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A Thin Line – Chpt 11
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I reached up and tugged at her robe, urging her down to kiss me.
When Helena pulled away, she searched my eyes. "Bette? Are you going to answer me?"
After a few moments of silence, I found the courage to reply. "I’m scared. I’m scared you’re going to hurt me," I said plaintively.
"Oh, God, Bette, no," Helena whispered. She pulled me up, took me in her arms, and rocked me. "Oh, ssshhh. Bette, I have no intention of hurting you. Ever. What’s happened in the last few minutes to bring all of this on?" she asked. "Hmm? Tell me, please."
I leaned back against the bed and lay my head on the pillow. I remained silent.
Helena reached over and pulled the bed sheet across my naked breasts. Then she quietly said, "Perhaps you’ll feel more free to bare your soul, if your body isn’t exposed."
She lay down next to me on her side and caressed her hand up and down my arm.
Inhaling and exhaling deeply, I looked into Helena’s eyes.
I began speaking, "While you were showering…" Suddenly I stopped, turning my head away from her.
Helena gently placed her hand against my face and rolled my head back so that she could look into my eyes.
"Yes? Go on, Bette," Helena requested earnestly.
I closed my eyes tightly and then opened them again.
"While you were showering," I continued, "I began thinking about Tina. Me and Tina. You and Tina. About everything that’s happened over the course of the last couple of years. About everything that’s gone wrong. About all the shit that just keeps happening. About how I just can’t seem to get my life to work." I stopped to take another deep breath. Helena was listening intently. "I don’t want to get my hopes up that something good may be about to happen, with you, and then wake up one morning to once again, unexpectedly, find my world crashing in around me."
Helena reached down and took my hand, interlacing our fingers.
"This is all happening too fast for you, isn’t it? You and me?" she said quietly.
"Well, we are galloping forward at breakneck speed," I replied.
"You’re starting to develop feelings for me?" Helena asked in a statement.
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Yes, I’m first! Off to read now. Bye!
God Tina don’t be so blonde
Love the development of the Belena relationship… can’t wait to see how Helena gets out of this thing with Tina, though I’d kinda just like to see her slap Tina and tell her to go back to her heterosexual life… I digress. Great post, looking forward to the next one!
Well if you hadn’t disabled the ratings I’d be able to give you 5 stars zheese. This chapetr was great. I still think Helena needs to explain to Bette what she was doing with Tina is she really had a thing for her from get. Ugh Tina, what drama is she bringing to Bette’s office today?? And hello, maybe she could knock once in a while!
I am loving this story and your writing.
Ha! You can’t stop here. I can’t wait to see how Helena will hide Bette from Tina while doing it not that successfully.
I love this story, Two beautiful ladies,would be hard to choose. Can I have both? guess not. How will Helena get over Tina listening and tell her a lie.that she doesnt know her. Did Tina ever know Bette and her moods. Let her live her life with a male that will alway have a doubt about her. thanks
well, that was one great chapter, zheese… i’m sure helena looks good under the spray in the shower and her and bette even better, hopefully we’ll get to see this in the nearest time.. anyway, i can’t wait for them to go out together and as for tina, well, just let helena tell her everything and slap her a couple of times just so she knows what she lost (and can’t get back, at least in this story ;). great chapter, love your writing, please post soon.
Great chapter. I am not a Belena fan but your writing makes me a believer. Looking forward to your next post.
damn….that was good. bette and helena are so good together…it seems all too real…great job, looking forward to the next post!!!
Z, the way you’re writing B&H, there’s definitely chemistry between them. Can’t wait to see when Tina finds out. Tell her, Helena!! LOL. Great job. Looking forward to the next post.
excellent chapter, you had me awww-ing all the way through, so sweet n cute! cannot believe you stopped where you did though. Love it! cant wait for the next installment. thank you!
Looking forward to where you take this story next. Thanks for writing! I hear you about how the characters lead you in a certain direction…
Ha! I almost want Helena to tell her, just so Tina can realize she lost not one, but two unbelievably gorgeous women and she has ZERO chance of getting them back. :D lol. Can’t wait for more
You write so well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’re great!!!!!!!!! I love to read your stories!!!!
Great chapter, zheese. So love the interaction between the two gorgeous women ^_^ What’s Helena gonna tell Tina?
haha that Tina doesn’t have a clue!
oh please don’t leave us hanging too long, i’m not above begging!!!!