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    A Perfect Design–Chapter 1

    Story written on July 13, 2015 by harley96.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=91486
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    ”Bette! You know that is not true! And you were the one that had endless women trekking through the house night and day when we were at Yale” Alice scoffed watching the carousel start up and luggage start to slide down the ramp. Bette made her way to Baggage Claim #4 and spotted Alice with

    ”Bette! You know that is not true! And you were the one that had endless women trekking through the house night and day when we were at Yale” Alice scoffed watching the carousel start up and luggage start to slide down the ramp.

    Bette made her way to Baggage Claim #4 and spotted Alice with her back to her.

    ”Al? Really? Do you really want to go there. Now I’m hanging up” Bette hung up the phone walking closer to Alice and smiled when she heard Alice yelling into the phone.

    ”Bette! Bette!”

    ”Al you don’t have to scream. I’m right behind you” Bette announced flashing a smile as Alice turned around screaming and crashed into Bette pulling her into a hug.

    ”Oh my God Bette! It’s been so long!” Alice cheerfully exclaimed squeezing Bette tighter.

    ”Al?”

    ”Yes?” Alice replied tightening her grip on Bette

    ”I ca…can’t… bra…breathe” Bette said breathlessly while Alice released her grip.

    ”Oh Sorry”

    ”There’s my suitcase coming now” Bette pointed as Alice to turn around to look.

    Bette grabbed her suitcase off of the carousel and followed Alice to the parking garage through the tunnel connecting the garage to the terminal.

    ”Alice you have got to be kidding me!” Bette exclaimed as she saw the car Alice had walked up to and opened the hatchback. ”You still drive this piece of crap?”

    Alice gasped as Bette threw her suitcase in the back.

    ”Yes I still drive it and it’s not a piece of crap. I know this model has had a bad rep but this one here is an exception. I have you know this baby has 350,000 miles on it and has gotten me cross country and back multiple times. Besides I’ve been a struggling writer and been getting by on peanuts until you offered for me to come work for you. I’m so happy you are going to be living here in LA” Alice said proudly as she sat down in the driver’s side of the beat up Ford Pinto.

    Bette scoffed then smiled as she sat in the passenger seat and buckled her seat belt.

    ”Well I still can’t believe you drive this hunk of metal and my first duty as your employer is to buy us a company car. One that won’t sound like the engine is about to blow up any second.”

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    1. Hello and welcome as a new writer and a big congrats because it is off to a very nice start and and is funny as hell. I love it…Myrtle?? Hahahhaa i cant deal with Alice lol…and i love the movie Christine so back off Bette

    8. Welcome! Its a GREAT start and I can’t wait to read more! I love both alpha Bette and Tina! Alice and Myrtle had me LMAO! My car have a name also! I pray you post daily if not several times daily! Just saying! PPS

    9. What a great start!!The camaraderie of Bette and Alice is apparent as well as the chemistry between Bette and Tina. Welcome to the site and keep the flow going. You are on the right road.

    17. Okay, i am so late with my comment, please forgive me.

      First ,i want to say Welcome!

      It is always a pleasure to see new writers and i must admit your first chapter is awesome.
      Alice always make me laugh, she is one crazy woman! And i suspect there will be many clashes between Bette&Tina, but the acctraction is already there.

      You catched my attention and i will defiantly follow your story!

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