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    A Promise

    Story written on January 22, 2013 by KathrynMcBeal.
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    Author Notes:

    Set after Bette and Tina had the emergency trip with Angelica to the hospital in S6-EP1.

     

    BETTE-

    I still can’t believe how I got the thermometer wrong (sigh).  I am just glad Angie is going to be okay.  And..

     

    Bette stop mid sentence as she realizes that Tina seem to have not heard what she is saying.  Bette noted that Tina has the look of being far away while sitting so quietly on the sofa.  Instantly, Bette worries that Tina might be also feeling sick.  Bette lowered herself in front of Tina and lightly touches her hands as she voices her concern.

     

    BETTE-

    Tee, are you alright?

     

    Tina did not immediately responded.  Instead, she tightens the hold of their hands together, looks deeply into Bette’s eyes, baring her soul.  Finally, she gives Bette her biggest smile, then sincerely asks her

     

    TINA-

    Bette… Baby… Marry me?

     

    Bette gasped at what Tina just asked.  Then she started shaking her head so rapidly and said

     

    BETTE–

    No.. NO.. Tee..

     

    TINA–

    No?

     

    The smile instantly vanished from Tina’s face. Replaced by signs of confusion and anger at Bette’s response.

     

    BETTE– (Stammering)

    Tee, baby, no, I meant…

     

    TINA– (Slowly raising her voice)

    So it is really a NO?

     

    For a moment, Tina was not sure if she heard Bette correctly.  But Bette did utter a ‘no’.  Tina began turning red with disbelief.  Bette scrambles to make sense of her answer.  But with Tina asking her to marry her, it completely knocks her out by surprise!  Suddenly her brain is malfunctioning to come out with words.  She struggles to find the right words to mend the impression of her response.  Panicking that Tina will totally lose it, she gets up the floor, exits the living room, hurrying to their bedroom hoping to clear things.

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    2. Do us tell you ours tell everyone else? Because I’ll do both. This story rocked and it’s worth sharing. Their silence or omissions was killing me but the ending is awesome. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story ✊😉💗💗💗💗💗💗

    5. I felt the same thing. It was such a special moment and we were not able to see more. Your idea and implementation is great. It was the perfect time for a proposal. Thank you ♥

    8. Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Back when I watched this episode, I was antsy for leaving Tina just responding with an almost inaudible ‘wow’ to Bette’s promise. So I wanted to write my own version of that night.

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