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A Slow Dance – Chapter 7
Tina stood motionless in the middle of the lobby. She saw Bette standing there, her arms crossed loosely, staring back at her. A smile formed on her lips as she gazed back at Bette, a small sigh escaping from its confines. Her eyes roamed over the bronzed body of the woman who was studying her as well. The solid black pants suit Bette wore showed off her curves in a subtle yet potent manner. She looked stunning in a white silk chemise, which contrasted her skin beautifully. A blush rose to Tina’s cheeks when she saw Bette’s face. Even though Tina had only known her for a short period of time, she knew that look. The look only Bette could give her, the one that told her she was the only one in the world worth sparing a second glance, the one that told her she was truly wanted by this woman. Tina stood motionless as she watched Bette close the distance between them.
Bette stopped a foot away from Tina and leaned down, whispering seductively, "Good afternoon, Ms. Kennard."
An uncontrollable shudder ran down Tina’s spine as she felt Bette’s breath against her ear, her lips brushing lightly against Tina’s skin. She quickly forced herself to regain any control she lost in the second and a half Bette had been close to her.
Tina pulled back and looked up into Bette’s eyes, meeting her stare. "Good afternoon yourself, Ms. Porter."
A smile broke out on Bette’s face as she looked down at Tina. She silently marveled at the control Tina had over herself and her reactions. She definitely noticed the shudder that traveled through Tina when she whispered in her ear, and, to be honest, she expected it to do a little more. Of course, she knew she wouldn’t find out if she had succeeded tonight. She would just have to work on getting more of a response later on.
Bette held out her arm. "Shall we?"
Tina looked down at her extended arm and decided instead to take Bette’s hand. "Absolutely."
Bette was beaming as the two women walked out of the development building in Alphaville Studios and over to her car, their hands linked together perfectly.
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Tina looked over at Bette and smiled. "So where are you taking me?" She asked in a playful manner.
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(21 votes, average: 4.43 out of 5)
wow goddess that was beautiful. has me wanting more. not bad for a kid. really just kidding. dont hurt me, k. just playing. you have quite a knack for getting me to feel the emotions between these two. do it when you can again.
great chapter and I will definitely call you a writer. I am enjoying your story.
Goodness gracious young lady, you are a wonderful writer for one so young. This is the only chapter of this story that I have read. Now I must go back and start at the beginning. Please post soon. Keep this going please.
What a beautiful chapter. These 2 are so cute and lovely, and Kit will meet the woman who’s stole her little sister heart. Post soon please, thanks!
Amazing chapter, just love this.
That was so wonderfully written. Excellent prose, excellent story… I just love this story.
OMG! Would someone please dance with me? You’ve got me wanting to pull out some jazz and pine the night away!! Dreamy, so dreamy!
You can apply the temperamental adjective if you please, but it doesn’t diminish the talent or how grandly it displays itself. You won’t tire of my compliments, will you? Because I just really adore placing them in your worthy ears. I hope I live long enough to own a copy of your first published work. I want a first edition to cherish, please.
I also understand the creativity coming from depression. Unfortunately, that’s oftentimes the process.
And Right On!! Perfect explanation of why the word lesbian sucks. I concur 150%.
I’m anxious for more of your exceptional prose!!
Beautiful….
a wonderful,magnificent writer indeed. How i wish i could write like you..LOL~ tried..but is not workin anyhow. do post soon. coz is real good!
Hey I’m just catch up of your Story and Whoa! Beautiful written I Love it Please continue Post soon.
Beautiful goddess, just beautiful…you can write girl and do keep it up because we want more of this wonderful story here….Post soon
soon kit… soon.
i love it!
nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!