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A Slow Dance – Chapter 5
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"What," She took a deep breath and held a hand against her chest, "Has Bette Porter done to me?" She wiped away the tears and bit down, forcing herself to regain control over her laughter. The situation wasn’t helped any by the fact that she was completely and utterly exhausted.
After a while, she rose up and brushed herself off, a muted laughter still bubbling up from her mouth. Her sides hurt from the hysterical episode, and her throat was dry and a bit scratchy. She walked inside to her kitchen and pulled out a bottle of water, taking a long pull before setting it down on the counter half empty. She walked into her living room and plopped down on the couch to watch whatever was on television. If she wasn’t going to get any sleep, she might as well entertain herself.
*****
Bette cracked open one eye and read the clock. How the ***** was it already seven thirty? She slapped the top of the clock and pushed herself up on her arms, bending her knees and sitting on her heels in bed. After looking around for a moment, Bette straightened her back and immediately bent forward, touching the bottom of the headboard with her hands. She felt her entire spine pop and let out a loud moan of delight.
She climbed off the bed and walked to her bathroom, turning on the shower and brushing her teeth. One hour later, Bette was dressed, pressed and ready to face the day.
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Too bad Tina wasn’t. After two hours of watching infomercials, sleep had finally claimed Tina and taken her away to another world. She opened her eyes slowly; the haze of sleep still hovered over her. It only took a moment for her to realize the light shining in the kitchen wasn’t man made.
"*****!" Tina cried out in a groggily panicked voice. She jumped off the couch and rushed into the bathroom, stripping quickly and hopping into the shower. She had barely rinsed herself off when she heard the phone ring.
Tina scurried into her room, dripping wet and naked, and jumped across the bed in a heroic attempt at reaching the phone before the machine picked up. She snatched it off the receiver and pressed ‘talk’ just as she landed with a wet thud on her mattress.
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Hey I just read all the chapter and WHOA! you got a really Wonderful Story I Love it Please continue and I can’t wait to read more of this Thanks.
Oh, baby, this is just soooo good! You’ve got me wrapped up in every single stunningly-written detail!! This is rich, rich, rich!!! I was even entertained by Bette’s introduction: Tina…Marina…Marina…Tina. Reminded me of Letterman’s classic: Uma…Oprah…Oprah…Uma. But I have a really weird way of free associating sometimes…not to mention an odd sense of humor. goddess, don’t stop writing this any time soon, okay? Unless of course school gets in the way. Then you’re excused.
To answer your question with a question: didn’t anyone ever tell you it was impolite to ask a lady her age? :) Let it suffice to say for now that I’ve seen thirty and I’m not dead yet!
Keep up the heavenly writing, goddess!
(I hate writing in this little box. I can’t see what I’m doing…where I’ve been…or where I’m going.)
Great chapter and story can’t wait for the next post!!!
oh yes this so good i love its directness or at least Tinas!…lol not too shy so far i love it but as you pointed out to me in your authors note why would she be when its someone as beautiful as Bette…lol really enjoying this… more please!
lunch was wonderful. Made you wish you were there watching it happen. ; ) Oh..and all the talk about age..don’t make us over 30 women feel too old. Post another soon…love reading it.
Great update. Just finished reading the last 3-chapters. Between,short meetings at the gallery, and lunch I don’t know if these two can take much more of each other before they burst. Have to say great line, “Were all straight until were not”, love it. But whats up with the age thing. Looking forward to your next update. Careful with the neighbors.
oh i really liked that. hmm what to do about the eric problem. well pleae let me know soon. thanks.
Good chapter. Those 2 are so cute, and they need to be together soon as a couple, love it. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Well talk about lunch….huummm….goddess. What a nice update and such a wonderful lunch with our two girls, it almost sent shivers down my spine. Post soon
Hmmm….my spine wasnt the only thing shivering…..(Breathe snQQpy… Breathe)
My thoughts…..
Well, this is the first story I read with Bette “cracking her back.” I didnt know she knew how to do something like that. After reading your description of the act, I was ready to jump on my bed and give it a try; but then I was afraid I may beak something…LOL
It has always been hard as hell for me to picture Tina in “power suits.” Thats more of a Bette thing.
”We’re all straight until we’re not -_- I love this!
”You got it, Mack Daddy.” -_- Alice has been making cracks like this to Bette for as long as I can remember. Is there a stud in Bette dying to come out and only Alice knows about? Or is Alice actually making cracks at Bette’s “A” type personality?
hugging Tina’s hips with authority -_- Now I know how to describe that hot little number hanging in my closet once I put it on.
Tina could’ve sworn she saw the entire room light up when Bette smiled back at her. -_- This made me think of that commercial where the female schoolbus driver smiled and cars started crashing from the glare…LOL
Just loves this story – keep’em comming…
make me laugh when i you wrote about how Tina broke into hysterical laugh at the balcony. Sometimes i do wonder back the silly things i do during the day..and laugh it all out. LOL~ need some release i guess? Wonderfully written..post soon!
really nice!
nice that their taking is slow !!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is watching them