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A Perfect Design–Chapter 1

”Shhhhhhhh!..Don’t say that too loud. Myrtle is very sensitive and you may have hurt her feelings” Alice said quietly while patting the dashboard then began talking to the steering wheel ”It’s ok baby. That mean ole woman didn’t mean what she said. You know Momma won’t be behind any other wheel”
”Uhmm? Alice? This car isn’t like going to make me choke or run me down by itself like in that movie Christine is it?” Bette asked amused
Alice nodded and rubbed the steering wheel.
”No one gets in between me and my Myrtle” Alice said in a serious tone then turned to look at Bette and began breaking out into a laugh.
Bette shook her head and threw it back against the head rest as Alice started the car and backed out of the parking spot.
”Jesus. I would have Stephen King on my hands” Bette mumbled to herself as the car sputtered, choked, and spit while making its way out of the garage.
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”Fuller? Can you tell the surgical team to go ahead and prep our 3pm and begin. I’ll be on my way momentarily to scrub in”
”Yes Dr. Kennard”
”Thank you”
As she hung up the receiver she turned to the gentleman sitting across from her.
”So let me get this straight. You want me to become Chief of Staff of your new medical facility”
”Yes. We are meeting with the architect tomorrow morning who will be showing the designs for approval and like I told you before, your vision and what you have done here for us at Lakeland Memorial have been extraordinary. You were our first choice Tina.”
Tina smiled and looked down at her OR schedule then back up
”I love everything you told me Mr. Leland but in order for me to consider this once in a lifetime opportunity, I will need to have that Cancer research facility I have come to you and begged you for the last five years. I know it’s well within the company’s budgets to build and I can secure the necessary grants to keep it in operation”
”Tina you know Parker isn’t going to go for that. He is putting in plans to build the Genetics research facility in San Francisco”
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Hello and welcome as a new writer and a big congrats because it is off to a very nice start and and is funny as hell. I love it…Myrtle?? Hahahhaa i cant deal with Alice lol…and i love the movie Christine so back off Bette
I liked the beginning of your story! Congratulations!
Good beginning. Please continue.
Love it! Im guessing that Alice realizes Tina likes Bette.
Welcome to the site, and thanks for posting! You’ll find our readers are wonderful! Please keep posting!
Hi ! Thank you and welcome !!! Promise won miss any of your story…
Bette and Tina , seems both alpha type. More please….
Welcome,enjoyed your story,bette/tina both powerful women,wow.can’t wait for the fireworks in this one.pps
Welcome! Its a GREAT start and I can’t wait to read more! I love both alpha Bette and Tina! Alice and Myrtle had me LMAO! My car have a name also! I pray you post daily if not several times daily! Just saying! PPS
What a great start!!The camaraderie of Bette and Alice is apparent as well as the chemistry between Bette and Tina. Welcome to the site and keep the flow going. You are on the right road.
Wonderful start. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your talent
Welcome! Like your story, very interesting start.
Nice start :) Welcome :)
Look forward to more on a regular basis I hope :)
Got me interested.Great start.?..PPS
Very nice start! You should continue….and soon!
Great start! Waiting for more. Thanks for sharing.
Welcome lesfan the site that has the
Fanfic biggest writers in the world.
Home interesting.
You have my attention.
10 stars.
Okay, i am so late with my comment, please forgive me.
First ,i want to say Welcome!
It is always a pleasure to see new writers and i must admit your first chapter is awesome.
Alice always make me laugh, she is one crazy woman! And i suspect there will be many clashes between Bette&Tina, but the acctraction is already there.
You catched my attention and i will defiantly follow your story!
Welcome, UR off to a great start, just don’t make us wait, OK?