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    A Thin Line – 10

    Story written on April 24, 2006 by zheese.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60574
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    Helebette – Sunday night, Monday morning


    Previously

    She turned and looked at me and smiled. Then she smoothed my cheek with her hand as I closed my eyes to savor her gentleness. I clasped my hand around hers and moved her fingers to my lips, kissing their tips.

    "You were the one who asked me to make you come," she said softly.

    I smiled back at her. "This was just as good," I assured her.

    She rubbed the side of my face. I watched her eyes shine in the dancing candlelight.

    "You were so wonderful to me," Bette whispered.

    I kissed her. "It was my pleasure."

    Bette rolled over on top of me. She held my hands outstretched above my head. Her breasts pressed into mine, as she kissed me gently.

    "Mmm. And my pleasure too," she said as she drew her head back and smiled at me. I wanted to melt. "And the night’s just beginning. You did ask me to stay, didn’t you?" she asked, kissing me again.

    "Mm-hmm. All night," I said, my mouth smiling into hers.

    "Good. Because you were going to have a hard time getting rid of me, if not," Bette affirmed, licking my lips and continuing to kiss me.

    I didn’t say it out loud, but I thought to myself, ‘Now that I’ve finally got you where I want you, I have no intention of letting you get away.’


    Chapter 10


    When I turned my mouth away from Bette’s to catch my breath, she ravished my neck and an ear with her tongue, licking enthusiastically. Her breasts continued to press and to collide with mine. All the sensuality was sending me into a rapturous madness.

    She raised her head and slowly moved a hand away from mine. She looked into my eyes. I felt her fingers move down the bed sheets, stopping at the edge of my stomach as she pushed herself up.

    "I want you inside me, Bette," I whispered.

    Bette rolled onto her side, bringing me with her. We pressed close to one another. And the candlelight flickered across our naked forms.

    I ran my hand down her smooth skin and over her curves from her breast to her bottom. I massaged my foot up and down her silky legs.

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    2. Hey there, zheese! Helena’s right, Bette does know how to start off a morning. Love your writing, your dialogue and imagery … now, let’s see what it is that Helena’s hungry for! Oh, and I can’t wait to see Bette and Helena attending an art exhibit together, they’ll definitely be the most gorgeous works of art there. Thanks.. eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

    6. That was must have been mind bending for them zheese, in any number of ways. Besides the sex (they seemed to quite enjoy themselves), Helena has experienced a dream coming true (how often does that happen?), and Bette’s completely captivated by the one who’d been her nemesis up until the other day. Damn, maybe I just never hated anybody enough!

    7. oh how iv missed this story!! damn work gets in the way of everything important! hope it doesn’t keep you away for too long again, absolutely love this story and the way you write it. eagerly awaiting your next installment :)

    12. really it was worth the wait !… I just LOVE your writing and everything about this story… You captured Bette and Helena in the most realistic and sensual way there was.. Can’t wait to read your next post.

    15. We can only hope that next season comes close to your fabulous storyline. I mean, really. I WANT them together now! Looking forward to your next post.

    16. Zheese, Another breath-taking addition to this amourous and adorable adventure. The way that Bette and Helena have collided and realized their true feelings for one another has been beautifully constructed. The reality of this collison has left both parties overwhelmed and surprised. Their ability to please and pleasure each other was masterly painted. Every essence and moment has built to this union. I think that I too have been charmed by your astounding tale. Please continue soon and bring a little levity and light into my world. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.

    17. ok…maybe it’s all the wine that I’ve drank tonight but this is just a Beautiful/Hot,Hot/Beautiful beautiful/ written….dam!.I Just wanted you to know…

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