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A Different Time, The Same Place
"Are you sure Dana? I don’t want to impose or anything…"Alice said quietly.
"Al, of course you’re staying with me." Dana called the police and reported a break in at Alice’s apartment. She made sure to leave her name. Being famous had it’s advantages. She waited until she heard the sound of sirens coming and then drove off to her condo. The police would handle the rest.
Alice was sitting quietly, trying to think of something to say to break the silence that they found themselves in yet again.
"Dana…" Alice started but Dana cut her off.
"Alice I just don’t fucking understand you sometimes." Alice shot her head up to look at Dana. "I mean…how do yo always end up in such fucked up relationships? Huh? Seriously Al, it’s like you go looking for trouble. Why can’t you fall for someone nice? Someone who actually gives a shit…" Dana was on a roll and she knew she was most likely hurting her friend, but she just wanted to know why the bad guys always won…and she always lost. "Are you just scared? Is that it? You make out with everyone and act like it’s a joke…you date people who are obviously no good for you…fuck Alice…what do you see in them?" Dana couldn’t believe what she had just said. She was ashamed and couldn’t meet Alice’s eyes. She faced ahead as then pulled into her driveway and waited for her friend to yell at her, tell her to fuck off, maybe even slap her. But nothing came. She parked the car and slowly turned her head to meet the writes eyes. What she saw, broke her heart.
Alice was looking straight at her, with silent tears streaming down her face. Dana had never seen her friend look so hurt in her entire life. ‘Well congratulations Dana. Maybe now she’ll hook up with you. Now you are just as big of an ass hole as all the others.’ she thought bitterly.
"Al…Al I’m sorry. I was out of line…shit Alice. Please don’t cry." Dana reached her hand out to rub Alice’s shoulder but the writer pulled away sharply.
"Don’t you fucking touch me Dana." Alice got out of the car and started running toward the beach. She could hear Dana calling after her but she just kept on running. She was so deeply hurt by Dana’s words and wondered if they could ever heal from this night.
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(21 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
Yay! This is great!
awwww this is so fucking sweet! i can’t wait to read more! you’ve put me in such a good mood lol greatness, please update soon!
I’m with Jazzy, I thought Danish would disappear and I’m so glad we have writers like you to keep danish alive. Great start! -x-
BRILLIANT story, I love Danish and I love the way you write about them. I hope you update soon!
god I love reading your stories. It’s like living in happy Danish Land if there was such a place. haha. thanks for the post!
Oh yes we have happy Danish land again WooHoo,haha. I love the early beginnings of how Alice and Dana merged from friendship to relationship.Reading all their thoughts and the emotions they went thru. Nice start so please keep goin. Thanks.
Yippee – another Danish story from you – fantastic. Wonderful start, hope to read more soon.
fantastic. that was awesome. post soon.
ok ok u KNOW im in love with ur iaby story but this! this was wonderful! you’ve got competition with your other story! lol i really really do hope you countinue this! B4 everything here used to be clouded up with tibetteness but NOW its all covered up with Danish! so hooray! again just awesome! :)
Ummm yeah… this is awesome!! Please continue this story.
Awww I love Danish, and this is the best one I’ve read lately, You’re an amazing writer, you captured the group of friends perfectly! Hope you update soon!
yay more danish!(and early danish too – my favourite lol!) this is a fab start, i love your writing! hope to read more soon… its so beautiful!
Great story, hope you give us many more. Keep it up.
woot woot more danish!!!!! Love this beginning, hope you post soon!!
Ok, first, let me pick my jaw up from the floor. That was so…so…damn! I dont even have a word for it. Fucking GREAT start to a story! Loved every word of it! I have to admit, I feel really threatened by your writing right now! Ha ha. Please continue SOON! :-)
Nice work! It was a really great chapter, I feel hooked already!
Man, I really hope you continue this and soon! If only the show couldv’e been written like this:) I love it, and I hope you post more for both of your stories!
Yes! Looking forward to the next post!
And here I was thinking that after Dana’s death on the show the number of Danish stories would decrease. Man, could I have been more wrong? :) I’m a sucker for stories where they for the first time realize they have feelings for each other (and act on it). :D
wow – I love it!