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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 4
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"Alice, we can’t do this."
"Why the fuck not?" Alice protested.
"Because you are trashed out of your head, Al." Dana said evenly.
"Well that doesn’t mean I don’t know what I fucking want." Alice bucked her hips up into Dana, causing their centers to grind together. They both moaned at this. Dana accidently loosened her grip on one of Alice’s hands in the process and Alice didn’t waste anytime, burying her fingers into Dana.
"Oh Fuck, Alice!" Dana through her head back. All of her common sense going right out the window as the woman she had loved for years began to thrust her fingers into her.
"I know what you want baby." Alice said as she began to rub her thumb around Dana’s clit.
When Dana finally registered what Alice had said, she remember that she was supposed to be putting a stop to this. She reached down and yanked Alice’s hand away, springing off the bed to get away from her. She stood against the wall, trying to get her breathing back under control as she re-adjusted her panties. She watched as Alice took a deep breath and then threw her arms over her face, as if shielding her eyes from a bright light.
"Dana…….WHAT THE FUUUUCK?" Alice whined, her arms still covering her face.
"Al, can we just sleep tonight and talk in the morning? Please.?" Dana begged, walking carefully to her side of the bed.
Alice finally removed her arms from her face to look at the athlete. "Dana…I don’t want to sleep." Alice said firmly.
"Alice, we can’t do this like this. Please…" Dana was pleading for some part of the rational Alice to hear her and understand.
Alice looked at her and slowly reached out her hand to the brunette.
"Come here Dana." Dana hesitated. "Dana, I’ll behave." Dana could see the truth in those big brown eyes and so she excepted her hand, letting Alice pull her back onto the bed.
Alice turned on her side and wrapped Dana’s arm around her. Dana sighed in gratitude and pressed her body close to the blonds. She held her tightly as she spooned her from behind, hoping that Alice would remember all of this in the morning…and then maybe they could pick up where they left off. She placed a gentle kiss on the writers shoulder and smiled as she could already hear the soft snore coming from her friend.
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Ok, now I trust you when you say your a huge Danish fan so im going along with the heartbreak for now……. I know it will continue to be an awesome story. I love your writing, you get the characters really well. Keep up the good work and post again soon please xx
That was sad. I wonder what other torture we’ll have to endure before they come to their senses…
Oh, the angst. Well, after the angst usually comes one hell of a make-up! (hint,hint;) You never cease to amaze me, lol. I can’t wait to see what happens next, but hopefully it’ll be just a bit happier:) One can still wish, right? Loved it, and I hope there’s more on the way, SOON!
ok, i’m sad now. but, it’s ok, because i know this isn’t over. great update, looking forward to the next.
Damn…that had me in such tears. So, so sad. I feel so damn bad for Dana. It’s awful. I really truly hope this works out. come on girl, you can’t bring me down now! Please bring them together :) I love Dana and Alice too. You put so much emotion into this, i wonder if I could ever write like you. I don’t know…but please continue soon. I loveeeee it! You’re fantastic
Dammit. That actually made me tear up. I’m blaming it on the fact that I’m PMSing like a bitch, and my emotions are all whacked out. It’s horrible I’m invested in fictional characters so much! Tragic chapter, but excellent all the while. You write these two so fucking well together! IC needs to take notes from you! I hope these two work things out, and soon. Sad Danish makes me sad! By the way, sorry I haven’t kept up with our little deal. I’ll update tonight!
Noooooo, that hurt. But I have faith in you. I hope to see some Danish love soon. thanks for posting.
OMG that hurt, you have just gone and broken my heart and i am sat here with tears in my eyes. You always amaze me how well you write Danish and it makes your stories seem very real. Alice bein the one to break it up with Dana put an interesting new twist in it for me because i hated clingy Alice in the show. Kinda ok with the drama, cos love will find a way! right?. More, more, more…pleeeese. Thanks.
Damn Gabby Deveaux indeed! lol I have watched Season 1 so many times I can practically recite the words off-by-heart (not sure I should be admitting that in public – might make me sound a bit obsessive but oh well!) so yeah I got the Rejuvenation link lol, fab chapter as per usual, more tension and angst but it works well because I know you can’t keep them apart! Can’t wait for more, love it love it love it!
This was fabulous…so well written, that I found myself shaking my head at Alice saying NOOOOOO!!! lol Thanks!
complicated folk they r!! proceed plz!!
I didn’t know that fan fiction stories could get to me so much but this story of yours is amazing. Tears were rolling down my face (ahhh) but I wouldn’t miss it for the world. Believe me I still trust you but please make them happy really soon I don’t think my poor heart can take it! btw two chapters so fast “woehoe” Loved it!
LOL, see, even the writer is pissed with the direction this story is taking. :P I agree with Shane, these two are so fucking stupid, their stuborness is always in the way. I think if these two would be put on a desert island and they would be the only people around,they still find a way to mess things up. :) I hope Alice can overcome her fears and will be doing some re-thinking on the whole friendship-thing. I’ll hang in there…even if it will take ages to get them (back) together. :D Btw, in my last comment I forgot to mention that I loved the fact that Dana fell into her own joke. I was LMAO at that point! :D