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A Danish Beginning… Chapter 3
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“Well… maybe you’re right. I hope you’re right. At least…” Dana was abruptly cut off by the opening of the bathroom door as two girls walked in. Dana felt her chest constrict when she caught site of the first girl. She was around Dana’s height but was curvy where Dana thought herself as simply skinny. Her blonde hair was chopped short giving her a pixie look that seemed to fit her temperament as she nearly bounced into the bathroom. Before she could stop, Dana’s eyes dropped to the blonde’s cleavage where she glimpsed the tops of the girl’s ample breasts. Heat flooded the athletes face and she quickly snapped her gaze back to the blonde’s face, hoping the blonde hadn’t caught Dana’s wandering gaze.
Alice couldn’t believe her luck. Here stood the beautiful tennis player she had been thinking about non-stop since she’d read the article on her. The picture of Dana from the article hardly gave credit to the brunette beauty as Alice took in her smoothly tanned skin, and slim athletic build, before nearly drowning in her eyes. They’re definitely green, but with flecks of blue and hazel in them. God, I could stare at them all day. A voice being cleared behind her caused Alice to jump and throw a quick glare over her shoulder at Bette before turning back to face Dana with a huge smile lighting up her face.
“Hi! I’m Alice. I just wanted to see how you were doing after the whole crazy squirrel incident.”
Dana continued to stare at Alice with a slightly panicked expression.
Alice continued to talk, ignoring Dana’s obvious discomfort. “I happened to be eating outside when you got attacked. It looked pretty scary! That squirrel was really holding onto your chest.” Not that I could blame the squirrel. If I were the squirrel I would never have let go. Ever. The lucky stupid squirrel. Is it weird that I’m jealous of a squirrel?
While Alice daydreamed of Dana and squirrels, Bette stepped forward from behind Alice to break the awkward silence that had descended upon the foursome.
“I’m Bette. Alice and I are seniors here.” Bette smiled at Dana and Tina in an attempt to ease the girls into talking.
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Crazy, but interesting – I’m hooked.
Nice! This is just too funny :D ALice is great. I could totally see her telling that story with sincerity. LMAO! This is great keep it up. I was laughing like a freaking hyenna (no clue how to spell that. sorry! LOL)
Nice update dude, hope you manage a few more chapters this week. Have a good holiday.
LOL. Seriously. I know for sure that Squirrels do attack people. But how did it reach Dana’s face? Now that’s some funny stuff. And tina’s str8? So how’s bette going to get her? I can’t wait for this double date(*pout*..you promised). Post soon!
Hey, This story is great and very funny I giggle whenever I read it! Loved the bird story from Alice it reminds me heaps of my friends. One of my friends actually wont move if there is a bird on the ground somewhere near her, its pretty entertaining to watch. Thanks for the update! I will be waiting for the next one :)
love the interaction between all of them! i want more! soon… please.
I can never get enough of the fact that Alice and Dana can never get enough of each other. In almost every fic they’re swept away of their feet in an instant when they first meet. :D Dawsosn23 described it very well. Sigh…you just can’t not love them. Will Dana be interviewed by Alice next chapter??
I like the Bette/Alice interaction. They seem so different on the show. At times it’s hard to see them as ever being best friends. I love the way you have them balancing each other out.
first let me say thats crazy about the squerrle really attacking u! thats just halrious about Alice’s bird story it happened to me except with no bird poop involved thank goodness lol n e how awesome job once again! I love how neverous Dana is and how crazy Alice is lol :P Keep it up Bru :)
A bird attacked my friend it got caught in her windbreaker and I got a chance to watch both of the struggle for at least a minute and a half. You can’t imagine how hilarious it is in real life, I couldn’t help her I was laughing so hard. Great chapter I can’t wait to see how Alice makes the moves on the sexy teen tennis player. It’s good that Alice wasn’t embarrassed about the story I wouldn’t be it was funny and very like Alice to say. Can’t wait for the next post.
Ha, it was kind of funny that you actually used my newspaper headline in this. I still can’t belive that I wrote that. Anyways, it seems that Alice always knows what to say, especially when it has to do with Dana.I swear sometimes I laugh too hard when I’m reading this story. But I love it:) Good luck with the vacation and I hope that you post some more before you leave!
Just to ease your mind, you had me laughing at the first line of this story. And then I laughed all the way to the end. You have all four of the girls down perfectly, and I’m pretty sure if they ever did a high school show about them that they wouldn’t do nearly as good of a job as you. This story is so hilarious and just happy, and I love it! I can’t wait to see what happens with the four of them, and I can’t wait until Shane pops up in the picture! Great job! I’ll be waiting for those updates this week! :-)
Lol Alice sure knows how to break the ice huh? I can picture Dana standing there all nervous like, completely captivated by Alice, and Alice rambling on like there’s no tomorrow. Can’t wait to see what happens next..Please update soon!!
Damn Alice is killing me her with her crazy story that I couldn’t stop laughing, just love her!