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A Final Dream – Chapter 10
So I decide to just go back to the bed and wait for her. I lie down and inhale her scent. I feel something strange in my stomach and some other places. The scent is so familiar and it gives me a good feeling. I have never really told everything about my mom to anyone, sure as I am that they would think I’m exaggerating – which they would find typical for teenagers. It’s even worse when they know her.
My mother comes across as a nice woman, who has a good bond with her kids and is open for talking. How many times have I heard that people wish they’d have my mom – I am willing to switch any time. When we are at home, she’s a different person. She’s always right and to get that acknowledgement, she’ll come with the most stupid arguments. I can’t say it’s ridicolous, or she’ll ask me if I need a slap. Many times, she says I have to shut up – I’m her daughter and I have to know my place in the hierarchy of the house. As I said before, she wants to know everything and shamelessly invades my privacy. She often comes to me and asks me what is wrong when I am fine – but she won’t give up. She’s convinced something’s wrong, but I can’t tell her because there is nothing wrong, and she won’t believe me, and she gets mad.
I can go on and on about her. There’s so many other stuff that drives me crazy. The thing is, she can be really nice. I have to admit she does a lot for me, so I can’t really say she’s a horrible mom – she isn’t. It’s hard to explain, but I feel like Bette understands. Nobody else ever gave me that feeling.
The tears are streaming freely as I hear the front door opening. I don’t dry my tears, or practice any fake smiles. I can be myself with Bette Porter, and that is something I have never experienced before.
I hear her coming upstairs. When she opens the door, she is panting. She clearly drove like a crazy person. She’s holding my bag, but she drops it as soon as she sees my face. She’s clearly worried.
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(39 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
dear god woman,how could u leave us there…..i have been waiting for this update all day, now its even worse!!!great job!!!!
That massage was H.O.T !!! Bette, you are in trouble!!!!!Great update!! I can’t wait for the next one ;)
Are you kidding me, you left us hanging here. Bette is gonna die.
What are you doing to us??? That was so hot and you can’t just leave it with a line like that, what’s going to happen??? PPS
Holy craa…p. Fuc….you my freaking heart is racing. Its like I am there. OMG, you can’t stop there, I mean I know they want it all extra special girlfriend/boyfriend free but they are teenagers for gods sake, they act now think later. Its way to hot of up in Bette’s room to stop now. Wheww….Waiting, Drooling for the next post!
(jaw on floor) You did NOT just leave it there!!???!! Oh goodness, something tells me it’s gonna be a long night before they can go and break up with their respective partners! ;) PPS…like today?!
Wow! To be so young Tina sure seems to know what she wants. They both feel it they need to just get it on so Bette can let Carm know what’s going on and Tina can let Gary down easy. PPS
Bette’s not the only one about to pass out…. geez! What a build up!
G – marvelous – simply marvelous. I think I bit my tongue everytime Tina opened her mouth. Wowzer! She sure knows how to tempt Bette. I can’t believe we have to wait for until tomorrow for the next chappie. You’re killing us – PPS!
OH.MY.GOD. please please please keep going! that massage was…. wow. sorry carmen, you belong with shane and Bette and Tina… wow. words. gone. help.
WOW ! That was FAbulous :D
Oh I’m sooo happy I didnnt read this untill just now.I have the good fortune of waiting for the follow up for less time than the poor souls who by now must experiencing quite a bit of twitching – nervous or other wise;-)
what a massage!!! HOT! very place to leave off! :)PPS
hoooo how can u left us like that??? hoo i cant believe it :) tina is great “i