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A Few Small Repairs – Chapter 11
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Tina reached out and ran her index finger slowly along Bette’s jaw.
“I think that we’ve talked and thought and planned this for so long that there’s no way it could be wrong.” Tina replied “It’s not all going to happen right now, we’ve got time, we’ll figure it out.”
Bette nodded and forced a small smile in an effort to comfort her wife while she kicked herself. How could she lay all her fears bare before Tina after what happened last time? She needed to show Tina that she would be there, that she was ready. Asking if they’d made the right decision wasn’t exactly a good way to instill confidence.
“Baby, I.” Bette’s sentence was interrupted by the egg timer which began to buzz furiously on her bedside table. Rolling over she turned off the noisy contraption before sitting up and looking over at her wife.
“Ready?” Tina asked as she sat up on the bed.
“Just, give me a minute, T” Bette said as she shifted across the bed so she was sitting by her wife. She reached out and took Tina’s hand in her own “I love you.”
“I know, Babe” Tina replied with an easy smile.
“No, Tina, what I’m trying to say is that I love you and I’ll be here no matter what happens. I’ll be with you.”
Tina nodded “I know you will” she said with a simple assuredness.
“I’m sorry about before, I was just getting a little overwhelmed with everything and I think I” Tina silenced Bette’s rambling by raising a finger to her partner’s lips.
“Baby, its fine” Tina said giving a small nod “You’re nervous. So am I, but this time we’re talking about it and that makes it easier. Time’s up. Will you go look?”
Bette looked into her wife’s eyes for just a second longer and thanked the heavens for Tina’s quiet strength and resilience. Without a word she slipped off the bed and walked into the bathroom.
Tina shifted on the unmade bed until she sat with her legs dangling over the side. She found herself wringing her hands and holding her breath as she waited.
Bette’s face gave nothing away as she crossed the threshold back into their room. She moved slowly to stand in front of Tina. With both hands she cupped Tina’s face and kissed her lover softly. Pulling back from the kiss she studied her wife’s face as though she was seeing Tina anew.
“It was negative, wasn’t it?” Tina said quietly, her voice betrayed the disappointment she was trying to hide. She’d tried to prepare herself for this eventuality but still it hit her hard.
Bette kneeled down between her wife’s legs and ran her hands up along Tina’s pajama bottoms until she reached the hem of the matching top. She released the lower two buttons and pushed the material apart. Leaning in she laid a gentle kiss on Tina’s stomach.
Looking back up at her wife Bette finally spoke “You’re pregnant, Tina.”
Tina opened her mouth to speak but her emotions were overwhelming. There was no need for words, her face lit up with unmistakable joy.
Swallowing the lump in her throat Tina finally whispered “We’re pregnant.”
“We’re pregnant” Bette echoed as her eyes filled with tears and right then, in that moment, Bette knew that life would never be the same again. Her face lit up with a smile of sheer happiness as she reveled in the uncertainty and opportunity that lay before them.
THE END
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Simply Beautiful.
Beautiful story with a sweet ending. Thank you very much for sharing it with us.
Thank you for such a lovely and well written chapter. Please don’t let it be the last repair as there are so many more that are needed.
>She released the lower two buttons and pushed the material apart. Leaning in she laid a gentle kiss on Tina’s stomach> thank you for this. thanks also for this beautiful ending.
Thank you for this beautiful story. Good ending for a great story.
such a wonderful story, i’ve been following it from the beginning and it has been an amazing journey…can’t wait for something new from you
Absolutely wonderful. Beautifully written. Thank you.
well done, great conclusion to the story. look forward to more.
oh that was sooo lovely
Beautiful. Thank you.
That was wonderful. Thank you.
Thanks for the continuation of “YBIYRI”. I guess Bette making such a grand gesture made Tina realised that she really did want to carry the baby after all.
Very nice. I am glad you ended this like the way you did. I agree that this should continue under a different title.
Thanks for the story. I hope to see another from you.
Oh please don’t end this! I have always adored your B&T. I hope you will give us another wonderfully written B&T tale soon.
Hack you are so good. Your writing is full bodied and has varying degrees of emotion and complexities. I don’t realize how much I miss your writing until I read something you have written, and then I’m remember what perfection feels like. I know you are busy, but please come back to us soon, we obviously miss you.
wonderful beginning..and ends juz right. love this. hope another comin up soon?
Wow girl you are so amazing that was incredable. Thanks for telling it
perfectly done- thanks.
Such a pleasure to read your stories! Thank you so much for sharing.
HG, Thank you so, so much for this classic story. The eloquence and beauty that you created touched my heart and soul. I only hope that the muse will strike again and empassion you to craft another fabulous fan fiction that I will enjoy. Gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan. PS – Missing you already from this site.
OMG… :’-) this small repairs just makes the story so perfect! And the ending is so lovely! I do hope you are still around at least for knowing that your stories is heart warming and so touching! :-) thanks HackGirl!!