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A Promise
After getting an artist friend make a perfect design and pulling connections to have it be done, she had been trying to come up with how to best ask Tina the question for she wanted it to be just perfect.
When she heard the question popping out from Tina few minutes ago, she was momentarily got thrown off by surprise. To say that she was blown away by how her plans spun around is an understatement, therefore completely shutting her ability to be sensible in responding. But one thing she realizes, that there is no more perfect time to present Tina the ring and ask her to marry her. The moment just rolled down for them.
However, Tina is now just staring at the ring and had not said anything since she asked the question. As silence dragged so long, Bette’s insecurities slowly creep in. She is now the one coming down with strong confusions. Didn’t Tina just ask her the same thing just moments ago? Can she possibly change her mind? And that quickly? Bette would not have it as her heart tells her differently. She wouldn’t put up with these thoughts..
BETTE–
Tee, baby.. (still no answer)… Tina, what the fuck is…
Now it was Tina’s turn, to not let Bette finish what she’s going to say. She joins Bette on the floor…
TINA–
No Bette… YOU are the one giving ME the privilege of being MY wife…
At this point, both women have tears of absolute joy running down their faces. Bette took the ring from the box and slides into Tina’s finger. They shared kisses and hugs that will never be forgotten, accompanying this very special moment.
After the sweetest embrace, Tina pulls back and gently takes Bette’s face in her hands, and lovingly tells her fiancé.
TINA–
Elizabeth Porter… baby, I promise, that I share your values, about family, and faithfulness, and commitment. And that I will never-— ever shut you out again. You are, without a doubt, the Love of my life.
—The end—
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(24 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I like it… is beatiful
Do us tell you ours tell everyone else? Because I’ll do both. This story rocked and it’s worth sharing. Their silence or omissions was killing me but the ending is awesome. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story ✊😉💗💗💗💗💗💗
Great ! Please continue writing.
That wowed me as you wrote it very well, Thank you and by all means you need to continue with your writing of stories. Thank you!
I felt the same thing. It was such a special moment and we were not able to see more. Your idea and implementation is great. It was the perfect time for a proposal. Thank you ♥
Thank you all for the encouragement to write more! That was my first fanfic! (;
Lovely thank you
Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Back when I watched this episode, I was antsy for leaving Tina just responding with an almost inaudible ‘wow’ to Bette’s promise. So I wanted to write my own version of that night.
Awesome wish tlw could focus more on special moments with b&t instead of stupid stuff
Very good, I enjoyed it. Tjhanks
That was awesome. Do you have anything else? I’d love to read your other versions of whatever you want to write.
Great, great writing. I would like to read more stories from you … longer.