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A Different Time, The Same Place
"So…what’s the problem then?" Dana tried to keep the anger out of her voice. Luckily Alice was too distracted to hear it.
"Dana, do you think I could maybe come home with you tonight?" Alice turned to look at her best friend. She realized that things were a little strained right now between them but, she did not want to see Jared right now.
"Alice, you don’t’ want to stay at your own place with your boyfriend?" Dana had about had it at this point. ‘Is she purposely trying to kill me here?’ she thought.
"Dane, I broke up with him earlier this week but he won’t leave me the fuck alone. He must have used my hidden spare key to get in. Shit. I can’t believe I told him about it…." Alice trailed off turning back toward the window to look at her apartment.
Dana was torn because she was now worried about her friend, but she still didn’t like the idea of Alice staying over after everything that had just happened.
"Alice, why don’t you just go in there and throw his ass out?" Alice turned back to Dana.
"Well…he’s big Dana…and he got a little rough when I broke up with him. I don’t want to call the cops because he’s really a nice guy…deep down…I just…He’ll leave eventually…I’m sorry. Forget it. I’ll go talk to him." Alice reached for the door handle and felt a hand on her shoulder.
"Alice, did he hurt you?" Dana had forgotten all about her anger and frustration when Alice had told her about Jared’s behavior. "Al, if he laid one fucking finger on you, I will go beat the shit out of him right now.!" Dana was furious. How did Alice always manages to hook up with such horrible people. Dana would do anything for the writer’s affections, and these people got to have a part of her she never could.
"Dane, he just pushed me around a little. I don’t want you to get in the middle of this. I will figure it out."
"Well you are fucking staying with me and I am calling the police right now." Alice was surprised at the protectiveness she heard in Dana’s voice. It made her heart beat a little faster. Alice thought this was a bad time to be thinking about that again.
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(21 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
Yay! This is great!
awwww this is so fucking sweet! i can’t wait to read more! you’ve put me in such a good mood lol greatness, please update soon!
I’m with Jazzy, I thought Danish would disappear and I’m so glad we have writers like you to keep danish alive. Great start! -x-
BRILLIANT story, I love Danish and I love the way you write about them. I hope you update soon!
god I love reading your stories. It’s like living in happy Danish Land if there was such a place. haha. thanks for the post!
Oh yes we have happy Danish land again WooHoo,haha. I love the early beginnings of how Alice and Dana merged from friendship to relationship.Reading all their thoughts and the emotions they went thru. Nice start so please keep goin. Thanks.
Yippee – another Danish story from you – fantastic. Wonderful start, hope to read more soon.
fantastic. that was awesome. post soon.
ok ok u KNOW im in love with ur iaby story but this! this was wonderful! you’ve got competition with your other story! lol i really really do hope you countinue this! B4 everything here used to be clouded up with tibetteness but NOW its all covered up with Danish! so hooray! again just awesome! :)
Ummm yeah… this is awesome!! Please continue this story.
Awww I love Danish, and this is the best one I’ve read lately, You’re an amazing writer, you captured the group of friends perfectly! Hope you update soon!
yay more danish!(and early danish too – my favourite lol!) this is a fab start, i love your writing! hope to read more soon… its so beautiful!
Great story, hope you give us many more. Keep it up.
woot woot more danish!!!!! Love this beginning, hope you post soon!!
Ok, first, let me pick my jaw up from the floor. That was so…so…damn! I dont even have a word for it. Fucking GREAT start to a story! Loved every word of it! I have to admit, I feel really threatened by your writing right now! Ha ha. Please continue SOON! :-)
Nice work! It was a really great chapter, I feel hooked already!
Man, I really hope you continue this and soon! If only the show couldv’e been written like this:) I love it, and I hope you post more for both of your stories!
Yes! Looking forward to the next post!
And here I was thinking that after Dana’s death on the show the number of Danish stories would decrease. Man, could I have been more wrong? :) I’m a sucker for stories where they for the first time realize they have feelings for each other (and act on it). :D
wow – I love it!