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A New World Part I
With that last comment Tina had decided to go to the party. Beautiful. She thinks I am beautiful. For some reason it was as if Bette was a siren drawing Tina to her. Tina felt the pull, but also realized the danger in listening to the sirens call. Tina felt as if a new world was opening up to her, and she was scared.
This new world was dangerous and intriguing. She had realized she was a ***** when she was 15 and starting dating her best friend. They dated for two years, but she was never out. They hid their relationship. Both dated guys to avoid any suspicion. No one knew they were lesbians, unless you count the time Tinas brother walked in on them. But he walked out as quickly as he came in, and the incident was never talked about. It was as if it didnt happen. Thats what catholic families did. They didnt talk about things. Tinas mom and dad had been sleeping in separate rooms probably since her youngest brother was born. They never talked about it. Her older sister Melanie left when she was 18, and now her mom wouldnt talk to her. They never talked about it. What would happen if they all found out she was a *****? Her 13 years of catholic school had taught her that it was an abomination. But what did that mean exactly? She feared the idea of her family shutting her out of their lives more than she feared going to *****.
So, are you going to stand out there all night? a voice asked.
Tina looked up, instantly drawn in to the beautiful brown eyes she saw focused intently on her. I was just waiting for the right moment to come in. I wanted to prolong the suspense I guess, Tina said getting lost in the womans eyes.
Im Bette, she said holding out her hand.
Tina just stared as she reached out her hand. She couldnt look away. She felt like she had come home. Bette felt it too. As their hands touched, they both just stood there staring at each other, neither speaking nor wanting to break the contact first.
A car went by honking loudly, pulling them both out of their temporary state of reverie.
I guess we should go in, Tina said, now focused on Bettes mouth.
After you, said Bette as she placed her hand on the small of Tinas back eliciting an audible gasp from Tina at the contact.
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(44 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
It doesn’t need anything…except for the next chapter! Very well done!
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This moves along smartly, with lots of character detail and backstory easily incorporated.
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I look forward to the next chapter.
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