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A Discourse on Desire…chapter 11
Eventually they made it to the bedroom. The atmosphere changed. Now it was awkward. Bette sat on the edge of the bed, taking off her tanktop, unbuttoning her jeans..taking off her underwear and bra. Tina did the same on the other side of the bed. It was a private affair…taking off one’s clothes. Bette turned around and quickly got under the covers. She felt numb. Tina did the same. There was about a foot space between them. Then Tina reached over and took off the covers off of Bette’s body. “I want to look at you” Bette blushed, felt herself shiver. Then felt herself cry. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away….”Shhhhhh….here…we are different people”. Then Tina wrapped her arm around Bette’s body and pulled her closer. she asked Bette if they should really research what to do first. Bette cleared her throat, leaned in and carefully kissed her lover…”Shhh….just tell me what pleases you…..”
After 15 minutes of kissing Bette found herself by Tina’s knee, looking deep into her eyes. Tina was breathing hard, shaking a little bit….Bette could smell Tina’s wetness, she could smell her own wetness. Her excitement. She kissed Tina’s knee..the inside of her thigh…and decided to wing it, try something she hadn’t before. Bette’s lips first kissed Tina’s navel, then she trailed her tongue lower, she kissed the top of Tina’s *****. Reaching up Bette touched her lover’s jaw…Tina’s took Bette’s fingers in her mouth…half-biting them. Bette then used he rother hand to spread Tina. She kissed and then licked….found that she actually liked the taste. It was….different, but pleasing. Bette moved her head, and with her tongue licked from the bottom of Tina’s ***** to the top…one long tongue stroked. Tina was biting hard on Bette’s fingers, Bette winced and touched then probed then put in two fingers in Tina…she was improvising…following Tina’s pleasure sounds. She found out that the combined fingers and her tongue was quite…something. Tina was really starting to hurt Bette’s fingers. So Bette half-bit Tina down there…Tina let out a shocked sound…Bette looked up and apologised. Tina in response pulled Bette’s head back down with her hand.
Bette never thought that such pleasure could be had without a *****. THey talked a lot to be sure…they had to commnicate, for they had the same ***** organs. But they managed. By god they managed! At times it was rough at times gentle…the pace quickened then slowed……Bette found that she delighted in being wanted so badly. Tina would hold her so tightly, she dleighted in the fact that her mouth on Tina’s ***** ilicited those delicate moans. In fact Bette spent a long time working on tina’s *****….until she herself felt a wave go through Tina…which erupted in a gasp. Tina grinned down at her. “My turn…….”
It was early dawn when they finally stopped out of sheer tiredness. Bette lay with her eyes half-closed…the sun barely creeping into her room. Tina was on her side with her head resting on Bette’s chest. They were quiet. They were enjoying this moment. Both fearing the other would suddenly get up and leave. Fearing time itself.
TBC
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oh my goodness gracious gosh…Pax is home! oh my…
I like your story – it’s unique and fresh!
Oh, God yes! What a way to get there! More, please!
Pax is not home.
Damn this is awesome and so hot, way to go Bette and Tina. This is getting more excited and Pax’s not home, well this time is for Bette and Tina and let see some more hot loving coming. Post soon please, thanks!
Ok cass, I guess it’s safe to say that we can write off mama’s-boy from the story. We got to the love scene so soon, I’m afraid of the drama that will follow, my heart is beating out of my chest. LOL, that’s a good sign!
Holy F##K mental note to self do not read this at lunchbreak!That was awesome and so typical of a first time…lol i assume?lol so dont stop there afterall they have 2 wks!!! lovin it
yes,yes,yes, could we have some more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow cass that was hot. cant wait to see what they do next.
best chapter yet.
Wow. They just went for it! Good for them! Great story, please post again soon!
WOW cassadra quite intense
I liked Tina wanting to look it up on the internet. That hell . They took it on a wing and hope for the best. Thanks
Woops computer wierdness, anyway a gnawing sort of visceral experience to read and I’m sure for Bette and Tina to feel, as well as to fear. Yet there is nothing to fear but fear itself, so what will come? What realizations will filter though? I am looking forward to your next surreal chapter.
damn man great post her marriage is so over!!!!!!!
so know pax can call bette and tell her he’s wants a divorce because she’s gotten to kinky for him and im on the down low.lol