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A Deeper Song, Post 11
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“You’re welcome.”
“I don’t recall saying thank you.” Tina’s eyebrow rose.
“Well you should, I saved your’s and Helena’s sorry asses tonight.”
“Thank you.” Tina said rolling her eyes.
“Roll your eyes all you want, I also saved you from making a big mistake with that wanna be. Bette flunked ‘sharing well with others’.”
“You’re right Al.” The truth of that statement hit home. She flunked that class as well, especially when it came to Bette. “Thank you.” She hugged her and Alice got all embarrassed. “Let’s see how crispy Helena is.”
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Helena kept her eyes on her drink or the dance floor. She could feel Bette boring holes into her even without meeting her eyes. Finally she had enough. A Peabody does not squirm.
Helena put up her hands in a gesture of surrender and protection.
“Bette, I have been nothing but a friend to Tina this evening.”
“Looks more like a cruising buddy.” Bette returned with disdain looking Helena up and down. “You certainly have the fuck me look down. The only reason you are still breathing is because you weren’t propositioning Tina.”
“Bette, I know that I behaved badly with Tina, and I know she is the mother of two of your children but don’t you think that you are being unreasonable with me? Haven’t I proved that I won’t do anything to hurt her? She is my friend now. Can’t you at least grant me that?”
“A friend would not allow Tina to be doing what she was doing tonight before we came in.” Bette’s eyes were hard and angry. “You can’t even be trusted to be a friend.” Bette stated her tone reflecting her disgust.
Helena got bold. “I beg to differ. Has it occurred to you to wonder why Tina was looking for a fuck buddy or one off? If there is anyone to blame for that I think you should look in the mirror.”
Bette looked at Helena as if she had two heads.
“You don’t know?” Helena gasped in surprise. “I am apparently a better friend than you because any fool could see that she’s out here looking for an imitation of you. As her friend I make sure that she stays safe. Are you really that dense not to have noticed that with the exception of Kay all of Tina’s women are tall, slim, brunette and arrogant?”
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Oh my gosh, let them have their moment and please God, let them get back together, LIKE NOW. Thanks. PPS.
Great story, really exciting and interesting. You’re doing a wonderful job.TiBette Forever!
Well, you certainly have won this Tibettes heart, that was HOTTTT
beautiful… i loved it… so nice to see tibette talking and maybe getting back together… so maybe i missed something from the beginning… rosanna was with kate… PPS
I think that was fantastic!!!! especially the reclaiming by Tina of Bette:: as Kit would say: Way to go Mama T…. and laughing at Bette’s disapproval of T’s cruising…so protective, so possessive, so definitely Bette…impeccably written as always K…hurry up I’m waiting…for the drama, the loving, the revelation, the Angie moment!!!!!that was a nice touch about Angies’ reticence over the new brother, she doesn’t wanna hurt her mama B’s feelings no doubt and Mama T with her sensible head and heart will save the day, GREAT GREAT GREAT…now hurry send the next chapter to brighten my ugly wet-weather day…oh yeah loved the He-Bette stand-off and the humour/rescue from Alice…more, did I say that? soon..lol
yep, time for them to claim each other
This is a fascinating story…good of Tina to claim Bette like that..love your writing.
Many great lines but I like this one, “Roll your eyes all you want, I also saved you from making a big mistake with that wanna be. Bette flunked ‘sharing well with others’.” They both don’t like to share. Bette and Tina are totally hot when they are possessive. PPS. I lurve this story.
I know it’s greedy, but don’t leave us this way! Another post, please? …and thank you!
I just love your writing…frustrating as it is!!!
When I read your first post this morning I forgot that you were gonna post again.WOW.Fucking Fantastic.More please I am hooked.
Kelika…this story is absolutely fantastic! Tina needs to let Bette make the decision if she is ready to be in a relationship so soon after Rosanna. I would imagine after the kiss Tina laid on Bette, there should be no confusion in Bette’s mind that Tina needs some sexual healing. Hell…they both do! PS
Good old Alice, shitty timing as always! Maybe Helena will accidently knock her out so B&T can escape!
Well hop to it girls, work thru it
Yippee!!! Finally Tina has acted on her feelings for Bette. Bette has realized just how much Tina means to her. Brilliant to have the gals act on a physical plane and not think too much about it. Damn Alice for interrupting this explosive moment. Now Bette and Tina need some time together to discuss and act further on their desire for one another. Their connection demands to be re-ignited. I can’t wait to see where all this leads. Straight back into each other’s arms I pray for. Kelika, I am stuck here memerized by your talent and wonderful storytelling. Mind-b;owing entertainment. More please. Many thanks for sharing this adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh my God!! That was so good. Go Tina Go!!
That was FANTASTIC to read!! Absolutely fantastic!!! Thanks!
Two chapters…..what a great way to start the day!!!
K, these were the two funniest chapters yet. I love this Tina and Helena is a priceless. Now that they understand one another, lets get this show on the road. And thanks to Rau for helping you.
A Peabody doesn’t squirm… Good on Helena for finding a spine and speaking her mind. Everyone else could see it but Bette and Tina, and now, hopefully… Damn Alice’s interruptions. Her timing is abysmal… she’d interrupt her own funeral, given the chance. Anyway, loved the two updates, kel. Many thanks
Oh yeah! First? If not, never mind.. what a brilliant addition :) The emotion in that kiss.. Phew. I actualy had slightly tears in my eyes :).. That might have been the monitor’s effect though since I couldn’t tear my eyes from your story! Great writing with real emotion, I love it :) Post soon? Angel Dx
I am mostly a silent reader and only comment ocasionally. I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy this story and I was excited to see 2 chapters today. I have been reading fanfic since its beginning and I don’t know how I missed your other stories, but I went back last weekend and read them all. You are a very talented writer and thanks for letting us share in your talent…..Looking forward to the next.
I am so glad they finally kissed. How could B&T be so blind to each other. They need to let go of all this insecurity and let the love flow.
Love this story, so glad Tina has taken the first step in reclaiming her love back. PPS.
Well I read all of your posts in one go an must say what a fantastic story !! and the inteaction between Helena and Bette is priceless. Excellent work please post soon.
Great build-up to the inevitable, tension-relieving kiss; trust Alice to barge in at the worst possible moment. Speaking of “long curly brunette locks,” JB chopped hers off for S5 according to the sneak peek podcast on ourchart.com. It’s criminal.
Wow, you included Tina saying this: “No one will touch you again other than me.” Tina certainly laid her cards on the table with that one – when Bette gets a chance to regroup, will we get to see what she says in return? Great dialogue all around. Nice.
great chapter.. great writer.. pps..
Good to see B&T act on it now!