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A Deeper Song, Post 11
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“Hey.” Tina plopped in a chair next to Bette. She could see the brunette was ready to explode. “Nice crowd and music tonight.”
“Peabody.” Alice smirked at her. “Tina told me you’re buying the drinks tonight. Let’s go get refills.
Bette and Helena had continued to lock gazes in silent confrontation. Tina placed her hand on Bette’s arm, which caused Bette to look down at her arm breaking the standoff. She threw Helena a look, which said this conversation, is not over. Helena answered with a whatever look. Alice wound up pulling Helena away and Tina focused on bringing Bette down.
“What’s going on with the two of you?” Tina could not ignore the elephant at the table.
“She lives and breathes.” Bette answered. It hit her that Rosanna didn’t. Sorrow filled her yet again and the tears flowed.
It was still disconcerting for Tina to see Bette in tears. She hardly cried during the eight years they had been together. Tina realized that Bette rarely allowed anyone including Tina see her tears.
“Do you want to step outside for a minute or go to the bathroom and freshen up?” Tina asked wanting to shelter Bette from public scrutiny. Bette reluctantly followed Tina to the small terrace that opened off the dance floor. Tina took a glass of ice water and a napkin so that she could calm Bette down. Once they were in a quiet secluded spot she poured the water on the napkin and pressed it against the back of Bette’s neck and then her throat. She moved from there to her temples then her eyes. Once Bette’s breath was back to normal she stopped.
Bette looked out into the night and saw the glittering lights of Hollywood to the east. She took a breath before speaking to Tina. There were a few things she needed to know. Was Helena right? Was Tina searching for her through other women?
“What’s going on with you and Kay?”
“Kay.” Tina was caught off guard. “Kay and I are friends still.”
“Friends, not lovers?”
“Just friends.”
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Oh my gosh, let them have their moment and please God, let them get back together, LIKE NOW. Thanks. PPS.
Great story, really exciting and interesting. You’re doing a wonderful job.TiBette Forever!
Well, you certainly have won this Tibettes heart, that was HOTTTT
beautiful… i loved it… so nice to see tibette talking and maybe getting back together… so maybe i missed something from the beginning… rosanna was with kate… PPS
I think that was fantastic!!!! especially the reclaiming by Tina of Bette:: as Kit would say: Way to go Mama T…. and laughing at Bette’s disapproval of T’s cruising…so protective, so possessive, so definitely Bette…impeccably written as always K…hurry up I’m waiting…for the drama, the loving, the revelation, the Angie moment!!!!!that was a nice touch about Angies’ reticence over the new brother, she doesn’t wanna hurt her mama B’s feelings no doubt and Mama T with her sensible head and heart will save the day, GREAT GREAT GREAT…now hurry send the next chapter to brighten my ugly wet-weather day…oh yeah loved the He-Bette stand-off and the humour/rescue from Alice…more, did I say that? soon..lol
yep, time for them to claim each other
This is a fascinating story…good of Tina to claim Bette like that..love your writing.
Many great lines but I like this one, “Roll your eyes all you want, I also saved you from making a big mistake with that wanna be. Bette flunked ‘sharing well with others’.” They both don’t like to share. Bette and Tina are totally hot when they are possessive. PPS. I lurve this story.
I know it’s greedy, but don’t leave us this way! Another post, please? …and thank you!
I just love your writing…frustrating as it is!!!
When I read your first post this morning I forgot that you were gonna post again.WOW.Fucking Fantastic.More please I am hooked.
Kelika…this story is absolutely fantastic! Tina needs to let Bette make the decision if she is ready to be in a relationship so soon after Rosanna. I would imagine after the kiss Tina laid on Bette, there should be no confusion in Bette’s mind that Tina needs some sexual healing. Hell…they both do! PS
Good old Alice, shitty timing as always! Maybe Helena will accidently knock her out so B&T can escape!
Well hop to it girls, work thru it
Yippee!!! Finally Tina has acted on her feelings for Bette. Bette has realized just how much Tina means to her. Brilliant to have the gals act on a physical plane and not think too much about it. Damn Alice for interrupting this explosive moment. Now Bette and Tina need some time together to discuss and act further on their desire for one another. Their connection demands to be re-ignited. I can’t wait to see where all this leads. Straight back into each other’s arms I pray for. Kelika, I am stuck here memerized by your talent and wonderful storytelling. Mind-b;owing entertainment. More please. Many thanks for sharing this adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh my God!! That was so good. Go Tina Go!!
That was FANTASTIC to read!! Absolutely fantastic!!! Thanks!
Two chapters…..what a great way to start the day!!!
K, these were the two funniest chapters yet. I love this Tina and Helena is a priceless. Now that they understand one another, lets get this show on the road. And thanks to Rau for helping you.
A Peabody doesn’t squirm… Good on Helena for finding a spine and speaking her mind. Everyone else could see it but Bette and Tina, and now, hopefully… Damn Alice’s interruptions. Her timing is abysmal… she’d interrupt her own funeral, given the chance. Anyway, loved the two updates, kel. Many thanks
Oh yeah! First? If not, never mind.. what a brilliant addition :) The emotion in that kiss.. Phew. I actualy had slightly tears in my eyes :).. That might have been the monitor’s effect though since I couldn’t tear my eyes from your story! Great writing with real emotion, I love it :) Post soon? Angel Dx
I am mostly a silent reader and only comment ocasionally. I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy this story and I was excited to see 2 chapters today. I have been reading fanfic since its beginning and I don’t know how I missed your other stories, but I went back last weekend and read them all. You are a very talented writer and thanks for letting us share in your talent…..Looking forward to the next.
I am so glad they finally kissed. How could B&T be so blind to each other. They need to let go of all this insecurity and let the love flow.
Love this story, so glad Tina has taken the first step in reclaiming her love back. PPS.
Well I read all of your posts in one go an must say what a fantastic story !! and the inteaction between Helena and Bette is priceless. Excellent work please post soon.
Great build-up to the inevitable, tension-relieving kiss; trust Alice to barge in at the worst possible moment. Speaking of “long curly brunette locks,” JB chopped hers off for S5 according to the sneak peek podcast on ourchart.com. It’s criminal.
Wow, you included Tina saying this: “No one will touch you again other than me.” Tina certainly laid her cards on the table with that one – when Bette gets a chance to regroup, will we get to see what she says in return? Great dialogue all around. Nice.
great chapter.. great writer.. pps..
Good to see B&T act on it now!