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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 26
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 26
Bette leaned in for another kiss. She was lying on top of Tina while Tina’s hands found there way under Bette’s shirt raking over Bette’s soft back. Bette slightly pulled out of the kiss. “T tell me again why we’re not doing this in the bedroom?”
Tina who now had her hand caressing the back of Bette’s neck pulled her back down for another kiss at the end of which she nipped at Bette’s lower lip, eliciting a moan from Bette. “Because if we did this in the bedroom we would take it farther then kissing, and that’ll take more time then we have.”
Bette buried her head in Tina’s neck, lightly kissing her soft skin. “Can I convince you not to drive to San Diego?”
Tina was too distracted to answer right away; she was thoroughly enjoying how Bette was strategically placing kisses in all the right places. “I think you can convince me to do almost anything…”
Bette felt encouraged and increased her efforts, kissing down Tina’s neck to her collarbone. All Tina could feel was Bette’s lips and tongue reverently paying homage to her body. “T what will it take to get you to stay?” Bette was unbuttoning Tina’s pajama top and punctuated her question by letting her tongue reacquaint itself with her T’s right nipple.
Tina felt Bette’s other hand rolling her left nipple between her fingers. She was in ecstasy and Bette was just getting started. Tina forgot that she was in the livingroom and her encouragement for Bette to continue what she was doing was getting louder.
“OOHH BABY RIGHT THERE…”
At hearing Tina Bette’s hand shot up and covered her mouth. Every fiber in Bette wanted to continue to ravish the woman she loved but she knew that if they continued they were bound to wake up Eli. So Bette summed up every bit of willpower and pulled away from her T’s beautiful chest. She looked down at Tina and could see that her T caught on why Bette’s hand was now over her mouth and not around her breast. She removed her hand both were smiling at how easy it was for them to get into such an excited state.
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(53 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
I am glad Bette finally told Melvin how she felt. I am happy there was no San Diego drama with Tina. Love Nero. I can’t wait for B&T to finaly be together…I am sure it will be hot.
Great update. I am so enjoying this story. I love this new, “reconditioned” Bette.
I’m really enjoying this story.
About darn time Bette stood up to Melvin. Cripes.
Fantastic update once again! You really had Melvin down pat, and it’s awesome that Bette confronted him on his crap from the past! Can’t wait for the time B & T finally are able to come together…in that way, ya’ know? Hope school is going well and that you are able to post another nice long chapter very soon!
So glad Bette had the back bone to tell Melvin how she felt.and what she expected from him where Eli and Tina are concerned. thanks so much for posting Post when you have time thanks
This is nice. Really enjoying it. Thanks for writing.
Go Bette..and I hope that Melvin comes around. THanks for the update
great update, i’m glad bette finally chose her family over her father…i’m hoping for a very nice and hot B&T reunion the next day ;)
Finally Bette stood up to her father. I know how difficult that is for Bette, but she now knows how important it is to have Tina and Eli in her life. Loved the little teaser that you gave us at the beginning of the chapter.
great update
LOL@the camping trip! So glad Bette stood up to Melvin. Even better he’s actually considering not being an ass to Tina and Eli.
I SO love this story & always look forward to it!
Great update as always. Bout time Bette stood up to her father. Please make sure Bette keeps in mind that Tina can handle things, and be careful of not trying to handle things for her. I’m soooooooooooooooo looking forward to those two actually hooking up. Too cute about Bette being worried about Eli hearing.
Amazing post once again Toribio!!!! I loved the little heated ‘thing’ on the couch between B&T, so cute and realistic…………and the things Bette told Melvin was spot-on, really great writing. BUUUUT now you can’t hold that NC-17 back much longer LOL and I can’t wait. Post soon, I’m addicted.
I like the new improved Bette and how she finally stood up to Melvin. Thanks for taking the time to write, with your schedule I know it isn’t easy.
I just read all of the chapters from start to finish, and I am just blown away. An absolute gem of a story. I look forward to your update.
great story. Hope Melvin will take a grand pa roll with Eli. How cute!
Good chapter and Bette you go girl. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
Great Update!!!!! Bette was so right to stand up to her father. Thank you
I have been so hanging out for this story and loved it as always…PPS
Great update! Finally Bette had the opportunity to talk Melvin, i hop too that Melvin will take the rigth choise cause he loves Bette in his particular way but he loves her then he must see how happy Bette is. Take it easy we will waiting for your post! good luck in the school
Grrreat chapter! I was kinda hoping that Tina and Eli would be arriving during Bette’s tirade to her father, thus hearing how she stood up to him for her family’s sake, but well, whatever direction you’re taking is great with me, so… I thought you did a great job with Melvin. Leaving some hopes about his decision while still having him in character. Well done! Loved the teaser, that’s very promising for the real thing ya know…;) This ending has me look forward to the reunion between B&T, so please post soon (with all due respect for your school work, it’s great enough to have you share this wonderful story!) Okay, thanks a lot, Toribio!
GREAT update, I like most am glad that Bette finally stood up to Melvin and I believe that Melvin will make the right choice. I can hardly wait until Tina finds out, oh yeah it will be “T” time for Bette. I am looking to Eli meeting Melvin and standing up tall for both his mom and Bette. Poor Bette is soooooo missing her family that are trapped in San Diego while she is home alone. PPS :o)