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If it makes you happy – Chapter 1
Bette reluctantly retreated from her girlfriends inviting lips and found herself looking into eyes that clearly reflected her own desires.
Do you want to sit here all night and make out or would you rather come in? Bette asked as she nodded back in the direction of her house.
Bette watched as her date raised an eyebrow seemingly surprised at the invitation So Ive finally made it to a rank that warrants taking home, huh?
Its not like that, Abby Bette said as she lowered her gaze.
Then why has it taken two months for you to let me see more than your front door? Abby replied with a teasing lilt but Bette knew there was a serious question masked beneath the light tone.
Reaching a hand behind Abbys head Bette guided the blondes mouth back to her own as she attempted to distract her date rather than answer the question. Their kissing resumed and continued to intensify within the small confines of the sports coupe.
This time it was Abby who pulled away eyeing her girlfriend as she said Nice try but I still expect an answer out of you.
Bette sighed and smiled in defeat before offering Theres no big mystery. Usually I drive and your place is closer to both the gallery and your office so it makes sense that we continually end up back there instead of here. No secrets, Im not stashing a second girlfriend out of sight.
Abby smiled slightly and seemed content with Bettes explanation. She pulled the key from the ignition and said Shall we?
They walked hand in hand along the path and up the front steps. Bette let go as she reached into her purse to find her key. Abby took the opportunity to guide the brunette up against the door and make her intentions for the rest of the evening clear. As her mouth left Bettes following a scorching kiss she trailed a line with her lips up to Bettes ear where she whispered Any skeletons in your closets I should know about before I venture in?
Bette tried to gather her thoughts as Abbys hands continued to roam over her upper body. You know my past, there are no skeletons here She replied slowly, her voice thick with desire God, I want you.
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(45 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
Wow. Great start! Please post again soon!
good to see you are writing again…good start!
I like where this story is going.Great start- post soon!!
Hack! So glad to see you back again! I truly look forward to how you’re going to fix the train wreck that was season three…I enjoy every word you write – so thoughtful and provocative. Thanks for taking the time!
Glad to see you writing again. I’ve missed your style. Big question – can you redeem Tina in anyone’s eyes? That will be impressive! If anyone can…..
a most excellent beginning. Welcome back. You’ve been missed. Please continue :p
What does SHE want?
I’m so happy you’re back. This is a great start but way too short.
This beginning is tantilizing and intriguing. Tina is trouble but oh so tasty.
It take a lot of nerves to go back to the person that you left for someone else. What does Tina want and where is the baby? Just dont let Bette get hurt again,Tina has done enought to her. Where is her boy toy? thanks
this is great start..I can’t wait for the next chapter
This is interesting and yah what the hell is Tina doing there!
As a Tibette fan I am hoping that she and Angelica are both there. That is going to crawl on her hands and knees begging for Bette to at least listen to her. Please continue with this story. I can use a happy Tibette story about now.
woohooo..!! hack is back!bring it on!
hope you come back soon. looking forward to your take on s3 tibette. hopefully you can make some sense out it.
This is interesting start, and like it!
Looks interesting. I hope that their child and I hope you still have it be Angie, is ok.
I’m wondering too. Thanks for writing another story. Love to read your work.
OMG…I can’t tell you how happy I am. You should see the smile on my face. The set up is perfect can’t wait to see how it plays out. Thanks Hack. The Hack Attack is back, Yippie!
No we are all wondering what Tina, is doing at Bette’s house, It seems all is not too happy if for Tina & Henry, where is the baby, as she is sitting waiting for Bette to come home. But I am an B&T fan would love them still get back together.
Oooo, this looks like it’ll be interesting! Great start Hack!
Excellent start :)
Great to see you writing again Hack. Can’t wait to see what Tina wants.
Come on !!! Very nice start but why do people always stop when it starts being very interesting ??? It is a nice idea to have moved on the story to a few months. To see that Bette tried to change her mind is good too. Like the beginning anyway ! thanks !
What Bette needs now is an innocent, loving, comprehensive and know-what-she-wants girlfriend. But of course sometimes it’s different from what you want.
Eager to see what comes next. Thank you for writing!
EXCELLENT START……WAY WAY TOO SHORT!!!! UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!
This is great. Can’t wait to see what happens when she goes back into the house. I have to admit, I’m glad Tina’s there…though she’s got some nerve. Really enjoyable read Hack. I hope you’ll post the next one for the weekend.
great chapter… now let’s find out what Tina has in mind!
ooooo, this looks very interesting!! Yes ehat does the trash bag(Tina) want?
Tina is the one who should have left. And Bette should have changed the lock. Tina’s presumptuous bitch to have barged in to Bette’s home and life like that. If she wanted to talk, she should have called and set up a time like a grown up. (No, not Tina.) What ever she’s up to, it doesn’t bode well that this is the mannner her opening move.
ok, so you’ve got me hooked. now bring it on!!
A new story by you? Yes! Great chapter and a nice start.
I don’t like Abby. lol There I said it. But really I don’t like a lot of people. Yes I realize I’m in the minority here but that’s okay. Ready for the next chapter!
Yeah great start, how what’ next. Good to see you back :o)
i want abby to came back and bette to send tina back to henry
Hey HG, Great to see you posting again on the site. An very intriguing and promising start. Is Bette really able to move on and commit to Abby or will her feelings for Tina re-surface? And what the hell is Tina doing there at 1AM. Hopefully getting the hell away from Henry. Can’t wait to read how this progresses and develops because given your talent and skills it is bound to be a very enjoyable and entertaining ride. Thank you so much as you were missed. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh sweet Jesus, you’re back! And so is Tina. The evil side of me wishes that Bette said, “Tina, can you get off the couch. Abby and I are about to have mind blowing sex on it. Thanks!” I am sooooo looking forward to this story Hackgirl. Please post soon!
Okay, you’ve piqued my interest.
Hey girl, don’t leave it like that. Post soon……… :)
I fully agree with funnyone Tina had NO right to be there. Still, I can’t wait to here whatever crap she has to spew
Nice to see you back Hackgirl, what do you have in store for us. Looking forward to reading more.
Great start! Bring it on. Please continue and MORE PAGESSSSS PLEASE!
Hack s back! Now I will have to visit this site very 2 minutes to see if she has posted an update. I might as well say goodbye to my career. Thanks Hack.
ok u have me hooked now!!! plz continue
Yay!!