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A Choice is Made Chapter 16
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Tina: Baby, when did these dreams start Bette? Why didn’t you mention them to me before?
Bette: They started after I saw the condom wrappers, but I haven’t had one since a few months after I got to New York.
Tina: Oh baby I’m so sorry. I never should have treated you that way. I am so sorry I was so wrong to say those things to you share my body and our home with another. If there was a way to erase it I would do it. Please don’t leave me; I need you baby. I needed you then, but I didn’t know how to ask. I am begging you now; don’t leave me Bette; please.
Bette: You said something last night that triggered some doubt. I pushed it back at the time as we were making love, but I think your comment coupled with the anxiety of being back in California and know that I will be back in the house soon triggered my doubts. You said “It is always amazing with you.”
Tina: Making love with you Bette is utterly amazing, always.
Bette: That can’t be true Tina. I was right there by your side, in your bed and you denied me time and time again you denied me. Then in that very same bed you tell me you want someone who is not me. Finally you go get him and show me what a stud he is. I couldn’t have been so amazing if you needed someone else.
Tina starts to cry again. Bette’s recollection if perfectly accurate and now Tina feels the daggers that she had so cavalierly tossed at Bette. Now she wonders if the hurdle before them wasn’t indeed too great. Those were her words. Her deeds. Her choices. Bette was judging her fairly and asking the most rational of questions.
Tina: You are that amazing and I didn’t need someone else. I needed you and was too stubborn and stupid to admit it. I needed you then and I need you now. We have been moving so fast in our reconciliation I can see now that we’ve missed this; probably didn’t want to admit to the pain I’ve caused. I am so sorry to cause you this pain Bette and apologize for expecting a fairytale holiday. I now understand why staying with Kit was your plan. I don’t deserve to have you home just yet. Do you think you can at least come in the morning and be there for Angelica? Do you just want to have Christmas morning at Kit’s instead?
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Awesome post! They need a healing and the way back together is not smooth. Very realistic. PPS
I love this honnest conversations. This is a great story ! ! !
Hard to see them crying but it is the way to heal an fight their demons. Tina needs to constantly show her love to Bette as that might help Bette gain her trust in Tina’s love back.
oooops haven’t finished yet (pmsl). great post and sooooo realistic. PPVS
Wondered when and if that would happen. Glad it is now out in the open and dealt with. Tina doesn’t need the perfect gift for Bette, just the love and faith to Bette that she is her forever love, and no one else. Tina just needs to woo Bette and her way back into Bette’s heart. Wonderful post. Thanks for posting.
I loved it Lwsho! You know, I don’t think it is a matter of Bette “forgiving” Tina, I think that she already has. Bette has to learn to trust Tina again as Tina had to learn to trust Bette again after her indescretion. Neither of them are perfect or without fault in the demise of their relationship and they both know it. I think what they are doing, the talking, not running away, meeting everything head on is the way they both will find their way back to each other. This is Bette and Tina “earning” each other’s trust again. Waiting for the next post again!
This is my first time making comments on your story, thanks for your fanfic, I like it because it shows more understanding on Bette’s feelings and behaviours. A unique empathetic view for Bette and it is different from many other fanfics.
WOW!!! Tina has some work to do. I am glad Bette and Tina are talking about Bette’s fear. Now Tina Woo your woman. Thank you Great Chapter!!!!
at least no one ran… they talked it out no matter how painful it was… and buying the “PERFECT” gift is not the answer… bette needs to feel her love… no “GIFT” will show her that… tina has the heart to give her… thats what bette wants… great job… pps
Brilliant update. Can’t wait to see how Tina woo’s Bette. Thank you :)
Tina does have her work cut out for her. Bette’s nightmares are very painful. Tina needs to convince Bette that she is not using her and going to leave her again. AWESOME post.
Wow, they still have a lot to wrk through. Yeah Tina needs to step up her game. But Bette has to forgive on her own and know that she is enough.
well this story is so great and your writing style is so good that as I am reading it I can visualize each scene. Tina so has her work cut out for her but at least they are talking and no one is running away.Thank your for another GREAT chapter!!! and please post real soon.
Of course it’s for you socal…our girls deserved some Southern California loving too. Hope to next chapter tonight! That might be it for the week.
I feel so loved, thank you! LOL! Can’t wait for the fun stuff – San Diego rocks!
Is this chapter for me? LOL!
PLZZZZZ Post tomorrow. what happened next. U R DOING AWESOME RIGHT NOW. Star writer at the moment. And give Tina her Bette back soon. I cant see Tina crying too. Thats correct Ur stories make me visualize things too.
Great chapter. I don’t like it when Bette has to suffer but it were more than unrealistic if there were only a smooth path back. In moments like this where Bette can’t cover her feelings or even try to only show a bearable part of the pain she felt will bring them forward more quickly to fully trust each other and get over the hurt. PPS Thanks
That was amazing !