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    A Slow Dance – Chapter 7

    Story written on September 2, 2005 by illuminatigoddess.
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    A little jazz

    Tina looked around and noticed an eclectic collection of all things jazz and blues littering the wall in a seemingly haphazard manner. The dim lighting was the final piece that really gave the room its effect, setting the mood for laid back, slow music with a smoky beat. Tina took Bette’s hand when it was held out to her and allowed herself to be led to a nearby table.

    Tina sat down and immediately drew her attention to the woman on stage. She said in an intrigued voice, "Where’d you find this place?"

    "I’ve been coming to 5th Street ever since I moved to LA. My sister introduced me to it, and I fell in love. I come whenever she has a gig here." Bette looked up in the direction in which Tina was staring and smiled, enjoying the sound of the woman coming from on stage.

    Tina nodded her head. "So your sister, she plays here?"

    Bette looked back at Tina. "Yeah. She’s up there now. The vocalist, Kit Porter."

    Tina smiled and watched the woman in admiration. She turned back to Bette. "Your family is overflowing with talent and beauty, isn’t it?"

    Bette bowed her head and smiled. "Beauty maybe, but Kit’s the only one who got any talent out of the deal."

    "I don’t limit talent to vocal abilities." She stared at Bette and continued. "You’re a successful art director, you have exquisite taste in what you display and how you display it, which – believe me – takes a lot of talent. Not to mention the fact that you were good enough to snag me." Tina smirked when she finished her sentence.

    Bette tilted her head and narrowed her eyes slightly. "Is that so, Tina? So it takes a lot to make you look twice, does it?"

    "No." She leaned across the table and lowered her voice to a whisper. "It takes a lot to be able to invade my thoughts constantly until I can no longer work efficiently enough to make any progress on my pet project. It takes a lot to make me want you so much that I can barely control myself around you in my own professional atmosphere. And it takes a ***** of a lot, Bette Porter, for me to lose sleep over someone who I only met a two weeks ago."

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    1. wow goddess that was beautiful. has me wanting more. not bad for a kid. really just kidding. dont hurt me, k. just playing. you have quite a knack for getting me to feel the emotions between these two. do it when you can again.

    3. Goodness gracious young lady, you are a wonderful writer for one so young. This is the only chapter of this story that I have read. Now I must go back and start at the beginning. Please post soon. Keep this going please.

    7. OMG! Would someone please dance with me? You’ve got me wanting to pull out some jazz and pine the night away!! Dreamy, so dreamy!

      You can apply the temperamental adjective if you please, but it doesn’t diminish the talent or how grandly it displays itself. You won’t tire of my compliments, will you? Because I just really adore placing them in your worthy ears. I hope I live long enough to own a copy of your first published work. I want a first edition to cherish, please.

      I also understand the creativity coming from depression. Unfortunately, that’s oftentimes the process.

      And Right On!! Perfect explanation of why the word lesbian sucks. I concur 150%.

      I’m anxious for more of your exceptional prose!!

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