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    A Slow Dance – Chapter 4

    Story written on August 27, 2005 by illuminatigoddess.
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    Author Notes:

    A few small answers to several large questions.

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    Bette was just finishing up the last bit of paperwork for the day when she heard a loud banging on the entry door. She looked at her watch and saw it was past ten. What the ***** was anyone doing banging on her gallery door at ten o’clock? She asked herself as she made her way to the front of the building. When she saw what was on the other side of the door, Bette froze.

    There stood Tina, legs spread shoulder width apart, arms crossed at her chest. Bette worked her way up from the jeans worn earlier today and couldn’t help but smile when she saw the provocative black wifebeater Tina was sporting. Her blonde hair was tousled, adding to the sexiness of her entire outfit and attitude. Then Bette locked eyes with the woman she was admiring and suddenly lost the ability to breathe. Tina’s dark brown eyes were bright with anger, or something very much akin to it. Bette could almost feel the fire burn through her own retinas as she quickly snapped out of her daze and made her way over to the door, unlocking and opening it.

    "What the ***** did you do to me?" Tina asked loudly as she flew through the door.

    Bette followed Tina with her eyes and tilted her head slightly in confusion. "I’m sorry, Tina, I don’t know what you’re talking about."

    "Don’t play that ***** with me Bette, you know what you did. Answer me."

    Bette now stood in front of Tina, who had stopped pacing and now just tapped her foot impatiently on the wood floor, waiting for an answer, any answer. She looked down at the floor and frowned slightly. "I apologize if what I did this afternoon crossed a line or offended you in any way. If you want – "

    "What you did most assuredly crossed a line, but it in no way offended me." Interrupted Tina as she placed her hands on her hips and stared at Bette until she looked back up at her. Tina began again, more quietly this time.

    "What you did to me, Bette, if you are truly confused as to the pertinence of this question, is something no one – man or woman – has ever done to me before: You ***** broke me apart, you dismantled me, Bette Porter, and you scared the ***** out of me. Why did you do it? What have you done to me?"

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    4. Good chapter. First I thought something is wrong with Tina and is she gonna kick Bette or what but then its turn out good and they have lunch together tomorrow and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!

    5. I just spent at least 40 minutes trying to explain to you how wonderful I thought your writing is, and with one inadvertent flick of a finger I lost every thought I’d typed. I’ll try to remember the gist of what I said…OMG! OMFG! You are sooooooo good!!! I’m amazed at your wisdom, since you are so young (compared to me). You could teach me a few things!!

      Bestous of luck at school…but you won’t need it if you’re studying lit, or English, or anything to do with writing.

      And you really are a goddess!

      You totally had me fooled with your name. I’m not sure if Marianne Williamson would hold any interest for you. She wrote a book called “Illuminata” as well as one called “A Woman’s Worth”, in which she referred throughout to women as goddesses. At any rate, I will be checking out more about the “Illuminati.” Thanks.

      Is Swim a mentor of yours? If so, or if not, you should know she has my deepest respect.

      I hope you post more soon, because I really appreciate your talent.

      Be well, be good, have fun.

    6. his was an excellent take on the beginning. i love to read each authors thoughts on that. i love the way you write btw. and tinas, who are you, was awesome. who indeed. this story has caught my attention. looking forward to the next. thanks.

    8. “IC. I’ve come up with a plot to steal her away and clone a duplicate, then stealthily implant myself into its brain and live her life.” You’ll take over running the show?…You’ve got my vote!

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