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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 2
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"Are you sure?" Dana asked. Not wanting to make the girl feel like she was in the way.
"Of course. I really should be getting back, but…thank you for a lovely afternoon. Call me anytime." Lara wasn’t sure what the story was between Alice and Dana, but she thought that a kiss on the cheek was innocent enough. So she leaned down and placed a sweet kiss on the athlete’s cheek and walked off. Dana watched her go and didn’t turn back to Alice until the redhead was out of sight.
"Al, you wanted to talk to me?" she asked as if nothing was out of the ordinary.
Alice looked at her, trying to hide the hurt. ‘Was she already seeing somebody else, with out even giving them a chance?’ Alice wondered.
"Dana…who was that?" Alice asked with a quiet voice.
"Lara." Dana stated without elaborating.
"Oh…are you guys…"Alice trailed off, unable to finish her question.
"Alice, is that what you came here to talk to me about?" Dana asked impatiently. How dare she show up here, interrupting her nice afternoon out with a nice woman, and then giving her those ‘How could you do this to me?’ eyes. She had told her how she felt and Alice had said no…well…basically. She had made it clear that she was not interested in her in that way.
Alice winced at the harsh tone in Dana’s voice.
"No. I ummm…I was hoping we could talk about last night…" Dana interrupted her again.
"Al, I already told you that I was drunk and a little out of it. I am sorry. What else do you want me to say?" Dana was trying to stay angry. She didn’t want to break down here.
"Dana…" Alice said weakly. "Don’t do this. We need to talk." Dana shook her head and got up to leave.
"Alice it was a mistake. I’m sorry. Can we just forget about it?" Alice looked at her with hurt and confusion in her eyes. Dana had to look away.
"Sure Dana. Whatever you want." she said defeated, fighting back tears. Dana nodded and walked out of The Planet, fighting against her own emotions. It wasn’t until she was safely inside her car that she allowed herself to break down.
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listen here suzieb, if you loved me, you’d put these two together!! AHHHHH it’s so annoying..poor girls though, both struggling so much. It was a great update, my heart went out to Dana, really. I could totally relate to that situation. I just love your writing and this story so I can’t help but leave you great compliments. I mean them all :) I can’t wait for you to update again…please dont keep me wait too long! You’re fabulous
Argh!!!!! How can you do this to us?!? Love the story tho, please post on this one again soon (and save our little Danish hearts)
DAMN YOU! Ha ha. Not really. You know I love you. Another great chapter from a great writer. Like Dawson said, I could really feel for Dana. And Alice. Pretty shitty situation our girls have gotten themselves into. But seriously, great chapter even though it wasnt the happiest! You know I love your fics any way I can get them. Now please get these two together soon! And Lara? Really? Please God, no!
I Avoid Danish fics…usually I was drawn by Shane’s name next to Hero and read both chapters and all I have to say is BRAVO, you’ve got me liking a Danish fic and that’s a pretty big accomplishment!
Another frustrated reviewer here…Lara ALWAYS has to show up and come between these two. Now it will take ages before them to get together! Ah well, I’m the one who is torturing myself…I do have the choice to not read this…but then again, a powerful force is making meto read your wonderful stories…angsty or not. :D And I just know they will end up together…some day. Hint…just make Lara dissapear by having her to take a cooking course in Paris or something. :P
Awww man! Come on! Alice and Dana! Not Lara! Why does she always have to pop up and ruin everything? Damn her!
I know you probably like Danish as much as I do so this chapter is just a little warm up to happier times right? haha, I love these girls together and you write them so well. Even if you through Lara in the mix I still believe that Alice and Dana will get their act together and there will be more happy stories in the future. Keep it up!!
Aaarrggghh. But at least you warned us. So, here’s hoping that Lara’s a one chapter obstacle ‘cuz this is too frustrating. I have but one request…please, no Ton Ton. Ever. I hate her and don’t even get to love hating her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh hell no not Lara – damn soup chef!!! what a fab update, yet again! you have to take the rough with the smooth and yeah, this was kinda angsty lol, but that means that good things are on the way right? well i hope so because i love this story! Alice… go get your woman! way to go suzieb, can’t wait for more, you have me hooked! :)
Lara needs to go home and find a girl of her own, Dana is taken! Like Alice said ‘step off bitch’ hehe. Great Chap loving this drama. Oh and I was thinking LA is the perfect place to move to with our wives, they can always fly to Canada when they need to and we could go with them hehe :)
You just had to add Lara into the mix didn’t you…how cruel. lol. please update soon and take me back to happy Danish Land!
Lara’s not the obstacle. Dana and Alice are the obstacles to their own happiness. It was nice to see Dana be the one who threw caution to the wind, but now the wall is back up. Great update. I can’t wait to see how our girls handle things.
Damn! You are seriously killing me with the suspense, but I still stand by my other comment. I love this story!(I mean I might like it just a bit more if they could get together like, right now:D)Anyways, please, please, PLEASE update as fast as possible!
Hey there! just caught up with the last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story… Ahhh what more could a girl want!! sigh. The intense Danish build up gets me everytime and you have sooo hit my spot with this one Suz!! Hmmm…lol. Loved drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?”, Oh yes! very direct Alice!! Mmm, I like it. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next? You are SUCH a tease!. Btw your dorkiness and personality that shines thru in your stories cracks me up so bad… and now you seem to be a poet!!LMAO! Post soon.Thanks.