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A Thin Line – Chpt 11
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"I’m not finding that so easy to do, Bette," she replied softly, licking my neck, nibbling my ear, and pulling me tighter.
"God, you are making me so weak," I breathed into her hair. "I have so little resolve right now."
"Perhaps it would be less difficult to remove myself from this bed and your arms, and get on with the responsibilities of my day, if I knew I’d see you at the end of it," Helena purred quietly.
I’d pulled away and looked into her eyes, smiling. "You don’t want to wait for the gallery exhibit? You want to see me again so soon? Tonight?" I asked.
"Yes," Helena answered plainly.
Upon hearing that simple answer, I’d kissed her and pushed my tongue into her mouth passionately. After I’d slowly withdrawn my lips from hers, I said, "Okay. This evening. We’ll make plans later. First, you shower. Alone."
"Now my day will be filled with joyful anticipation," she said, kissing my cheek and bounding excitedly from her bed.
I’d grinned and admired her svelte form. She’d smiled brightly and pranced nonchalantly in her nakedness to the bathroom door, showing not a hint of modesty.
When she’d reached the closed door to the bathroom, she clasped the knob and turned to face me.
"Are you sure you won’t join me?" she asked, posing seductively.
"Helena, your erect nipples are arousing me." I found it impossible not to smile as I admonished her, "Quit being a temptress!"
"Alright. I won’t be long. Then I’ll fix us a quick bite to eat," she’d said, disappearing behind the door with a flourish.
I breathed in Helena’s scent from her pillow. God, this woman was sexy. And she wanted me. Everything was happening so fast. I was smitten. And I couldn’t control myself. On the one hand, it didn’t make any sense to me, but on the other hand, it felt so good and so right. I realized I was frightened by it all. Was it wrong, or too soon, to hope that something magnificent may be occurring?
My thoughts were jumbled, and I struggled to sort through them.
Tina and I were over. I’d accepted that. But, now, here I was, in the bed of the woman who I’d long loathed and blamed for stealing Tina away from me. But Helena hadn’t stolen Tina from me. Not in actuality. And I knew that for a certainty. Tina had chosen to succumb to Helena’s advances. In large part, I suspect, to perform a sort of retribution for my indiscretion, or rather my affair, with Candace.
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Yes, I’m first! Off to read now. Bye!
God Tina don’t be so blonde
Love the development of the Belena relationship… can’t wait to see how Helena gets out of this thing with Tina, though I’d kinda just like to see her slap Tina and tell her to go back to her heterosexual life… I digress. Great post, looking forward to the next one!
Well if you hadn’t disabled the ratings I’d be able to give you 5 stars zheese. This chapetr was great. I still think Helena needs to explain to Bette what she was doing with Tina is she really had a thing for her from get. Ugh Tina, what drama is she bringing to Bette’s office today?? And hello, maybe she could knock once in a while!
I am loving this story and your writing.
Ha! You can’t stop here. I can’t wait to see how Helena will hide Bette from Tina while doing it not that successfully.
I love this story, Two beautiful ladies,would be hard to choose. Can I have both? guess not. How will Helena get over Tina listening and tell her a lie.that she doesnt know her. Did Tina ever know Bette and her moods. Let her live her life with a male that will alway have a doubt about her. thanks
well, that was one great chapter, zheese… i’m sure helena looks good under the spray in the shower and her and bette even better, hopefully we’ll get to see this in the nearest time.. anyway, i can’t wait for them to go out together and as for tina, well, just let helena tell her everything and slap her a couple of times just so she knows what she lost (and can’t get back, at least in this story ;). great chapter, love your writing, please post soon.
Great chapter. I am not a Belena fan but your writing makes me a believer. Looking forward to your next post.
damn….that was good. bette and helena are so good together…it seems all too real…great job, looking forward to the next post!!!
Z, the way you’re writing B&H, there’s definitely chemistry between them. Can’t wait to see when Tina finds out. Tell her, Helena!! LOL. Great job. Looking forward to the next post.
excellent chapter, you had me awww-ing all the way through, so sweet n cute! cannot believe you stopped where you did though. Love it! cant wait for the next installment. thank you!
Looking forward to where you take this story next. Thanks for writing! I hear you about how the characters lead you in a certain direction…
Ha! I almost want Helena to tell her, just so Tina can realize she lost not one, but two unbelievably gorgeous women and she has ZERO chance of getting them back. :D lol. Can’t wait for more
You write so well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’re great!!!!!!!!! I love to read your stories!!!!
Great chapter, zheese. So love the interaction between the two gorgeous women ^_^ What’s Helena gonna tell Tina?
haha that Tina doesn’t have a clue!
oh please don’t leave us hanging too long, i’m not above begging!!!!