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A Final Dream – Chapter 10
The gang is supportive, but it’s not the same. I can talk to Carmen, but since she’s with Bette I find it difficult to see her as the confidant she used to be. It’s like there has become a barrier between us. Shane, well… she’s a good listener, and she can give good advice, but I have the feeling I shouldn’t bother her. She’s not always available, either. I also get scared that she’ll get enough of me. I know it wouldn’t be the case, but the fear is there, whereas it’s absent with Bette. Alice’s mouth is too big and I’m just not as close to Lara, Dana and Helena as I am to the others.
Bette just listens to me, doesn’t judge me. She hugs me and she rubs my back and she holds me in her arms. She reassures me, she gives me a peaceful feeling when everything in my world is upside down.
I look around in her room and it feels like I’m invading in a sanctuary. Her computer is on her desk, which looks very structured. My whole room is complete chaos. Her bed is large enough for two and her window is slightly open. I see some pictures of her, mostly posing with a woman that looks a lot like her. I assume it’s her mother. Her black guitar has the most prominent place. It’s very clean and she’s clearly proud of it. There are posters on her walls, all of them women. I think of my own room. I have posters of women, too, but there are also men. I do find them attractive, but they don’t come near the women.
I go over to her desk and see an A4 rubber strap with big letters on it saying “SONGS”. I hesitate – should I open them? I’m curious, but it feels like invading her privacy and I don’t want to do that. I know how it sucks when someone does that – like when my mom wants to read my messages, and wants to know what sites I’m surfing on, who I’m talking to online, what they are saying, what I reply, and then suggest what I should reply. It drives me nuts. I don’t want to do anything that comes near that to anyone else.
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(39 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
dear god woman,how could u leave us there…..i have been waiting for this update all day, now its even worse!!!great job!!!!
That massage was H.O.T !!! Bette, you are in trouble!!!!!Great update!! I can’t wait for the next one ;)
Are you kidding me, you left us hanging here. Bette is gonna die.
What are you doing to us??? That was so hot and you can’t just leave it with a line like that, what’s going to happen??? PPS
Holy craa…p. Fuc….you my freaking heart is racing. Its like I am there. OMG, you can’t stop there, I mean I know they want it all extra special girlfriend/boyfriend free but they are teenagers for gods sake, they act now think later. Its way to hot of up in Bette’s room to stop now. Wheww….Waiting, Drooling for the next post!
(jaw on floor) You did NOT just leave it there!!???!! Oh goodness, something tells me it’s gonna be a long night before they can go and break up with their respective partners! ;) PPS…like today?!
Wow! To be so young Tina sure seems to know what she wants. They both feel it they need to just get it on so Bette can let Carm know what’s going on and Tina can let Gary down easy. PPS
Bette’s not the only one about to pass out…. geez! What a build up!
G – marvelous – simply marvelous. I think I bit my tongue everytime Tina opened her mouth. Wowzer! She sure knows how to tempt Bette. I can’t believe we have to wait for until tomorrow for the next chappie. You’re killing us – PPS!
OH.MY.GOD. please please please keep going! that massage was…. wow. sorry carmen, you belong with shane and Bette and Tina… wow. words. gone. help.
WOW ! That was FAbulous :D
Oh I’m sooo happy I didnnt read this untill just now.I have the good fortune of waiting for the follow up for less time than the poor souls who by now must experiencing quite a bit of twitching – nervous or other wise;-)
what a massage!!! HOT! very place to leave off! :)PPS
hoooo how can u left us like that??? hoo i cant believe it :) tina is great “i