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A Choice is Made Chapter 16
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Bette: You might want to get that.
Tina: Yea, guess I should.
Bette: I’m going to take a shower, its been a long day.
Tina answers the door while Bette heads to the bathroom and starts the shower. Tina tips the bellman and sends him on his way. Though Bette and Tina had made love a number of times since reconciling, they had not shared a shower. Tina wondered if she should join Bette or just let her have the private time. She decides to take the risk and reaches for the knob. She pokes her head in and sees Bette is already in the shower.
Tina: Can I join you?
Bette: I’ve been waiting for you.
In the shower the ladies actually bathe each other, wash their hair and share some very intimate kisses. They don’t have sex, but each knew the tension was there and building. Bette had a plan and wanted to be patient. They step out of the shower and towel each other off. Bette leads them out of the bathroom and turns down the bed.
Bette: T, lay down on your stomach.
Tina obliges and Bette places a bolster pillow under her ankles. Bette goes to her luggage to get something and comes back to the bed. She had some massage oils and creams she had gotten from Bliss during her spa visit there using Tina’s gift. Kit had slipped her couple of aromatherapy candles at the airport and she tuned the Bose radio to a local jazz station. She turned off all the other lights in the room, but allowed the breeze to permeate the room off the balcony.
Bette: I promised you a massage so just lay here and enjoy.
Bette straddles Tina and kneals over her behind. Tina initially jumps at the contact, but then relaxes as she feels Bette’s soft strong hands lightly graze her back. Bette started on Tina’s neck, kneading and stretching, then worked on the shoulder area, moving lower she worked the upper back, first left then right. Since she wasn’t a pro she took liberties using both the massage oil and her wet kiss residue to moisten Tina’s back. She worked lowers spending a lot of time on Tina’s lower back and upper buttocks; making sure to very liberal with her kisses in those areas. Finally knowing her lover had been doing a lot of running lately Bette took extreme care on Tina’s legs, starting with rotating, stretching and finally massaging them. She hit some tender spots and worked through them gently. Tina winced and sighed as Bette worked her magic. Bette laid out full over Tina and gave her a full body hug finally whispering.
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Awesome post! They need a healing and the way back together is not smooth. Very realistic. PPS
I love this honnest conversations. This is a great story ! ! !
Hard to see them crying but it is the way to heal an fight their demons. Tina needs to constantly show her love to Bette as that might help Bette gain her trust in Tina’s love back.
oooops haven’t finished yet (pmsl). great post and sooooo realistic. PPVS
Wondered when and if that would happen. Glad it is now out in the open and dealt with. Tina doesn’t need the perfect gift for Bette, just the love and faith to Bette that she is her forever love, and no one else. Tina just needs to woo Bette and her way back into Bette’s heart. Wonderful post. Thanks for posting.
I loved it Lwsho! You know, I don’t think it is a matter of Bette “forgiving” Tina, I think that she already has. Bette has to learn to trust Tina again as Tina had to learn to trust Bette again after her indescretion. Neither of them are perfect or without fault in the demise of their relationship and they both know it. I think what they are doing, the talking, not running away, meeting everything head on is the way they both will find their way back to each other. This is Bette and Tina “earning” each other’s trust again. Waiting for the next post again!
This is my first time making comments on your story, thanks for your fanfic, I like it because it shows more understanding on Bette’s feelings and behaviours. A unique empathetic view for Bette and it is different from many other fanfics.
WOW!!! Tina has some work to do. I am glad Bette and Tina are talking about Bette’s fear. Now Tina Woo your woman. Thank you Great Chapter!!!!
at least no one ran… they talked it out no matter how painful it was… and buying the “PERFECT” gift is not the answer… bette needs to feel her love… no “GIFT” will show her that… tina has the heart to give her… thats what bette wants… great job… pps
Brilliant update. Can’t wait to see how Tina woo’s Bette. Thank you :)
Tina does have her work cut out for her. Bette’s nightmares are very painful. Tina needs to convince Bette that she is not using her and going to leave her again. AWESOME post.
Wow, they still have a lot to wrk through. Yeah Tina needs to step up her game. But Bette has to forgive on her own and know that she is enough.
well this story is so great and your writing style is so good that as I am reading it I can visualize each scene. Tina so has her work cut out for her but at least they are talking and no one is running away.Thank your for another GREAT chapter!!! and please post real soon.
Of course it’s for you socal…our girls deserved some Southern California loving too. Hope to next chapter tonight! That might be it for the week.
I feel so loved, thank you! LOL! Can’t wait for the fun stuff – San Diego rocks!
Is this chapter for me? LOL!
PLZZZZZ Post tomorrow. what happened next. U R DOING AWESOME RIGHT NOW. Star writer at the moment. And give Tina her Bette back soon. I cant see Tina crying too. Thats correct Ur stories make me visualize things too.
Great chapter. I don’t like it when Bette has to suffer but it were more than unrealistic if there were only a smooth path back. In moments like this where Bette can’t cover her feelings or even try to only show a bearable part of the pain she felt will bring them forward more quickly to fully trust each other and get over the hurt. PPS Thanks
That was amazing !