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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 2
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Dana was left alone to wonder if this was such a good idea. ‘Why the fuck not? Alice doesn’t want me. So what is there to worry about?’ Dana told herself.
Two hours later, Dana found herself at the Planet and actually enjoying herself. Lara turned out to be a really beautiful person, inside and out. Dana was glad that she had asked her for the coffee, which turned into a late lunch. She was feeling a little guilty for leaving the way she had this morning. Not even saying good bye to Alice but realized that it just would have been weird. She didn’t want to think about her right now. She was really having a wonderful time with the chef.
Just as she was about to ask Lara out for dinner that night, she heard a familiar laugh coming through the door. She hated that the thought of her blond friend made her heart beat faster. ‘Give it up Dana. It’s a lost fucking cause’ she scolded herself. She continued chatting with Lara, hoping that maybe Alice wouldn’t see her, or maybe she would see that she was with someone and leave them to themselves.
Alice had spent all of that morning working on an article and sorting through her feelings for Dana. Truth be told, she didn’t make much progress on her article, but she was starting to feel good about the idea of she and Dana as something more than friends. She couldn’t wait to find Dana and talk to her. She assumed it would be hard because Dana was stubborn and would most likely play the whole thing off at first, like she had in her note, but Alice was determined to get to the bottom of this. She saw Dana’s car parked outside of The Planet and called Shane for a last minute pep talk.
"Hello?" Shane answered.
"Hey Yoda…so she’s at The Planet and I want to do this…so wish me luck!" Alice said with fear and excitement laced in her voice. Shane laughed at her nervous friend.
"Good luck Al. It’s gonna be fine. Just be honest with each other…and if that doesn’t work, then just plant one on her and how could she refuse?" Alice laughed as she walked through the door and thanked Shane.
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listen here suzieb, if you loved me, you’d put these two together!! AHHHHH it’s so annoying..poor girls though, both struggling so much. It was a great update, my heart went out to Dana, really. I could totally relate to that situation. I just love your writing and this story so I can’t help but leave you great compliments. I mean them all :) I can’t wait for you to update again…please dont keep me wait too long! You’re fabulous
Argh!!!!! How can you do this to us?!? Love the story tho, please post on this one again soon (and save our little Danish hearts)
DAMN YOU! Ha ha. Not really. You know I love you. Another great chapter from a great writer. Like Dawson said, I could really feel for Dana. And Alice. Pretty shitty situation our girls have gotten themselves into. But seriously, great chapter even though it wasnt the happiest! You know I love your fics any way I can get them. Now please get these two together soon! And Lara? Really? Please God, no!
I Avoid Danish fics…usually I was drawn by Shane’s name next to Hero and read both chapters and all I have to say is BRAVO, you’ve got me liking a Danish fic and that’s a pretty big accomplishment!
Another frustrated reviewer here…Lara ALWAYS has to show up and come between these two. Now it will take ages before them to get together! Ah well, I’m the one who is torturing myself…I do have the choice to not read this…but then again, a powerful force is making meto read your wonderful stories…angsty or not. :D And I just know they will end up together…some day. Hint…just make Lara dissapear by having her to take a cooking course in Paris or something. :P
Awww man! Come on! Alice and Dana! Not Lara! Why does she always have to pop up and ruin everything? Damn her!
I know you probably like Danish as much as I do so this chapter is just a little warm up to happier times right? haha, I love these girls together and you write them so well. Even if you through Lara in the mix I still believe that Alice and Dana will get their act together and there will be more happy stories in the future. Keep it up!!
Aaarrggghh. But at least you warned us. So, here’s hoping that Lara’s a one chapter obstacle ‘cuz this is too frustrating. I have but one request…please, no Ton Ton. Ever. I hate her and don’t even get to love hating her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh hell no not Lara – damn soup chef!!! what a fab update, yet again! you have to take the rough with the smooth and yeah, this was kinda angsty lol, but that means that good things are on the way right? well i hope so because i love this story! Alice… go get your woman! way to go suzieb, can’t wait for more, you have me hooked! :)
Lara needs to go home and find a girl of her own, Dana is taken! Like Alice said ‘step off bitch’ hehe. Great Chap loving this drama. Oh and I was thinking LA is the perfect place to move to with our wives, they can always fly to Canada when they need to and we could go with them hehe :)
You just had to add Lara into the mix didn’t you…how cruel. lol. please update soon and take me back to happy Danish Land!
Lara’s not the obstacle. Dana and Alice are the obstacles to their own happiness. It was nice to see Dana be the one who threw caution to the wind, but now the wall is back up. Great update. I can’t wait to see how our girls handle things.
Damn! You are seriously killing me with the suspense, but I still stand by my other comment. I love this story!(I mean I might like it just a bit more if they could get together like, right now:D)Anyways, please, please, PLEASE update as fast as possible!
Hey there! just caught up with the last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story… Ahhh what more could a girl want!! sigh. The intense Danish build up gets me everytime and you have sooo hit my spot with this one Suz!! Hmmm…lol. Loved drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?”, Oh yes! very direct Alice!! Mmm, I like it. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next? You are SUCH a tease!. Btw your dorkiness and personality that shines thru in your stories cracks me up so bad… and now you seem to be a poet!!LMAO! Post soon.Thanks.