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A Different Beginning 3
I figured that it was time to get the old girl out. This was your fathers baby after all.
Clara nodded her head and smiled as she and her mother got into the car and pulled out of the driveway.
I saw a trendy clothing store near that caf that we went to yesterday, Clara remarked as the wind was blowing in her hair
You know Im not into that whole trendy thing oh daughter of mine.
I know mom but the least you can do is look.
Bette sighed, Fine. We will go to that trendy clothing store and then…
We will go to one of the old lady stores that you like, Clara finished
Hey!
Clara laughed, Sorry mom. You are just always wearing those droopy suits.
I would hardly call tailored suits droopy.
Youre right I apologize.
Uh huh.
You will at least try something on wont you?
For you…anything.
Thank you.
Your welcome.
The two drove in relative silence to this store and parked. The two entered the store and started looking around. Looking at a rack not far away stood Alice and Shane.
Hey Al, isnt that the golden nugget that our gal Tina is so hot for, Shane whispered to Alice
Alice looked over to where Shane was looking and she saw Tinas goddess, Indeed it is Shane.
Tina has such good luck.
She is pretty hot isnt she? I wonder what shes doing here?
What do most people do in a clothing store Al, Shane asked with a raised eyebrow
Alice rolled her eyes at this, I know that Shane.
Bette and Clara were looking over at some dresses on a far fall.
I dont know Clara all of these seem so…
Hot.
Young, Bette finished
I know this is going to be so cliched but if you got it flaunt it.
Bette just shook her head at this and watched as Clara pulled a red dress down from a rack.
Go try this on.
I am not trying that on.
Mom. Please.
You had to go and break out the please. Fine.
Bette grabbed the dress and went to the fitting room as Clara looked around some more. She bumped into Shane and Alice who had been eveasedropping.
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(53 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
OMG I thought it was hilarious when Shane, Al, and Dana were talking with Clara at the store. Even funnier, was when Shane called her cell phone! I absolutely love this fanfic, I am laughing my head off!! “We have a unique relationship” I love Clara, best daughter ever! :)
I love Bette with her family of 4 and I like the switch with her being str8 and Tina not. I totally enjoyed this and Clara is a little pisser.
Love this story. Please continue.
OMG, this is becoming one of my favorites stories besides (BETTE FORGETS)..So excited for the DATE..PLEASE POST ASAP…
i love this story. it’s total role reversal. awesome. and i love the banter between bette and clara – reminds me of my mother and i. haha. awesome story, post again SOON! (please, hehe)
I love this story! I can’t wait for the next chapter and you’re right…there is no such thing as too long. I really like the banter between Clara and Bette. Loved this part…
“Ooh just what I always wanted. Now get dressed there lady. We’d probably get everything free if you went out like that but you would probably also get a citation or something,†Clara remarked leaving the bathroom, “If the cop wasn’t to busy looking at your bosom.â€
“That’s not why I got out of that last speeding ticket,†Bette called after her daughter
“Keep thinking that,†Clara called back.
let the date commence and put those kids to bed fast.
very entertaining….lot’s of laughs! more pleeze
=D<~See my happy face...you're responsible for it. I so loved this chapter. Bette and her kids...they're hilarious, bribing each other & making deals. Now that's how a family should operate...hehe...leather pants and a hot hunter green dress...hmm...nothing but good can come out of this combination;P Alice, Dana, and Shane...they're a hoot. I love it...please update soon. The longer the chapter, the better...thanks Reba.
i love love love this story!
The relationship between Bette and her kids is amazingly funny.
P.S.- you must shear the story of clara running naked through…
OK, I just have to tell you how much I love this story! You are a fabulous writer. Thank you so much for posting!
Bette with four children,and she interact very well with them. Lets see if Tina does. I like Clara. She is funny. Bette must have money, her kids sure does black mail her for it.. thanks
Good chapter. I love the relationship between Bette and Clar have is beautiful. Is so funny that Alice, Shane, Dana talk on the phone with Clar about what Tina should wear. Now let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thank you!
I love this story! So sweet. Thank you for writing it :)
“Ordering the naughty gifts for the surprise party that you just ruined,†Alice stated in her serious tone throwing up her hands in frustration leaving the confines of the closet with Dana and Shane trailing behind her.
BEST LINE EVER.It made me honestly laugh out loud.
Your stories capture and hold my attention,write more!haha.
I was happy to see your story posted. Great job!
keep this up! really great story. nice to see tina as the more experienced one and great to see shane and al help bette in the store! really really wonderful. post more soon!
Can’t wait for more. Great story!
This was a really good chapter, the banter between Bette and her daughter was funny, keep up the good work.
Thank you.
This is great. Love this storyline. Please continue.
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Reba Reba..you have done it again. Damn girl..you can´t leave us like this. Can´t wait till dinner starts. Post soon
That was great. So long I’m impressed but so funny you have their banter down so well I love this.
I love this story, I think is about time that Tina happens to be the “Killer”,please continue.
love this…..please continue.
AHHH! Cliffhangers! This story is hilarious, please post again soon!
If there is an award for witty banter you would run away with the prize!! I really love this and can’t wait to see where it goes!
Are these leather pants so tight Tina can’t get them off Bette? Love the story!