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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 26
Tina loved the humor she saw in Bette’s eyes, they had talked about how it felt like they were horny teenagers again afraid that they’d be caught fooling around. She knew that they’d have to get over their hang-up about Eli hearing them. “Baby why did you stop?” Tina asked with a big smile.
Bette nestled her head into Tina’s neck. Bette shook her head and started laughing. Part of her was laughing at how sexually frustrated she was and the other part of her was laughing at the situation she now found herself in. Lying on top of her angel her bare breast against hers and she was the one that stopped. A few weeks ago she would have never thought that anyone would distract her from making love to her T, but her thoughts kept drifting back to Eli taking her completely out of the mood. Although Tina wasn’t making it easy her aggressiveness was turning Bette on beyond belief.
“Baby you were getting kind of loud and normally I would consider that an open invitation to bury my head between your legs…That wasn’t an option this time, at least not in our current location.”
Tina hugged Bette to her body both still out of breath. As far as Tina was concerned they were more then ready to move on with their future, and on top of that list was consummating their physical relationship. And if Tina had her way it would have happened last night, but Bette surprised her by expressing her concern that Eli might hear them. She loved that Bette was so considerate of Eli but no matter how much Tina tried to persuade her Bette’s resolve seemed to remain intact. She couldn’t blame Bette she was a little worried about making love to Bette with Eli only a few rooms away, but her need to reclaim Bette was growing. She was trying to put a plan in place to have Eli stay with one of his Aunts for a day or two, her resolve to make it happen was getting stronger by the second.
“Sorry babe but you were making me feel so good and that imagery of where your head would be isn’t helping matters.”
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(53 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
I am glad Bette finally told Melvin how she felt. I am happy there was no San Diego drama with Tina. Love Nero. I can’t wait for B&T to finaly be together…I am sure it will be hot.
Great update. I am so enjoying this story. I love this new, “reconditioned” Bette.
I’m really enjoying this story.
About darn time Bette stood up to Melvin. Cripes.
Fantastic update once again! You really had Melvin down pat, and it’s awesome that Bette confronted him on his crap from the past! Can’t wait for the time B & T finally are able to come together…in that way, ya’ know? Hope school is going well and that you are able to post another nice long chapter very soon!
So glad Bette had the back bone to tell Melvin how she felt.and what she expected from him where Eli and Tina are concerned. thanks so much for posting Post when you have time thanks
This is nice. Really enjoying it. Thanks for writing.
Go Bette..and I hope that Melvin comes around. THanks for the update
great update, i’m glad bette finally chose her family over her father…i’m hoping for a very nice and hot B&T reunion the next day ;)
Finally Bette stood up to her father. I know how difficult that is for Bette, but she now knows how important it is to have Tina and Eli in her life. Loved the little teaser that you gave us at the beginning of the chapter.
great update
LOL@the camping trip! So glad Bette stood up to Melvin. Even better he’s actually considering not being an ass to Tina and Eli.
I SO love this story & always look forward to it!
Great update as always. Bout time Bette stood up to her father. Please make sure Bette keeps in mind that Tina can handle things, and be careful of not trying to handle things for her. I’m soooooooooooooooo looking forward to those two actually hooking up. Too cute about Bette being worried about Eli hearing.
Amazing post once again Toribio!!!! I loved the little heated ‘thing’ on the couch between B&T, so cute and realistic…………and the things Bette told Melvin was spot-on, really great writing. BUUUUT now you can’t hold that NC-17 back much longer LOL and I can’t wait. Post soon, I’m addicted.
I like the new improved Bette and how she finally stood up to Melvin. Thanks for taking the time to write, with your schedule I know it isn’t easy.
I just read all of the chapters from start to finish, and I am just blown away. An absolute gem of a story. I look forward to your update.
great story. Hope Melvin will take a grand pa roll with Eli. How cute!
Good chapter and Bette you go girl. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
Great Update!!!!! Bette was so right to stand up to her father. Thank you
I have been so hanging out for this story and loved it as always…PPS
Great update! Finally Bette had the opportunity to talk Melvin, i hop too that Melvin will take the rigth choise cause he loves Bette in his particular way but he loves her then he must see how happy Bette is. Take it easy we will waiting for your post! good luck in the school
Grrreat chapter! I was kinda hoping that Tina and Eli would be arriving during Bette’s tirade to her father, thus hearing how she stood up to him for her family’s sake, but well, whatever direction you’re taking is great with me, so… I thought you did a great job with Melvin. Leaving some hopes about his decision while still having him in character. Well done! Loved the teaser, that’s very promising for the real thing ya know…;) This ending has me look forward to the reunion between B&T, so please post soon (with all due respect for your school work, it’s great enough to have you share this wonderful story!) Okay, thanks a lot, Toribio!
GREAT update, I like most am glad that Bette finally stood up to Melvin and I believe that Melvin will make the right choice. I can hardly wait until Tina finds out, oh yeah it will be “T” time for Bette. I am looking to Eli meeting Melvin and standing up tall for both his mom and Bette. Poor Bette is soooooo missing her family that are trapped in San Diego while she is home alone. PPS :o)