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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 10
"Alice…can I kiss you?" Dana whispered, her heart beating hard in her chest.
"Please!" Alice laughed through her tears.
Dana leaned in slowly and placed a hesitant kiss on her lips. They had kissed several times before, but this time was different. This time was the turning point. There was no going back from here. No more obstacles. No more excuses. It was just Alice and Dana now, and Dana was determined to make it a night to remember.
She leaned in and kissed the writer more firmly this time. Alice brought her hands up and tangled them in Dana’s hair, pulling on it as she deepened the kiss. Dana let out a moan and Alice slipped her tongue in. Dana was on sensory overload. All of her dreams were coming true and she felt as if a weight had been lifted off her shoulders. The world suddenly made sense again. She bit the blonde’s lip and pushed her back onto the couch, crawling over her with a sense of purpose. Alice slipped her hands down the back of the athlete’s pants and squeezed her ass, earning a moan of approval. Dana shoved her tongue into the blondes mouth and reached back to grab her hands. She brought Alice’s hands up and pinned them over her head.
The women made out like teenagers on the couch until they were both breathless and painfully aroused. Dana released the writer’s hands and gasped as Alice wasted no time in plunging three fingers into her dripping wet center.
"Alice…" Dana groaned and began to thrust onto the blonde’s hand. She brought her own down between Alice’s legs and stroked her clit. She was rewarded with a moan from the beauty beneath her. They locked their eyes on each other as Dana slipped her fingers inside of the blonde’s.
"Together baby." Alice said breathlessly. Dana nodded and they began to thrust into one another. They set a slow pace, wanting to savor this moment forever.
"Al…I love you so much…" Dana whimpered. She felt Alice begin to rub her clit each time she thrust into her. She dropped her head down and groaned. "Fuck. I’m close…"
"Shhhh…Me too baby." Dana began to work Alice clit as well and could feel the walls of her lover begin to tighten around her fingers. "I’m so close Dana…"
Dana crashed her lips onto the blonde’s, sucking her tongue into her mouth. They came at the same time, swallowing each other’s moans as they continued the most passionate kiss either had ever experienced. They continued to thrust into one another until their tremors had subsided.
They laid there for a few moments, catching their breaths. They were still inside one another as the air began to cool the sheen of sweat on their bodies. Alice pulled her fingers out and Dana groaned at the delicious feeling.
"Jesus. Alice." Dana watched as the writer brought her coated fingers up ti her mouth and sucked them clean.
"Mmmm. You taste so fucking amazing, baby." Dana had never seen anything so sexy in her entire life. She smiled as she decided to repeat her lover’s actions. She slowly pulled her fingers out, making sure to brush against the sensitive nub and licked her fingers clean.
"Dane…can we take this to the bedroom?" Alice asked, her voice husky and full of desire.
"Hell the fuck yeah!" Both laughed as they jumped up, off the couch and began running towards the bedroom, ripping clothes off as they went. Both were over joyed in the knowledge that they had found their way to each other, and looking forward to the future.
~Fin
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awwww what a great story, and great ending. i loved it from start to finish, im so glad it turned out this way. now i am really anxious to see how this shalice fic of yours turns out. please update soon! i can’t seem to get enough of your writing! :)
Okay…that was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! So glad they got together in the end, as it is supposed to be. Hope you will be writing more Danish in the future. Your loyal fan! Oh and get well soon. Cheers!
