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A Different Time, The Same Place
"Shut the fuck up Shane. You’re just jealous. Actually, I gotta give the credit to Dana, everybody. Our little closet lezzy here just kissed the fucking daylights out of me." Alice said laughing. The rest of the room joined her in the joke. All except for Dana that is. She was hurt that Alice had turned it into a big laugh. ‘Who the fuck am I kidding? That was just a notch in her belt for crying out loud.’ Dana was upset with herself for believing that Alice actually felt anything in the kiss. She could have sworn that Alice had been as into it as she was. Little did she know that it had shaken Alice to her core. She was so confused and just wanted to get out of there and talk to Dana.
"Guys, I think I am gonna go. I have to get up early for training tomorrow." Dana stated quietly.
Alice heard the sadness in her voice. "You ok Dane?" She asked with concern.
"Yeah. I’m just tired. You can stay if you want. Shane, can you get her home?" Dana asked. Shane nodded her head yes and Dana was heading for the door before Alice had even registered what had just happened.
"Dana wait!" she shouted. She walked to the door with Dana and stepped outside with her. "Are you sure you are ok? I’m sorry about that in there. Too much to drink." Alice said.
Dana nodded her head in understanding, fighting the urge to cry. "Yeah sure. No problem. It was just a kiss Al. Apparently you have had many. Why should it be any different with us?" Dana was shocked at how harsh that all just sounded. She looked up in time to see Alice wince at her response. "Shit Al. I’m sorry. That came out harsh. I just need to get to bed I think."
Alice looked at her closely before she spoke. "Hang on one sec. Ok Dane?" she waited for the athlete to agree. When she did, she turned back into the house and left Dana by herself on the front step. "Christ! What were you thinking Dana!" she said out loud into the cool night air.
Just then she heard the door slam and turned to see Alice looking at her with questioning eyes. She had her purse with her and her shoes on.
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(21 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
Yay! This is great!
awwww this is so fucking sweet! i can’t wait to read more! you’ve put me in such a good mood lol greatness, please update soon!
I’m with Jazzy, I thought Danish would disappear and I’m so glad we have writers like you to keep danish alive. Great start! -x-
BRILLIANT story, I love Danish and I love the way you write about them. I hope you update soon!
god I love reading your stories. It’s like living in happy Danish Land if there was such a place. haha. thanks for the post!
Oh yes we have happy Danish land again WooHoo,haha. I love the early beginnings of how Alice and Dana merged from friendship to relationship.Reading all their thoughts and the emotions they went thru. Nice start so please keep goin. Thanks.
Yippee – another Danish story from you – fantastic. Wonderful start, hope to read more soon.
fantastic. that was awesome. post soon.
ok ok u KNOW im in love with ur iaby story but this! this was wonderful! you’ve got competition with your other story! lol i really really do hope you countinue this! B4 everything here used to be clouded up with tibetteness but NOW its all covered up with Danish! so hooray! again just awesome! :)
Ummm yeah… this is awesome!! Please continue this story.
Awww I love Danish, and this is the best one I’ve read lately, You’re an amazing writer, you captured the group of friends perfectly! Hope you update soon!
yay more danish!(and early danish too – my favourite lol!) this is a fab start, i love your writing! hope to read more soon… its so beautiful!
Great story, hope you give us many more. Keep it up.
woot woot more danish!!!!! Love this beginning, hope you post soon!!
Ok, first, let me pick my jaw up from the floor. That was so…so…damn! I dont even have a word for it. Fucking GREAT start to a story! Loved every word of it! I have to admit, I feel really threatened by your writing right now! Ha ha. Please continue SOON! :-)
Nice work! It was a really great chapter, I feel hooked already!
Man, I really hope you continue this and soon! If only the show couldv’e been written like this:) I love it, and I hope you post more for both of your stories!
Yes! Looking forward to the next post!
And here I was thinking that after Dana’s death on the show the number of Danish stories would decrease. Man, could I have been more wrong? :) I’m a sucker for stories where they for the first time realize they have feelings for each other (and act on it). :D
wow – I love it!