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A Different Time, The Same Place
Dana was catching up to Alice, her training put Alice at a major disadvantage and they both knew it. Dana grabbed one of the blondes wrists and pulled her to a stop.
"Alice just wait a minute." Dana said breathing heavily.
"Dana, I said don’t touch me!" Alice screamed and ripped her hand out of the athletes. She was still crying and cursed herself for being so weak and letting Dana’s words hurt her so badly.
"Alice…" Dana didn’t know what to do. She wanted to tell her how sorry she was and hold her, but Alice was obviously not having that.
"What did I fucking do to you Dana? I’m sorry that I asked to crash at your place for the night. I didn’t realize what a burden I would be. I didn’t think my best friend would chew me a new fucking ass hole and treat me shittier than the ass hole in my apartment! I’ll call a fucking cab and get out of your hair. You didn’t have to agree to this you know. Jesus, Dana." Alice was so hurt and angry. She wiped some of the tears away and started back towards Dana’s condo.
"Al…I’m sorry. That’s not what this is about. I…I just…wait a second." Dana was searching for the right words when Alice cut her off.
"You just what Dana??? What do you want? What to you fucking want from me?" Alice was exhausted from the events of the night. She just wanted Dana to either tell her to leave or shut up and let her get some sleep.
Dana put herself in front of the blonde and reached up to wipe the tears off of her face. Alice was eyeing her warily as Dana tenderly dried her cheeks with her thumbs. Alice shivered slightly at the feel of the soft caress. She didn’t understand any of this. She didn’t understand her feelings and how she could have gone so long without realizing how she felt. She didn’t understand why Dana had been so cruel. And now, she didn’t understand why Dana was looking at her like she was. It was that same damn look she had seen a few times earlier that night. She was supposed to be her best friend. She thought she knew all of her looks, but this one was a mystery.
Dana tucked a few stray strands of hair behind Alice’s ear and admired the way the moonlight was playing on her skin. She looked like an angel. And then there were those eyes. So dark and penetrating. They could always see straight into her. They were the most beautiful and expressive eyes she had ever seen. Dana never grew tired of looking into them. Every chance she got, she would study them and memorize the way they would change with the owners moods. When Alice was happy, they were so big and bright. When she was sad, it was as if they clouded up, hiding their sparkle from the world. When she was angry, they glared with intensity. Then there was the mischievous sparkle they took on whenever Alice had something up her sleeve, or the way they got even more brown when she was concentrating hard on something. She had a look for every emotion and Dana knew them all. Right now, they were looking at her, wide and wondering. ‘What do I want from her? How do I answer that?’ Dana asked herself.
"Alice, you have the most beautiful eyes…" Dana trailed off staring deeply into those eyes. She rubbed her fingers over the soft cheek that her hand was still cupping and then carefully traced the writers lips with her thumb as she continued. "What do I want from you?" Dana was trying to hide the tremble in her voice. ‘This is it. Now or never.’ she told herself. "I want you to quit dating all those ass holes Alice…I want you to take as good care of yourself as you do others…and I want…" Dana swallowed hard before finishing. "I want you Alice…I want you."
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(21 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
Yay! This is great!
awwww this is so fucking sweet! i can’t wait to read more! you’ve put me in such a good mood lol greatness, please update soon!
I’m with Jazzy, I thought Danish would disappear and I’m so glad we have writers like you to keep danish alive. Great start! -x-
BRILLIANT story, I love Danish and I love the way you write about them. I hope you update soon!
god I love reading your stories. It’s like living in happy Danish Land if there was such a place. haha. thanks for the post!
Oh yes we have happy Danish land again WooHoo,haha. I love the early beginnings of how Alice and Dana merged from friendship to relationship.Reading all their thoughts and the emotions they went thru. Nice start so please keep goin. Thanks.
Yippee – another Danish story from you – fantastic. Wonderful start, hope to read more soon.
fantastic. that was awesome. post soon.
ok ok u KNOW im in love with ur iaby story but this! this was wonderful! you’ve got competition with your other story! lol i really really do hope you countinue this! B4 everything here used to be clouded up with tibetteness but NOW its all covered up with Danish! so hooray! again just awesome! :)
Ummm yeah… this is awesome!! Please continue this story.
Awww I love Danish, and this is the best one I’ve read lately, You’re an amazing writer, you captured the group of friends perfectly! Hope you update soon!
yay more danish!(and early danish too – my favourite lol!) this is a fab start, i love your writing! hope to read more soon… its so beautiful!
Great story, hope you give us many more. Keep it up.
woot woot more danish!!!!! Love this beginning, hope you post soon!!
Ok, first, let me pick my jaw up from the floor. That was so…so…damn! I dont even have a word for it. Fucking GREAT start to a story! Loved every word of it! I have to admit, I feel really threatened by your writing right now! Ha ha. Please continue SOON! :-)
Nice work! It was a really great chapter, I feel hooked already!
Man, I really hope you continue this and soon! If only the show couldv’e been written like this:) I love it, and I hope you post more for both of your stories!
Yes! Looking forward to the next post!
And here I was thinking that after Dana’s death on the show the number of Danish stories would decrease. Man, could I have been more wrong? :) I’m a sucker for stories where they for the first time realize they have feelings for each other (and act on it). :D
wow – I love it!