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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 4
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Previously…
"Dana, do you want me?" Dana was speechless. She had been down this road once before and it ended badly. She had no desire to repeat that terrible night.
"Alice, let’s just go to bed ok? We can talk in the morning."
"NO!" Alice shouted. Dana was surprised at the sudden outburst. "Dana, that’s what you said last time and look what’s happened?" Alice waited for this to sink in before she repeated her question. "Dane…do you want me?"
Dana swallowed hard. Something about the way Alice was looking at her told her to put herself out there again. She didn’t want to, but she wasn’t a liar either.
"I do." she stated honestly
Alice slid up against the brunette and brought her face inches from her own. "Well that’s good Dana. Because I want you so bad." And then Alice crashed her lips down onto Dana’s.
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They wrapped their arms around each other as the kiss grew in intensity. Dana moaned as Alice sucked on her lips and then pushed her tongue into her mouth. She couldn’t believe this was happening. She could feel the writers hardened nipples rubbing against her own and felt a shiver run through them both.
"Alice. Wait." Dana gasped as the blond latched onto her pulse point. Dana wanted this more than she had wanted anything in her entire life, but Alice was drunk. Dana felt like she would be taking advantage of her. She wanted their first time to be special, and making love to Alice while she was intoxicated was far from special. So she gently pushed her friend off of her.
Alice growled and pinned Dana’s hands above her head as she went back to work on her neck. Dana hand to bite down on the moan that was threatening to escape her lips. ‘Come on Dana. This is not how you want her!’ She told herself.
"Al…Alice. Stop." Dana whimpered. She swallowed hard and hooked her leg through Alice’s so she could roll them over, effectively reversing their positions. Now Dana was on top, staring down at a smiling Alice.
"Well Dana, if you wanted to top me, all you had to do was ask." Alice said slyly, winking at Dana.
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Ok, now I trust you when you say your a huge Danish fan so im going along with the heartbreak for now……. I know it will continue to be an awesome story. I love your writing, you get the characters really well. Keep up the good work and post again soon please xx
That was sad. I wonder what other torture we’ll have to endure before they come to their senses…
Oh, the angst. Well, after the angst usually comes one hell of a make-up! (hint,hint;) You never cease to amaze me, lol. I can’t wait to see what happens next, but hopefully it’ll be just a bit happier:) One can still wish, right? Loved it, and I hope there’s more on the way, SOON!
ok, i’m sad now. but, it’s ok, because i know this isn’t over. great update, looking forward to the next.
Damn…that had me in such tears. So, so sad. I feel so damn bad for Dana. It’s awful. I really truly hope this works out. come on girl, you can’t bring me down now! Please bring them together :) I love Dana and Alice too. You put so much emotion into this, i wonder if I could ever write like you. I don’t know…but please continue soon. I loveeeee it! You’re fantastic
Dammit. That actually made me tear up. I’m blaming it on the fact that I’m PMSing like a bitch, and my emotions are all whacked out. It’s horrible I’m invested in fictional characters so much! Tragic chapter, but excellent all the while. You write these two so fucking well together! IC needs to take notes from you! I hope these two work things out, and soon. Sad Danish makes me sad! By the way, sorry I haven’t kept up with our little deal. I’ll update tonight!
Noooooo, that hurt. But I have faith in you. I hope to see some Danish love soon. thanks for posting.
OMG that hurt, you have just gone and broken my heart and i am sat here with tears in my eyes. You always amaze me how well you write Danish and it makes your stories seem very real. Alice bein the one to break it up with Dana put an interesting new twist in it for me because i hated clingy Alice in the show. Kinda ok with the drama, cos love will find a way! right?. More, more, more…pleeeese. Thanks.
Damn Gabby Deveaux indeed! lol I have watched Season 1 so many times I can practically recite the words off-by-heart (not sure I should be admitting that in public – might make me sound a bit obsessive but oh well!) so yeah I got the Rejuvenation link lol, fab chapter as per usual, more tension and angst but it works well because I know you can’t keep them apart! Can’t wait for more, love it love it love it!
This was fabulous…so well written, that I found myself shaking my head at Alice saying NOOOOOO!!! lol Thanks!
complicated folk they r!! proceed plz!!
I didn’t know that fan fiction stories could get to me so much but this story of yours is amazing. Tears were rolling down my face (ahhh) but I wouldn’t miss it for the world. Believe me I still trust you but please make them happy really soon I don’t think my poor heart can take it! btw two chapters so fast “woehoe” Loved it!
LOL, see, even the writer is pissed with the direction this story is taking. :P I agree with Shane, these two are so fucking stupid, their stuborness is always in the way. I think if these two would be put on a desert island and they would be the only people around,they still find a way to mess things up. :) I hope Alice can overcome her fears and will be doing some re-thinking on the whole friendship-thing. I’ll hang in there…even if it will take ages to get them (back) together. :D Btw, in my last comment I forgot to mention that I loved the fact that Dana fell into her own joke. I was LMAO at that point! :D