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A Discourse on Desire…chapter 11
So Tina came over. Bette spent the five minutes before she came frantically changing. She was still in her pajamas. She changed into a black tanktop and deep blue jeans that were not too tight but not too loose. Comfortable clothes for a comfortable talk. Bette went into the kitchen and put a kettle to boil water for tea. You know, it was polite. When the knock came Bette jumped five feet. Why was she so ***** nervous? There was nothing going on, this was a friendly chat cuz Bette was now a friendly person. Well a person in a serious rut, maybe tina could get her out of it. So Bette opened the door after a deep breath and smiled hugely for her friend. Tina smiled back and came in bearing a C.D and some art books…”I thought you’d like to take a look at these, since your into art” Bette took the books and thanked her, led her into the dining room. Bette was glad she cleaned up eariler. She hardly cleaned, in fact messiness was one of her vices, maybe it was nerves that made her clean like a psycho. O Well. At least T.v dinners weren’t on the couch anymore, that was a Paxton vice. Bette was glad he was gone. It felt like a big weight off of her. Which was bad, her husband should not be a weight. Dammit. Now she was tihnking about PAx! what a cloud-bringer, she was still feeling so guilty for being so mean. And she used to be so gentle and kind to him. She loved him. Bette still loved him. Things just felt…a little different. Bette knew if Paxton changed their marriage would be better, or maybe Bette just had to re-adjust. Pax had been together long enough to get used to each other and used to each other’s habits and moods. They got along. Maybe this was just a nasty phase. The four-year slump.Bette was so wrapped up with herself she didn’t stop to think how Tina felt. All that was going through Bette’s mind was her confusing feelings aobut Tina, her feelings to Paxton adn her marriage, and her general dissatisfaction with her life. She was 27 years old and she wanted so much more. She wanted her own gallery, wanted her husband to get it together and stop acting like a *****, wanted herself to become better. Maybe her problem was empathy. Bette had always had a hard time with that.
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oh my goodness gracious gosh…Pax is home! oh my…
I like your story – it’s unique and fresh!
Oh, God yes! What a way to get there! More, please!
Pax is not home.
Damn this is awesome and so hot, way to go Bette and Tina. This is getting more excited and Pax’s not home, well this time is for Bette and Tina and let see some more hot loving coming. Post soon please, thanks!
Ok cass, I guess it’s safe to say that we can write off mama’s-boy from the story. We got to the love scene so soon, I’m afraid of the drama that will follow, my heart is beating out of my chest. LOL, that’s a good sign!
Holy F##K mental note to self do not read this at lunchbreak!That was awesome and so typical of a first time…lol i assume?lol so dont stop there afterall they have 2 wks!!! lovin it
yes,yes,yes, could we have some more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow cass that was hot. cant wait to see what they do next.
best chapter yet.
Wow. They just went for it! Good for them! Great story, please post again soon!
WOW cassadra quite intense
I liked Tina wanting to look it up on the internet. That hell . They took it on a wing and hope for the best. Thanks
Woops computer wierdness, anyway a gnawing sort of visceral experience to read and I’m sure for Bette and Tina to feel, as well as to fear. Yet there is nothing to fear but fear itself, so what will come? What realizations will filter though? I am looking forward to your next surreal chapter.
damn man great post her marriage is so over!!!!!!!
so know pax can call bette and tell her he’s wants a divorce because she’s gotten to kinky for him and im on the down low.lol