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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 4
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Dana stood there dumb founded. ‘How much of this could have been avoided if we weren’t so fucking stubborn?’ She wondered.
"Alice…" She said softly, all the anger out of her voice now. She reached her hand up to cup the writers cheek. "Here we are again. Why is this so hard?" Dana asked.
Alice leaned into the caress and closed her eyes for a moment. "I don’t know Dana. But I hate the way this feels…fighting with you…it hurts." Alice said seriously.
"I know…what do we do now?" Dana asked with sadness.
"I don’t know. I really don’t know Dane. I know what I want, but…I don’t want it to be like this. I would rather just be friends than this…you know?" Alice looked at the beautiful woman in front of her for some sort of reassurance, but she what she saw was pain and confusion.
"I do….but, Alice…can’t we just take it slow?" Dana pleaded. She wasn’t ready to give up yet.
Alice heard the hopefulness in Dana’s voice and felt more tears begin to fall.
"Dane, look at what’s happening. We are tearing each other apart. We’ve been friends for years and in one week, we are practically strangers. That’s not what I want for us…I need you in my life Dana. Even if it’s only as a friend." Dana pulled her hand off of Alice’s cheek and covered her mouth as a sob escaped.
"Alice please…I need you so much…I can’t go back." Dana cried.
Alice was fighting back her own sobs as she pulled Dana to her. "Shhh. Dana. You will always have me. It’s better this way." Dana shuddered in her arms and shook her head fiercely,
"No. No. No. It’s not Alice." Her words were muffled but Alice had heard them all.
She pulled Dana back slightly and placed a tender, tear soaked kiss on her lips. "Dana, we’re gonna be okay." She cried, resting her forehead on the brunettes.
"Noooo…."Dana sobbed.
"We will…" Alice was having a hard time speaking through her tears. "We will Dana." She whispered. She leaned in for one last kiss and melted as Dana met her half way. The kiss was meant to be chaste, a goodbye kiss of sorts, but Alice found herself being drawn in as Dana pulled her close. Their tongues met with fiery passion and they both shuddered at the intensity.
Alice pulled away shaking her head. "I can’t Dana. I can’t. It’s too hard." She had to turn away. She couldn’t look her friend in the eye. It was just too hard. She walked back up the steps of her apartment building and paused at the door for a moment. With her back still toward Dana, she said, "We’ll be ok Dana. Somehow, will be ok." and then she closed the door behind her, willing herself to believe her own words. She got out her phone and made a call before she got back to her apartment and crawled into bed, tired and empty.
Dana could only stand and watch as the woman she had loved for years walked away from her. She sank to the ground, broken and empty. She didn’t know how long she had been there, crying and rocking back and forth, when she felt a gentle touch on her shoulder. "Alice!?!" She looked up quickly, hoping that it was her Alice, coming to say she had changed her mind. Instead, she saw Shane wearing a worried look as she pulled her up off the ground.
"Come on Dana. Let’s get you home." Shane wrapped her arms tightly around her friend as she led her to her car.
"It’s over Shane….It’s over." Dana felt Shane buckling her in and she finally passed out from the exhaustion, the writer’s name on her lips.
Shane shook her head in sadness. "So fucking stupid. You two are so fucking stupid." Shane stated as she drove off.
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Ok, now I trust you when you say your a huge Danish fan so im going along with the heartbreak for now……. I know it will continue to be an awesome story. I love your writing, you get the characters really well. Keep up the good work and post again soon please xx
That was sad. I wonder what other torture we’ll have to endure before they come to their senses…
Oh, the angst. Well, after the angst usually comes one hell of a make-up! (hint,hint;) You never cease to amaze me, lol. I can’t wait to see what happens next, but hopefully it’ll be just a bit happier:) One can still wish, right? Loved it, and I hope there’s more on the way, SOON!
ok, i’m sad now. but, it’s ok, because i know this isn’t over. great update, looking forward to the next.
Damn…that had me in such tears. So, so sad. I feel so damn bad for Dana. It’s awful. I really truly hope this works out. come on girl, you can’t bring me down now! Please bring them together :) I love Dana and Alice too. You put so much emotion into this, i wonder if I could ever write like you. I don’t know…but please continue soon. I loveeeee it! You’re fantastic
Dammit. That actually made me tear up. I’m blaming it on the fact that I’m PMSing like a bitch, and my emotions are all whacked out. It’s horrible I’m invested in fictional characters so much! Tragic chapter, but excellent all the while. You write these two so fucking well together! IC needs to take notes from you! I hope these two work things out, and soon. Sad Danish makes me sad! By the way, sorry I haven’t kept up with our little deal. I’ll update tonight!
Noooooo, that hurt. But I have faith in you. I hope to see some Danish love soon. thanks for posting.
OMG that hurt, you have just gone and broken my heart and i am sat here with tears in my eyes. You always amaze me how well you write Danish and it makes your stories seem very real. Alice bein the one to break it up with Dana put an interesting new twist in it for me because i hated clingy Alice in the show. Kinda ok with the drama, cos love will find a way! right?. More, more, more…pleeeese. Thanks.
Damn Gabby Deveaux indeed! lol I have watched Season 1 so many times I can practically recite the words off-by-heart (not sure I should be admitting that in public – might make me sound a bit obsessive but oh well!) so yeah I got the Rejuvenation link lol, fab chapter as per usual, more tension and angst but it works well because I know you can’t keep them apart! Can’t wait for more, love it love it love it!
This was fabulous…so well written, that I found myself shaking my head at Alice saying NOOOOOO!!! lol Thanks!
complicated folk they r!! proceed plz!!
I didn’t know that fan fiction stories could get to me so much but this story of yours is amazing. Tears were rolling down my face (ahhh) but I wouldn’t miss it for the world. Believe me I still trust you but please make them happy really soon I don’t think my poor heart can take it! btw two chapters so fast “woehoe” Loved it!
LOL, see, even the writer is pissed with the direction this story is taking. :P I agree with Shane, these two are so fucking stupid, their stuborness is always in the way. I think if these two would be put on a desert island and they would be the only people around,they still find a way to mess things up. :) I hope Alice can overcome her fears and will be doing some re-thinking on the whole friendship-thing. I’ll hang in there…even if it will take ages to get them (back) together. :D Btw, in my last comment I forgot to mention that I loved the fact that Dana fell into her own joke. I was LMAO at that point! :D