arrived.
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Awesome post! They need a healing and the way back together is not smooth. Very realistic. PPS
I love this honnest conversations. This is a great story ! ! !
Hard to see them crying but it is the way to heal an fight their demons. Tina needs to constantly show her love to Bette as that might help Bette gain her trust in Tina’s love back.
oooops haven’t finished yet (pmsl). great post and sooooo realistic. PPVS
Wondered when and if that would happen. Glad it is now out in the open and dealt with. Tina doesn’t need the perfect gift for Bette, just the love and faith to Bette that she is her forever love, and no one else. Tina just needs to woo Bette and her way back into Bette’s heart. Wonderful post. Thanks for posting.
I loved it Lwsho! You know, I don’t think it is a matter of Bette “forgiving” Tina, I think that she already has. Bette has to learn to trust Tina again as Tina had to learn to trust Bette again after her indescretion. Neither of them are perfect or without fault in the demise of their relationship and they both know it. I think what they are doing, the talking, not running away, meeting everything head on is the way they both will find their way back to each other. This is Bette and Tina “earning” each other’s trust again. Waiting for the next post again!
This is my first time making comments on your story, thanks for your fanfic, I like it because it shows more understanding on Bette’s feelings and behaviours. A unique empathetic view for Bette and it is different from many other fanfics.
WOW!!! Tina has some work to do. I am glad Bette and Tina are talking about Bette’s fear. Now Tina Woo your woman. Thank you Great Chapter!!!!
at least no one ran… they talked it out no matter how painful it was… and buying the “PERFECT” gift is not the answer… bette needs to feel her love… no “GIFT” will show her that… tina has the heart to give her… thats what bette wants… great job… pps
Brilliant update. Can’t wait to see how Tina woo’s Bette. Thank you :)
Tina does have her work cut out for her. Bette’s nightmares are very painful. Tina needs to convince Bette that she is not using her and going to leave her again. AWESOME post.
Wow, they still have a lot to wrk through. Yeah Tina needs to step up her game. But Bette has to forgive on her own and know that she is enough.
well this story is so great and your writing style is so good that as I am reading it I can visualize each scene. Tina so has her work cut out for her but at least they are talking and no one is running away.Thank your for another GREAT chapter!!! and please post real soon.
Of course it’s for you socal…our girls deserved some Southern California loving too. Hope to next chapter tonight! That might be it for the week.
I feel so loved, thank you! LOL! Can’t wait for the fun stuff – San Diego rocks!
Is this chapter for me? LOL!
PLZZZZZ Post tomorrow. what happened next. U R DOING AWESOME RIGHT NOW. Star writer at the moment. And give Tina her Bette back soon. I cant see Tina crying too. Thats correct Ur stories make me visualize things too.
Great chapter. I don’t like it when Bette has to suffer but it were more than unrealistic if there were only a smooth path back. In moments like this where Bette can’t cover her feelings or even try to only show a bearable part of the pain she felt will bring them forward more quickly to fully trust each other and get over the hurt. PPS Thanks
That was amazing !