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A Lifetime – c 2
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“Baby?” Tina asked worriedly.
“I hit the wall, literally,” Bette grumbled.
Bette continued her lovemaking much more carefully and both had to be careful because there were walls on three sides of the narrow bed. Bette preferred to stretch out between Tina’s legs and stroke her with her hands and tongue until Tina was crazy. But that wasn’t going to happen tonight.
“Ahhh,” Tina groaned, gyrating her hips.
“Uhhhhh,” said Bette as she tried to stretch out somewhat. Well, it was impossible because the walls were simply too close.
She tried to lift Tina’s hips and Tina tried to help by arching her back.
“OUCH! Ohhh.” Tina cried as she hit her head, hard, on the wall behind her.
So the loving this night was not only punctuated with moans and groans of pleasure, it was punctuated with “oows,” and “oomphs” of pain as both women, numerous times, hit one of the walls.
But they were young and deeply in love and they managed.
Sometimes when Tina reached the “ready” point, Bette teased her longer to make her climax even stronger, but not tonight. No one had crashed into the walls for the last few moments and Bette hadn’t fallen out of bed, although she had been afraid several times that she might. So it was time.
Tonight there would be no attempted to reach the absolute top. The bed and wall situation might create problems at any moment, so Bette made her move.
They both came fairly powerfully, considering the cramped circumstances of the bed that had certainly compromised their lovemaking. When they finished, Bette moved off Tina being careful not to fall on the floor.
“I have something for you,” Bette said in a few minutes. She cautiously got off the bed and went to her suitcase. While she was doing that, Tina slipped a package from her duffel and hid it under the pillow before Bette returned.
Bette had earrings for Tina with red stones.
“Happy Valentine’s Day,” Bette said. “It’s red coral. I got the coral on our honeymoon in Hawaii.”
“Bette, I love it,” Tina said quietly. Then she grinned and bit her lip.
What?” Bette asked. “What’s the grin about?”
“Oh,” answered Tina, still grinning, “I have a kind of funny valentine for you.”
Tina then produced the package from under the pillow. Bette opened the box to find a beautiful necklace withred stones.
“It’s red coral. I got the stones in Hawaii while I was shacked up there with this gorgeous woman,” Tina chuckled. “Perfect color for Valentine’s, don’t you think?”
They both laughed delightedly as they put the jewelry on each other.
“Always wear the earrings like that,” smiled Bette.
“You mean ‘naked?’” Tina smiled.
“Of course.”
“How gorgeous was she?”
“Hmm?” Tina murmured.
“The woman you shacked up with in Hawaii,” Bette smiled.
“Oh..She was unbelievable,” Tina said seriously, hugging Bette very tightly.
“And I fell madly in love with her,” Tina continued.
“I thought you were already in love with her,” Bette frowned.
“I was.”
They stretched out on the bed as much as possible. And Tina draped herself over Bette.
“Not much room,” commented Bette unnecessarily, trying to get comfortable with her shoulder against one of the walls.
“Are you volunteering to sleep on the floor?” Tina asked.
“No.”
“Do you want me to sleep in the other bed?” Tina asked.
“Don’t you dare move.”
“OKThen I’m glad we’re in love because we could never sleep this way if we weren’t.” Tina said sleepily as she nestled into Bette like a small animal.
You make me smile with my heart.
♫♪
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i once put my back out in the back of a very small car and i was much younger than bette porter– and it hurt…if bette does her back it just might save alice’ ass
i just caught up your history… I liked it… funny and cute…thanks
Pancha, so damn funny. “I’m going to kill Alice and then I’m going to resuscitate her and kill her again…several times,” ROFLMFAO. Nothing like sweet painful reminders…LOL. Al is in such deep trouble. At least Bette and Tina are making the best of out the situation. I don’t know where and how you come up with these stories, but I love that you do. Thanks for the update.
too fucking cute!!!
Soooooooooo cute and I sorry Ally there is NO saving Alice. Her A** is grass, now on to the waterfall. Hang in there Amanda, we know you will get over your block.
This reminded me so much of Dana and Jenny’s clumsy attempt at coupling in S1, except no one spilled any drinks here or agreed to be just friends. Like Van said, where do you come up with this stuff? I’m starting to think a lot of the silliness and gut-busting humor comes from personal experience. Now I wonder if Tina and Bette will be able to move in the morning. Maybe they can buy matching ice packs.
Thank you. I will try to keep this visual you gave us in my head while watching the wrenching version of episode 6 tonite.
Happy V-Day pancha. Thanks for the cute post.
i was cheering when i read your comment…thanks pancha, this story is a delight that makes my heart sing
Hey Pancha, this is fun to read. So far, Alice is in deep doo doo! I can’t wait to see what happens next…hmmm….waterfalls. (TMerlin)
Sweet!! And funny!! I do remember waking up, and opening my eyes…but not being able to focus cause the wall was literally touching my nose, I was that close! thanks for this!!
Great chapter Pancha so sweet and funny thank you for this !!!!
Heeheee….that was cute. And what lovely neighbors!
This story or chapter was so funny. At least these two love each other and can laugh about it later in life. After staying in a larger RV for 6 months after hurricane Ivan, I understand being cramped. At least they are going to go home soon.
pancha..thank you for the laughter. I just read it after watching tonight’s episode…I am staying positive…even if I have to wait until fucking S4. so glad I have the authors on this site
So the girls are going to have to improvise..lol.. very cute and very funny!! gotta love the neighbours…nice touch,oh and not to forget the Hauliers…lol
They so fucking cute and funny and sweet. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
That was just hilarious….and Alice is so dead!!!! But when in love these things doesn’t matter – just being together is enough :o))) I’m looking forward too the next post…
LOL. this is way goOOood..!!
thank god… we needed this chapter… i loved them both… please continue with the love… i’m so glad your writing… wish i could…
Let’s hope Tina remains a small animal for the rest of the night or someone will go crashing to the floor. Actually I did that once as an 8 year old from an upper bunk in the family’s camper. This was very funny, Pancha. Nothing like some good bruises as souvenirs of a romantic getaway. I’m pretty sure Alice will be made to be very sorry when they get home.
awww awww… I am grinning from ear to ear… so sweet. I need more of this sugar rush to keep my mood up for today is episode 6.
too fucking cute…..
Everything going a wee bit better. Here, Love that Bette and Tina are so in love. thanks for posting bettyvhall
goodness where do u come up with this stuff???? LOL!!! While I was reading I was wondering who is gonna go “bump in the night” first. LMAO!!!! I’m sorry for Al when they get back home (Al you’ve got some splainin to do???!!!). and maybe Bette will plan something a bit more romantic for her T when they settle back in once they’re home.