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    A Slow Dance – Chapter 7

    Story written on September 2, 2005 by illuminatigoddess.
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    A little jazz

    Bette glanced over and smiled, her eyes shining through her lightly tinted sunglasses. "It’s a surprise."

    "A surprise, huh? You’re going to make me force it out of you, aren’t you?"

    Bette unlocked the car and opened the door, looking across the top of the vehicle at Tina. "The word ‘surprise’ implies that the one being surprised doesn’t know what’s going to happen." She climbed in the car and turned the ignition, shutting the door behind her. She threw a look to Tina.

    "So no. You aren’t going to force this out of me." Bette turned on the air conditioning and waited for Tina to close her door.

    "Besides – "

    Bette didn’t finish her sentence as she had planned. Instead, a loud moan was ripped from her in replacement of the words as Tina’s lips fell upon hers in a searing caress.

    Tina grabbed the back of Bette’s head and pulled her closer, her fingers weaving themselves into Bette’s hair. She felt a rush of heat spread through her body, beginning at her lips and ending in her toes. A heady feeling enveloped Tina as she cupped the brunette’s face with her other hand. She couldn’t seem to get enough, to feel enough. An involuntary moan escaped her lips and landed on Bette’s ears.

    Bette couldn’t believe what was happening. She felt Tina’s soft lips manipulating her own, the blonde’s tongue pressing for entry to Bette’s mouth. When she parted her lips and let Tina explore, Bette was hit with another string of sensations. She felt the wetness already between her legs grow exponentially, and knew that pretty soon the small swatch covering her center would be completely useless.

    When Tina finally drew back, she studied Bette’s face. Clear brown eyes were now cloudy and black, cheeks that were normally deeply tanned revealed a bright flush of red, full lips were parted, and from the shallow rise and fall of her chest, Tina realized Bette was trying to regain some semblance of breath control.

    Bette just stared at Tina, her mind suddenly completely useless. The only things she could think to say was, "You like jazz?"

    *****
    Tina walked inside 5th Street *****’s, immediately taken with the atmosphere of the place. The room was crowded, with people standing shoulder to shoulder in some areas. The band played a low beat, almost subsonic song, highlighted by a woman’s sultry voice from time to time. Except for the occasional man or woman ordering a drink or making small talk, the room was completely given over to the woman and the band on stage.

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    1. wow goddess that was beautiful. has me wanting more. not bad for a kid. really just kidding. dont hurt me, k. just playing. you have quite a knack for getting me to feel the emotions between these two. do it when you can again.

    3. Goodness gracious young lady, you are a wonderful writer for one so young. This is the only chapter of this story that I have read. Now I must go back and start at the beginning. Please post soon. Keep this going please.

    7. OMG! Would someone please dance with me? You’ve got me wanting to pull out some jazz and pine the night away!! Dreamy, so dreamy!

      You can apply the temperamental adjective if you please, but it doesn’t diminish the talent or how grandly it displays itself. You won’t tire of my compliments, will you? Because I just really adore placing them in your worthy ears. I hope I live long enough to own a copy of your first published work. I want a first edition to cherish, please.

      I also understand the creativity coming from depression. Unfortunately, that’s oftentimes the process.

      And Right On!! Perfect explanation of why the word lesbian sucks. I concur 150%.

      I’m anxious for more of your exceptional prose!!

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