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A Promise
Tina was brought back by the sudden silence when Bette turned off the car’s ignition. She is running her hands on her face, trying to relieve some tension of the events when she hears Bette’s apologizing.
BETTE-
I just wanna apologize..
TINA-
You already did.
BETTE-
No, I mean for defending Shane tonight. I feel like it might have sent the wrong message.
TINA-
It doesn’t matter. We’ve just fallen to different sides of this, that’s all. That’s fine.
BETTE-
I, given my history, I just, I don’t wanna be- casual about the promise that I made to you.
TINA-
I didn’t know you made any promises.
BETTE-
Well, I’m making a promise to you right now.
BETTE-
I promise, that I share your values, about family, and faithfulness, and commitment. And that I will never– ever cheat on you again.
TINA-
Wow…
BETTE-
I love you.
TINA-
I love you too. And Angie. So much.
BETTE-
And Angie. So so much.
They reach for each other and shared a gentle kiss that put across the message of love and devotion they have for each other. And after a moment, they descended their car and proceeded to enter their home.
INT. LIVING ROOM
Bette is coming back into their living room as she just put Angelica in her bed. After making sure that their daughter is now sleeping soundly.
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(24 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I like it… is beatiful
Do us tell you ours tell everyone else? Because I’ll do both. This story rocked and it’s worth sharing. Their silence or omissions was killing me but the ending is awesome. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story ✊😉💗💗💗💗💗💗
Great ! Please continue writing.
That wowed me as you wrote it very well, Thank you and by all means you need to continue with your writing of stories. Thank you!
I felt the same thing. It was such a special moment and we were not able to see more. Your idea and implementation is great. It was the perfect time for a proposal. Thank you ♥
Thank you all for the encouragement to write more! That was my first fanfic! (;
Lovely thank you
Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Back when I watched this episode, I was antsy for leaving Tina just responding with an almost inaudible ‘wow’ to Bette’s promise. So I wanted to write my own version of that night.
Awesome wish tlw could focus more on special moments with b&t instead of stupid stuff
Very good, I enjoyed it. Tjhanks
That was awesome. Do you have anything else? I’d love to read your other versions of whatever you want to write.
Great, great writing. I would like to read more stories from you … longer.