that was great I love it
Oh and i forgot … that lil note about everyone dying.. that WASNT COOL lol haha
Fuck you B! You know you promised a post while I was still in Cali so don’t give me shit about being pushy…How is it possible that I posted before you huh? HUH? FUCKING ANSWER ME!!! Whatever bitch, loved the chapter I only have one complaint, who says “Can I kiss you?” I mean besides losers and bastards with amazing tactical mojo and an agenda? No one, and shame on you for putting that in this story, come on you’d have to be some kind of analytical mastermind to realize how amazingly effective that question is….That’s a knight in shining armor question, a big lezzie knight in pink shining armor question. It’s so hard to believe that this story is over but it’s good that there is another one to keep me sated. I’ll be looking forward to that memo about replacements for Poop, she’s really dropped the ball lately. I mean just because she’s shoving her tongue down some hot mama’s throat every night doesn’t mean that we should be on the back burner. So we’ll round up the applicants and hold an open interview process next week if you’re available. Also don’t think that you got that whole tall, black hair, blue eyes, rippling muscles hetero-fantasy past me ok…I don’t want to read about your dirty bisexual wet dreams lol. Great chapter babe I’ll be looking for the next on your shalice post it, post it, POST IT. The utterly irresistable, disgustingly talented, horribly sexy, amazingly great 1/3 (soon to be 1/2) of suzieshitinthecloset33 A.K.A Shitinthecloset33 (soon to be) suzieinthecloset33 OUT BITCHES!!!
Man that bitch CD sure does know how to leave a comment.
I’m not sure I’m fit to post a comment after the diatribe left by ClosetDana! Damn! At any rate … I loved the fic & I’m just slight bent the it’s over. You have to write another Danish fic … I can’t do Shalice … it’s just too weird for me. Great ending … more please!
… they lived happily ever after. and the only time they had to deal with cancer was while watching late night re-runs of “e.r.” on TBS. well done suzieb! looking forward to your shalice fic! hope the cold is better, i’m fighting one too and it sucks.
Great chapter babe, and the perfect end to the story! :-) I fell out of my chair laughing at the “Can I kiss you” line. NOT COOL! Ha ha. It actaully is amazing how effective that question is. ;-) You two BETTER not fucking replace me from shitinthecloset33! I’m just having a weird week and trying to get my head wrapped around some things! Yeah, that hetero-fantasy didnt get past me either. CD, I think it’s time for an intervention! Well babe, this story was awesome from start to finish, and although it is over, I know that I still have your Shalice fic to look forward to! And that puts a big dorky grin on my face! I guess since you and CD both updated, it’s my turn. Wow, I really have been dropping the ball lately. I blame it on my new “hot mama”, as CD put it! Well, this is the loser, bastard with amazing tactical mojo, big lezzie knight in shining armor 1/3 of shitinthecloset33 signing out. (thanks for the great description of me CD!) In other words, the “Shane” third of the trio! Enough said…. ;-) (btw, I LOVE YOU SUZE!!)
LMAO at your comments Suzie, and what an ending, I’m just disappointed it’s over, you need to write more danish, not should write, but NEED to! And thanks for the congrats, after ED left the show she has so much spare time on her hands and boy do those hands work their magic :P lol peace out xx
Thank you for an enjoyable story…Keep on writing!!!
Bravo!!!
great job, i really enjoyed your writing!!!!
Awesome job. Sweet ending. I really enjoyed this fic.
why u frikin amazin Suzs u! Despite the saddness obviously i have that uve ended this kick as story i gotta say awesome ending, FINALLY they hooked up with out any problems! U better… after your lil Shalice fling thing u got going on lol u gotta write another Danish! cuz u gotta and also cuz im ordering u too! lol again great job at rockin my glasses off! xoxo
That story was awesome, thanks. Kinda sad its over. Looking forward to Shalice (even tho im a huge Danish fan). Keep up the great work xx
Fantastic, but really sorry to hear it is the end. Looking forward to reading your next story.
Ok,one sec……. Doing a lil dance around the room…lol ok that was awsome!!!! Post soon,take your time if it will be like this chapter! Gr8 job!!!
All good things must come to an end. :D Funny that Alice’s male love interests always have the same features as Dana…a coincidence or not? And wohooo, a happy Danish ending!! I didn’t see that one coming. ;) Seriously, I’m glad Dana and Alice found their way to each other…in a perfect world it should always be like this. :D I have to catch up on that Shalice fic. :) And yes, I was probably at work when you posted it…I was up at 5.00 AM (!!!) that day to go to some place on the other side of the country. :( Anyways, looking forward to your next work. :D