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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 10
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Dana opened the door but said nothing. Both women stared at one another for what seemed to Dana like an eternity.
"I couldn’t sleep…did I wake you?" Dana had to strain to actually hear the writer.
"I can’t sleep either." Dana sighed, running her fingers through her hair.
"Can we talk?" Alice dropped her head down as she said this, and Dana felt her heart tighten.
"It’s late Alice…"
"I know. I know. Fuck. Never mind…" Alice turned to leave. Dana reached her hand out and caught the blonde’s hand. They both stared at their joined hands, fascinated in how well they seemed to fit together. Dana turned and gently pulled Alice into the house. She led them to the living room and they sat down in silence.
"Talk." Alice looked at the ground and began to play with the hem of her shirt in nervousness.
"I’m sorry. I’m so sorry for the shitty things I said tonight." Alice whispered, tears in her eyes.
Dana’s felt her heart ache at the sadness she heard in the blonde’s voice.
"Shhh…Al. Don’t cry. I’m sorry, too." She wiped a tear off of Alice’s cheek and gave her a small smile.
"Why do we keep hurting each other? We’re supposed to be best friends." Dana watched as more tears began to fall down her friends pink cheeks.
"I don’t know, Al. But I fucking hate it. It hurts." Dana felt her own tears beginning to fall. She reached out and pulled Alice to her, wrapping her in a tight embrace. Alice immediately threw her arms around Dana’s neck and holding her tightly.
They sat there, desperately clinging to one another as they rode out the intense waves of emotion, sweeping through them. When their tears began to subside, Dana pulled back slightly from their embrace to find the writer’s eyes.
They brought their foreheads together and Dana brought her hands up to cup Alice’s face.
"Alice…I love you…so much. I always have. I love you so much it hurts."
"Dana…" Alice began to cry again. "I think I’ve loved you from the beginning. I am so in love with you…" Dana saw the truth of the writer’s words in her eyes’s and sighed.
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awwww what a great story, and great ending. i loved it from start to finish, im so glad it turned out this way. now i am really anxious to see how this shalice fic of yours turns out. please update soon! i can’t seem to get enough of your writing! :)
Okay…that was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! So glad they got together in the end, as it is supposed to be. Hope you will be writing more Danish in the future. Your loyal fan! Oh and get well soon. Cheers!
that was great I love it
Oh and i forgot … that lil note about everyone dying.. that WASNT COOL lol haha
Fuck you B! You know you promised a post while I was still in Cali so don’t give me shit about being pushy…How is it possible that I posted before you huh? HUH? FUCKING ANSWER ME!!! Whatever bitch, loved the chapter I only have one complaint, who says “Can I kiss you?” I mean besides losers and bastards with amazing tactical mojo and an agenda? No one, and shame on you for putting that in this story, come on you’d have to be some kind of analytical mastermind to realize how amazingly effective that question is….That’s a knight in shining armor question, a big lezzie knight in pink shining armor question. It’s so hard to believe that this story is over but it’s good that there is another one to keep me sated. I’ll be looking forward to that memo about replacements for Poop, she’s really dropped the ball lately. I mean just because she’s shoving her tongue down some hot mama’s throat every night doesn’t mean that we should be on the back burner. So we’ll round up the applicants and hold an open interview process next week if you’re available. Also don’t think that you got that whole tall, black hair, blue eyes, rippling muscles hetero-fantasy past me ok…I don’t want to read about your dirty bisexual wet dreams lol. Great chapter babe I’ll be looking for the next on your shalice post it, post it, POST IT. The utterly irresistable, disgustingly talented, horribly sexy, amazingly great 1/3 (soon to be 1/2) of suzieshitinthecloset33 A.K.A Shitinthecloset33 (soon to be) suzieinthecloset33 OUT BITCHES!!!
Man that bitch CD sure does know how to leave a comment.
I’m not sure I’m fit to post a comment after the diatribe left by ClosetDana! Damn! At any rate … I loved the fic & I’m just slight bent the it’s over. You have to write another Danish fic … I can’t do Shalice … it’s just too weird for me. Great ending … more please!
… they lived happily ever after. and the only time they had to deal with cancer was while watching late night re-runs of “e.r.” on TBS. well done suzieb! looking forward to your shalice fic! hope the cold is better, i’m fighting one too and it sucks.
Great chapter babe, and the perfect end to the story! :-) I fell out of my chair laughing at the “Can I kiss you” line. NOT COOL! Ha ha. It actaully is amazing how effective that question is. ;-) You two BETTER not fucking replace me from shitinthecloset33! I’m just having a weird week and trying to get my head wrapped around some things! Yeah, that hetero-fantasy didnt get past me either. CD, I think it’s time for an intervention! Well babe, this story was awesome from start to finish, and although it is over, I know that I still have your Shalice fic to look forward to! And that puts a big dorky grin on my face! I guess since you and CD both updated, it’s my turn. Wow, I really have been dropping the ball lately. I blame it on my new “hot mama”, as CD put it! Well, this is the loser, bastard with amazing tactical mojo, big lezzie knight in shining armor 1/3 of shitinthecloset33 signing out. (thanks for the great description of me CD!) In other words, the “Shane” third of the trio! Enough said…. ;-) (btw, I LOVE YOU SUZE!!)
LMAO at your comments Suzie, and what an ending, I’m just disappointed it’s over, you need to write more danish, not should write, but NEED to! And thanks for the congrats, after ED left the show she has so much spare time on her hands and boy do those hands work their magic :P lol peace out xx
Thank you for an enjoyable story…Keep on writing!!!
Bravo!!!
great job, i really enjoyed your writing!!!!
Awesome job. Sweet ending. I really enjoyed this fic.
why u frikin amazin Suzs u! Despite the saddness obviously i have that uve ended this kick as story i gotta say awesome ending, FINALLY they hooked up with out any problems! U better… after your lil Shalice fling thing u got going on lol u gotta write another Danish! cuz u gotta and also cuz im ordering u too! lol again great job at rockin my glasses off! xoxo
That story was awesome, thanks. Kinda sad its over. Looking forward to Shalice (even tho im a huge Danish fan). Keep up the great work xx
Fantastic, but really sorry to hear it is the end. Looking forward to reading your next story.
Ok,one sec……. Doing a lil dance around the room…lol ok that was awsome!!!! Post soon,take your time if it will be like this chapter! Gr8 job!!!
All good things must come to an end. :D Funny that Alice’s male love interests always have the same features as Dana…a coincidence or not? And wohooo, a happy Danish ending!! I didn’t see that one coming. ;) Seriously, I’m glad Dana and Alice found their way to each other…in a perfect world it should always be like this. :D I have to catch up on that Shalice fic. :) And yes, I was probably at work when you posted it…I was up at 5.00 AM (!!!) that day to go to some place on the other side of the country. :( Anyways, looking forward to your next work. :D