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A Deeper Song, Post 11
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“When did that change?” Bette was curious: how long had she had been oblivious to Tina’s love life?
“It’s been about a year now. We are friends but we realized that we didn’t have what it took to move to the next level. Kay never really let go of her feelings for Rosanna.”
Bette looked at her sharply. It had been a source of tension for Rosanna that Kay never gave up expressing her desire to be more than friends. Bette knew that Kay was waging a losing battle and did not want to cause further problems by confronting her directly. They had been friends for twenty years and that was a bond Rosanna was loath to break.
“So when you are in need of …companionship you go out with Helena and pick up women?” Bette asked looking into the hazel eyes.
Tina blushed. “Helena talks too much.” Tina muttered.
“So you would have taken that woman home tonight? The one you were dancing with when we came in?”
“We would have gone somewhere, her place or a hotel, definitely not home.” Tina confessed.
“So how often do you do this sort of thing?” Bette was shocked.
“Not often.” Tina was aware of the disapproval in Bette’s tone and bristled in response. “The last time I checked I am not your wife so you have no say so over whom I sleep with.”
“Really?!” Bette said not backing off. “The last time we had a conversation about who we got involved with you told me that anyone who has contact with our daughter is your business. So anyone you get involved with is my business.”
“Involved, Bette is the operative word here… Involved. You do not get to criticize my choice of …companions for an evening.”
Bette continued to come after her. “Well I don’t approve of you having companions. You could get hurt.”
“You are not my mother and you are not my wife. I’m a big girl I can take care of myself.”
“Obviously not.” Bette lashed out pointedly.
“You are so out of line.” Tina was incredulous.
“How would you feel if I just found a companion for the evening? Would that be ok with you?”
“Don’t even think about it.” Tina responded without thinking. She was breathing heavily now. “No one will touch you again other than me.” She pulled Bette to her and kissed her urgently. She licked Bette’s lips until they opened in response to her demand for entry. She filled her mouth with her tongue. Bette moaned in response and wrapped her arms around Tina. Bette was on fire and Tina let all of her repressed need for Bette express itself in that kiss. They were both trembling by the time they pulled apart.
They rested their heads against the other’s shoulders trying to regain a measure of composure while processing the huge leap they had just taken with one another. It took some time before they were able to meet each other’s eyes. Their hands entwined as they struggled with words to define what had just happened.
“There you are.” Alice huffed breaking the moment. “We couldn’t find you anywhere. What are you two doing out here?” After her tirade Alice noticed that they were holding hands and that there was a glazed look in both their eyes that she remembered from their past. Fuck, she interrupted them.
“We were just clearing up a few things.” Tina stepped in to save Bette from having to respond.
“Yeah, right.” Alice quipped. “Next time let your dates know, it’s quite rude to just disappear like that.” She did not want to step on the tenuous roots she saw taking hold and held back the rest of her customary tirade. These two had a lot to work through if they were to find their way back to one another.
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Oh my gosh, let them have their moment and please God, let them get back together, LIKE NOW. Thanks. PPS.
Great story, really exciting and interesting. You’re doing a wonderful job.TiBette Forever!
Well, you certainly have won this Tibettes heart, that was HOTTTT
beautiful… i loved it… so nice to see tibette talking and maybe getting back together… so maybe i missed something from the beginning… rosanna was with kate… PPS
I think that was fantastic!!!! especially the reclaiming by Tina of Bette:: as Kit would say: Way to go Mama T…. and laughing at Bette’s disapproval of T’s cruising…so protective, so possessive, so definitely Bette…impeccably written as always K…hurry up I’m waiting…for the drama, the loving, the revelation, the Angie moment!!!!!that was a nice touch about Angies’ reticence over the new brother, she doesn’t wanna hurt her mama B’s feelings no doubt and Mama T with her sensible head and heart will save the day, GREAT GREAT GREAT…now hurry send the next chapter to brighten my ugly wet-weather day…oh yeah loved the He-Bette stand-off and the humour/rescue from Alice…more, did I say that? soon..lol
yep, time for them to claim each other
This is a fascinating story…good of Tina to claim Bette like that..love your writing.
Many great lines but I like this one, “Roll your eyes all you want, I also saved you from making a big mistake with that wanna be. Bette flunked ‘sharing well with others’.” They both don’t like to share. Bette and Tina are totally hot when they are possessive. PPS. I lurve this story.
I know it’s greedy, but don’t leave us this way! Another post, please? …and thank you!
I just love your writing…frustrating as it is!!!
When I read your first post this morning I forgot that you were gonna post again.WOW.Fucking Fantastic.More please I am hooked.
Kelika…this story is absolutely fantastic! Tina needs to let Bette make the decision if she is ready to be in a relationship so soon after Rosanna. I would imagine after the kiss Tina laid on Bette, there should be no confusion in Bette’s mind that Tina needs some sexual healing. Hell…they both do! PS
Good old Alice, shitty timing as always! Maybe Helena will accidently knock her out so B&T can escape!
Well hop to it girls, work thru it
Yippee!!! Finally Tina has acted on her feelings for Bette. Bette has realized just how much Tina means to her. Brilliant to have the gals act on a physical plane and not think too much about it. Damn Alice for interrupting this explosive moment. Now Bette and Tina need some time together to discuss and act further on their desire for one another. Their connection demands to be re-ignited. I can’t wait to see where all this leads. Straight back into each other’s arms I pray for. Kelika, I am stuck here memerized by your talent and wonderful storytelling. Mind-b;owing entertainment. More please. Many thanks for sharing this adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh my God!! That was so good. Go Tina Go!!
That was FANTASTIC to read!! Absolutely fantastic!!! Thanks!
Two chapters…..what a great way to start the day!!!
K, these were the two funniest chapters yet. I love this Tina and Helena is a priceless. Now that they understand one another, lets get this show on the road. And thanks to Rau for helping you.
A Peabody doesn’t squirm… Good on Helena for finding a spine and speaking her mind. Everyone else could see it but Bette and Tina, and now, hopefully… Damn Alice’s interruptions. Her timing is abysmal… she’d interrupt her own funeral, given the chance. Anyway, loved the two updates, kel. Many thanks
Oh yeah! First? If not, never mind.. what a brilliant addition :) The emotion in that kiss.. Phew. I actualy had slightly tears in my eyes :).. That might have been the monitor’s effect though since I couldn’t tear my eyes from your story! Great writing with real emotion, I love it :) Post soon? Angel Dx
I am mostly a silent reader and only comment ocasionally. I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy this story and I was excited to see 2 chapters today. I have been reading fanfic since its beginning and I don’t know how I missed your other stories, but I went back last weekend and read them all. You are a very talented writer and thanks for letting us share in your talent…..Looking forward to the next.
I am so glad they finally kissed. How could B&T be so blind to each other. They need to let go of all this insecurity and let the love flow.
Love this story, so glad Tina has taken the first step in reclaiming her love back. PPS.
Well I read all of your posts in one go an must say what a fantastic story !! and the inteaction between Helena and Bette is priceless. Excellent work please post soon.
Great build-up to the inevitable, tension-relieving kiss; trust Alice to barge in at the worst possible moment. Speaking of “long curly brunette locks,” JB chopped hers off for S5 according to the sneak peek podcast on ourchart.com. It’s criminal.
Wow, you included Tina saying this: “No one will touch you again other than me.” Tina certainly laid her cards on the table with that one – when Bette gets a chance to regroup, will we get to see what she says in return? Great dialogue all around. Nice.
great chapter.. great writer.. pps..
Good to see B&T act on it now!