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A Choice is Made Chapter 16
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For the first time in since their reconciliation, Bette doubted Tina’s sincerity. Thoughts of if I am so amazing why didn’t you want me? Why did you go off and have a man? Why did you bring him into our home? Crept into Bette’s mind. She didn’t get to dwell on them as Tina had begun her long slow process of making love to Bette making sure Bette experienced the amazing sensations that had just coursed her body. Bette opened herself to Tina and allowed those good feelings to return; pushing the demons back in her mind. The rest of their love making session was primarily Tina focusing on Bette; almost as if she could sense that Bette had pulled away and she was trying to keep her near. Finally the lovers could take nor give anymore and sleep overtook them. Tina was surprisingly the first to wake.
She decided to use the in room coffee maker to brew the Starbucks that was in the room. That started she sensed Bette wouldn’t wake up right away and decided to jump in the shower first. As she dried off from the shower she heard Bette’s cries and rushed back into the bedroom
Bette: T, don’t leave me baby, I need you. I can do better, you don’t need him. I love you baby. Why T? Why? Bette was wailing and thrashing about in a bad dream. Tina was momentarily stunned. She had not witnessed the depths of despair Bette had to feel with she delivered those blows so many months ago. For the first time since their reconciliation, Tina was losing hope that they could indeed return to forever; she was devastated by Bette’s pain and knew she was solely to blame for the pain and doubt left in Bette. She finally shakes off her stupor and rushes to Bette’s side to calm her.
Tina: I’m here baby, I’m right here. I’m not leaving you. I was a fool once; a cruel fool, but I’ll never ever do that again. I love you Bette, please know that I love you; I’ve always loved you.
Now both women were crying. Bette from her dream and Tina from the despair she’d witnessed and fear the Bette wasn’t fully hers again and may never be. Both women held the other and let their tears fall. Finally Tina gathers enough courage to ask Bette about the dream.
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Awesome post! They need a healing and the way back together is not smooth. Very realistic. PPS
I love this honnest conversations. This is a great story ! ! !
Hard to see them crying but it is the way to heal an fight their demons. Tina needs to constantly show her love to Bette as that might help Bette gain her trust in Tina’s love back.
oooops haven’t finished yet (pmsl). great post and sooooo realistic. PPVS
Wondered when and if that would happen. Glad it is now out in the open and dealt with. Tina doesn’t need the perfect gift for Bette, just the love and faith to Bette that she is her forever love, and no one else. Tina just needs to woo Bette and her way back into Bette’s heart. Wonderful post. Thanks for posting.
I loved it Lwsho! You know, I don’t think it is a matter of Bette “forgiving” Tina, I think that she already has. Bette has to learn to trust Tina again as Tina had to learn to trust Bette again after her indescretion. Neither of them are perfect or without fault in the demise of their relationship and they both know it. I think what they are doing, the talking, not running away, meeting everything head on is the way they both will find their way back to each other. This is Bette and Tina “earning” each other’s trust again. Waiting for the next post again!
This is my first time making comments on your story, thanks for your fanfic, I like it because it shows more understanding on Bette’s feelings and behaviours. A unique empathetic view for Bette and it is different from many other fanfics.
WOW!!! Tina has some work to do. I am glad Bette and Tina are talking about Bette’s fear. Now Tina Woo your woman. Thank you Great Chapter!!!!
at least no one ran… they talked it out no matter how painful it was… and buying the “PERFECT” gift is not the answer… bette needs to feel her love… no “GIFT” will show her that… tina has the heart to give her… thats what bette wants… great job… pps
Brilliant update. Can’t wait to see how Tina woo’s Bette. Thank you :)
Tina does have her work cut out for her. Bette’s nightmares are very painful. Tina needs to convince Bette that she is not using her and going to leave her again. AWESOME post.
Wow, they still have a lot to wrk through. Yeah Tina needs to step up her game. But Bette has to forgive on her own and know that she is enough.
well this story is so great and your writing style is so good that as I am reading it I can visualize each scene. Tina so has her work cut out for her but at least they are talking and no one is running away.Thank your for another GREAT chapter!!! and please post real soon.
Of course it’s for you socal…our girls deserved some Southern California loving too. Hope to next chapter tonight! That might be it for the week.
I feel so loved, thank you! LOL! Can’t wait for the fun stuff – San Diego rocks!
Is this chapter for me? LOL!
PLZZZZZ Post tomorrow. what happened next. U R DOING AWESOME RIGHT NOW. Star writer at the moment. And give Tina her Bette back soon. I cant see Tina crying too. Thats correct Ur stories make me visualize things too.
Great chapter. I don’t like it when Bette has to suffer but it were more than unrealistic if there were only a smooth path back. In moments like this where Bette can’t cover her feelings or even try to only show a bearable part of the pain she felt will bring them forward more quickly to fully trust each other and get over the hurt. PPS Thanks
That was amazing !